AsYa SS-The Distance Between Us- CHPT. 9&10 on pg.53 01/4/14 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome and cute update...šŸ‘šŸ¼ 😃

Just love it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
That 'My dimple. My Zoya. My everything.' line.

MADE.

ME.

SWOOON <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey that was so cute. I loved the "MY DIMPLE, MY ZOYA, MY EVERYTHING" It made me smile wider that what Zoya must have smiled.

Loved the update and please update soon. Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update!!
AsYa together & gonna get married soon!!!
Thanks 4 pm,
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Dear,
Its after a long break that I read this, three chapters in a row & it was wonderful reading them. I am so glad that finally all is settled between the duo. I really felt bad for Asad as he was dying in guilt & loneliness. I don't hold him responsible for it all because he hadn't realized Mark's intentions earlier than all the mishap, & then he did what he could to save her from further damage due to being connected with him but Mark's a moron, mean jerk, who ruined the life of an innocent just to make Asad pay. How low!
The flashbacks were really interesting to read. I mean, who could have thought that Asad harbored such strong feelings for her even
when she was his employee.
I hope Asad gets his hands on Mark & makes him get the deserving punishment.
Well, alls fine now that they are together. The last line by Asad "My Dimple. My Zoya. My Everything." just melted me. This guy is seriously so different from what his cold demeanor that he shows at the office.
Keep posting soon.
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is amazing n lovely...
luv it...
superb...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god that was lovely...i was all blushing while asad proposed...wow!ā˜ŗļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
little romance...bring the real love together..


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Super sweet update... Couldn't
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Dear,

Its after a long break that I read this, three chapters in a row & it was wonderful reading them. I am so glad that finally all is settled between the duo. I really felt bad for Asad as he was dying in guilt & loneliness. I don't hold him responsible for it all because he hadn't realized Mark's intentions earlier than all the mishap, & then he did what he could to save her from further damage due to being connected with him but Mark's a moron, mean jerk, who ruined the life of an innocent just to make Asad pay. How low!
The flashbacks were really interesting to read. I mean, who could have thought that Asad harbored such strong feelings for her even
when she was his employee.
I hope Asad gets his hands on Mark & makes him get the deserving punishment.
Well, alls fine now that they are together. The last line by Asad "My Dimple. My Zoya. My Everything." just melted me. This guy is seriously so different from what his cold demeanor that he shows at the office.
Keep posting soon.
Love..


Thank you...I think this story is my favourite from all that I've written...It makes me happy that you guys like it! And don't worry, Asad will take care of Mark šŸ˜‰

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