AsYa SS-The Distance Between Us- CHPT. 9&10 on pg.53 01/4/14

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Nice update! 😃 I loved the flashback - that was written perfectly! 👏 👏

Ooh, that precap seems intense. But when are you gonna tell us what happened to Asad?! 😭😭

Continue soon, pwetty pwease? 😛

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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BlackNWhite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Flashback was fab
Bt wht hpn in precape
Update soon
Thnks fr pm

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

well written!! flashbacks were cute n sweet!!! but zoya is in so much pain...n so is asad!!!
get them out of this misery ...
continue soon
al d best for ur exams !!

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Nice update! 😃 I loved the flashback - that was written perfectly! 👏 👏

Ooh, that precap seems intense. But when are you gonna tell us what happened to Asad?! 😭😭

Continue soon, pwetty pwease? 😛

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

We'll learn why Asad did what he did in the next chapter which leads to Zoya-Asad confrontation 😉

Edited by cclove - 11 years ago

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Nice updates...Maybe Asad is frustrated by the distance between them.so he is acting that way!But he shud stop giving his ego more priority!Zoya is very hurt with his words...By seeing precap-maybe he came for her,but she is letting her anger on him nw!Update soon:)

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Maahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

beautifully written...
loved it,
really enjoyed while reading 👏

best of luck,,

ultimatum wowww

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

I LOVED IT GOOD LUCK FOR UR EXAMS THANX FOR THE PM AND CANT WAIT TO READ UR NEXT UPDATE😃

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

hope everything gets sorted between them

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Shau

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

You kept me hooked i cant wait for next update!

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Sonam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

wow...written so beautifully...👏
loved the way u described evrythng...specially the way it ws switched from present to flashback...
it ws so so beautiful and clean...
it becomes l'll tacky in switching between past & present cos thoda bhi idhar udhar hua to it messes up...
but hats off to u...👏

so lovely and beautiful...😊

coming to the story...its so so nice...its keeping me to an edge...😉

i am so busy wid my work...bt couldn't resist reading...

update soon...and thnks a lot fr the pm...😊