AsYa SS-The Distance Between Us- CHPT. 9&10 on pg.53 01/4/14

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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And then they had lots and lots (and I mean LOTS ;) *wink*) of adorable dimpled babies and lived happily ever after. :')

Oh, thank GOODNESS Asad was alright! Zoya was devastated. :'(

"And I love your dimple or should I say, my dimple." She giggled. "Just as your dimple is mines and we'd make cute little dimpled babies and-" she stopped talking realizing what she was saying but her self-consciousness wore off when he said, "Yes we would and I want plenty of those dimpled babies." She laughed.

^I just loved how you kept mentioning their dimpled babies. HAYE SO SWEET. AWWW.

And another one down! Will you be writing more stories for us, Candy? <3

LOVE! 🤗 I especially loved this story, for some reason. Idk why. :)

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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ankitabaran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Love it...i know you cannot be so cruel to give dead end to asad zoya love story...so atleast, end was good everything was good...thanks for pm...😛

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Javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

lovely update. Loved it.
It is one of the best ss. Banner is beautiful.
Keep writting :)

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

hey Dear,

This was Fantastic! You really had me there. the twist was cool but seriously heart wrenching.

I was hard to see Zoe like that when just few minutes back she was all ready & anxious about the upcoming joys & dimpled babies. Really glad he was safe.

I know this was ur first SS but it was really amazing. You've done a brilliant work. Do write more.

Love..

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Priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The Twist was heart wrenching
amazing update

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

I loved it totally

will miss the story a lot

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komalpreet kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wowww it is an awesome piece of work u truly nailed it👏 and I truly loved it😃 u scared the hell out of me by mentioning asad's accident in last update...god it was horrible keep up the gr8 work😃 god bless u love, Komal⭐️