TS: Broken Beyond Repair COMPLETED! Last part on page 11!

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awesome zoya caught
everything... razia plan backfired...

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

amazing!! the dialogues are really powerful ...and zoya made me cry!!!
i am glad that you'll continue writing!!!
update soon

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: veenisha

loved it 👏

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thanks! 😳

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Rupali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mariam1368
awesome zoya caught
everything... razia plan backfired...

thank you! :)

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Rupali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
amazing!! the dialogues are really powerful ...and zoya made me cry!!!
i am glad that you'll continue writing!!!
update soon

omg really?I've never thought that I'd be able to write and it would affect people in such a way!
usually I just keep typing whatever comes in my mind and I'm so glad you liked it and it had a bigger affect than just being a story! thank you!

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Nice story
Plz PM me when u update next part
Thanks

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Very well written! Penning down feelings and inner thoughts can be very difficult, however, you not only manage to paint the picture, you tell a good story too.

Very emotional part. C'mon, Asad, heal your broken life, your broken Zoya. She needs you.

Much love
FaRz