PUNISHMENTS (asya ss) part 2updated at page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

it was now a weak since dilshad had left khan villa for rashid . firstly asad was shattered but when he realised that he had been left by his same mother who is the most important person of his life he felt cheated .
asad self thought :ammi i won't come behind you this time .i am no one to come between your happiness but at the same time i cannot forgive that man for his deeds .
in sm dilshad was not treated well and she was also missing asad very much because he had not even tried to contact her in this whole weak .so she decided to dial zoya .
zoya :good morning phoophi .how are you .
dilshad :i am not fine beta .please try to make asad understand me .i want to talk to him .
then she started crying .
zoya ;i will try phoophi to make him see the reality .
zoya comes to the living room where asad was sitting dejectedly .
zoya :Mr. khan ,
please talk to phoophi one time .she is really missing you .
asad :why will she miss me now .
afterall she got all her happiness for which she had been deprived by me .
zoya :really Mr khan ,i haven't seen a more selfish person than you .you cannot see people getting happiness around you .
hurt by her outbursts asad
got angry too
asad :then what are you doing here with a selfish person like me zoya.
you should also go to your dearest phoophi .i do not need anyone .
she became enraged hearing this
zoya :actually you do not deserve anyone .i am leaving this house because it is really hard to even breathe here .
zoya packed her bags and went to sm .
precap :
scene 1
dilshad watching tv suddenly dropped her coffee.
news reporter :famous business tycoon asad ahmed khan met with an accident and said to be in critical situation .
scene 2
nazma shouting in hospital
i will not let you people see my bhaijaan at any conditionbecause he has told me to do so before going in coma .zoya and dilshad weeping there badly but nazma is unmoved by their pleas.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waah waah👏
Awesome ss...
Precap- asad met with an accident😲
Excited..
Continue soon..
and pm me dear friend😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I cant even imagine anything happening to ASAD 😭
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Wow...wonderful concept ...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesomeness...
m glad najma gave zoya n dilu hard time..
Hope asad gets well soon
Awesome story...contiue sooon
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woah loved it conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome its interesting
plzzz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh... woww... this is superb...!!!
and the precap is amazing...!
continue ASAP...
And pm me for the next update plzzz..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome yaar👏...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nic concept do continue soon and pm me whan u write next update

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