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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: veenisha

superb yaar

thanks! I'm glad u liked it!

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Prizi
Heart warming
made me cry

aww I'm sorry I made u cry! but I'm glad u enjoyed it

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rajnid68
Absolutely a marvellous piece...
Now how about placing yourself in asad shoes..
Love to read his pov

thank u! I am considering that! if I do write it, I'll try to have it up by today.

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: lover1998
Really nice and omg it was so emotional. I think you wrote it wonderfully great job.

thank you! I really appreciate it!

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Kriti--
loved it

yay! I'm glad u did!

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Withmaaneet
You wrote it so beautifully👏..I loved it... Can I get one from asad POV too??

thanks! I'm thinking about writing one for Asad as well 😃

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Note: I've gotten many people asking me to do Asad's POV/response to Zoya's letter. So would you want his response to Zoya's letter and her leaving, or just how Asad felt when Zoya called him selfish and support him. maybe I could turn this into a short story if I write Asad's response, but with his POV of the situation, it would just be a TS. Phew that looks confusing! To make it clear you guys have a few options of what I should write

Asad's POV to the same situation (Two-Shot)

Asad's response to Zoya's letter (TS)

Asad and Zoya's back and forth letters (SS)

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Maryam Hassan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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it was wonderful dear..n very
emotional os..thanx for d pm

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lover1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I would really like to read:

1) Asad's response to Zoya's letter (TS)

and

2) Asad and Zoya's back and forth letters (SS)

Please do one of these if you don't want to do both. :D

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: lover1998
I would really like to read:

1) Asad's response to Zoya's letter (TS)

and

2) Asad and Zoya's back and forth letters (SS)


Please do one of these if you don't want to do both. :D

alright thanks for ur response! I'll write a response first and based on the feedback ill see whether or not i should continue it