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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks! I'm glad u liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prizi

Heart warming
made me cry


aww I'm sorry I made u cry! but I'm glad u enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

<font color="#0099cc">Absolutely a marvellous piece...</font>

<font color="#0099cc">Now how about placing yourself in asad shoes..</font>
<font color="#0099cc">Love to read his pov</font>


thank u! I am considering that! if I do write it, I'll try to have it up by today.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lover1998

Really nice and omg it was so emotional. I think you wrote it wonderfully great job.


thank you! I really appreciate it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yay! I'm glad u did!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Withmaaneet

You wrote it so beautifully👏..I loved it... Can I get one from asad POV too??


thanks! I'm thinking about writing one for Asad as well 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note: I've gotten many people asking me to do Asad's POV/response to Zoya's letter. So would you want his response to Zoya's letter and her leaving, or just how Asad felt when Zoya called him selfish and support him. maybe I could turn this into a short story if I write Asad's response, but with his POV of the situation, it would just be a TS. Phew that looks confusing! To make it clear you guys have a few options of what I should write

Asad's POV to the same situation (Two-Shot)

Asad's response to Zoya's letter (TS)

Asad and Zoya's back and forth letters (SS)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was wonderful dear..n very
emotional os..thanx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I would really like to read:

1) Asad's response to Zoya's letter (TS)

and

2) Asad and Zoya's back and forth letters (SS)

Please do one of these if you don't want to do both. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lover1998

<font color="#ff00cc">I would really like to read:</font>


<font color="#3300ff">1) Asad's response to Zoya's letter (TS)</font>

<font color="#ff00cc">and</font>

<font color="#0000ff"><font>2) Asad and Zoya's back and forth letters (SS)</font></font>
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</font>
<font color="#ff00cc">Please do one of these if you don't want to do both. :D</font>


alright thanks for ur response! I'll write a response first and based on the feedback ill see whether or not i should continue it

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