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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much guys for your lovely comments
i m sorry i could not reply to your comments as my exams has started but i read each and every comment and again i want to thank u all for always supporting me and loving my story...
and as my next paper is on 6th so i have some time...
so the good news is i will update 18th part today hope u guys enjoy reading that also..😉
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CHAPTER 18
in my ff asad = ksg

zoya : mr khan please tell me na where r we going ????
asad : i know miss farroqi ki apne patience word kabhi nahi suna but u shud try it to add it in your dictionary 😉
zoya : very funny 😡
then after half an hour drive they finally reached to asad's favorite place...
asad : come(they went holding hand in hand)
zoya was shocked plus surprised she had never seen such a beautiful place...the whole patch of land was filled with red roses...and near the land their was a beautiful lake...
zoya : mr khan...its sooo beautiful
asad : u know miss farroqi mujhe bachpan se hi gardens ka bahut shok tha...mai ammi ko bolta tha k ek din mera khudka garden hoga jisme mai bahut sare roses lagaunga...toh ammi aur abbu ne mujhe yeh land gift kiya tha...aur uske kuch din baad mr rashid ahmed khan ne hame chod diya...aapko pata hai miss farroqi ammi ne raat din mehnat karke hamme badda kiya hai...mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai ammi mere har birthday pe mujhe ek rose plant gift karti thi voh bhi bahut mehnat karke fir mai aur ammi yaanh aake usse lagate thee...ammi mujhe hamesha inke values bata ti thi zoya yeh sirf roses nahi hai meri ammi ki mehnat aur unka pyaar hai...mai jab bhi upset hota hu toh mai yahan aa jata hu...yahan aake i feel like heaven...
zoya started crying after hearing his story...
asad : why r u crying ??
zoya : i love u asad (she hugged him tightly) and thanks for making me important in your life...
asad : u will always be zoya and wait u called me asad !!!! wow...see the magic of this place 😉
zoya : ya (and she giggled)
asad : zoya maine apne life mai bahut sari deals jeti bohut sari companies ko take over kiya par itni khushi mujhe kabhi nahi milli jitni mujhe yahan aake milti hai
zoya : becoz mr khan love is not a deal and these roses r symbol of your's and phupi's love
asad : and now ours too😉
he showed her a rose plant which has to be planted...
zoya : yeeehhh...(she started clapping like a small kid)
asad went and came back bringing a showel
zoya : allah miya whats wrong with u mr khan !!!! aap toh aise kar rahe hai jaise hamme eek tree lagana ho...its just a small rose plant
asad : what do u mean ???
zoya :(she snatches the shovel) we can dig a small hole from our hands too
asad : what ??? no ways i am not going to spoil my hands
zoya : yes we are...and thats my wish and u promised that u will fulfill all my wishes today
asad : ok fine...thank god birthday saal mai ek hi din ata hai
zoya : mr khan 😡(and she threw some soil on asad)
and they started throwing the soil to each other (typical asya 😆)
and then the planted the rose plant
zoya : done...its the symbol of our love...mr khan kitna beautiful haina...
asad : just like u
zoya just rubbed her hand with her cheek jiske wajahse soil zoya k cheek par lag gayi
asad saw it and he went very close to zoya...
zoya : mr khan voh...voh...
asad just gently rubs his hand on her cheek to remove the soil and kisses zoya's lips softly
asad : we should go home now...raat ho rahi hai
zoya was so dumbstruck
zoya : ya...ya...we should...home...come lets go
they went to home and asad was happy sharing his important part of life to zoya...

everything was falling in place as planned by asad...
they came home and zoya saw some lights in backyard but before she can go asad came in front of her
asad : miss farroqi...voh mai...miss farroqi mai chahta hu ki aap yeh sari pehenke bahar aye...please(blue saree with black border)
zoya: thanku so much mr khan...its beautiful...i will surely wear it but first let me see the backyard... i can see some lights in backyard but when again she sees it ...it was dark...
asad : come on zoya kuch bhi...dekho its so dark...now go wear it and come...
zoya comes wearing the saree and was excited to show it to her mr khan but he was not there . she again saw lights coming from backyard...
the whole backyard was decorated with light blue ribbions and blue balloons on the ground,blue lightings (blue = zoya's favorite color)their was a stage, round tables and chairs like a function was going to be held
as soon as she goes to the backyard everyone starts shouting happy birthday to u
humera , ayan , nikhat , farhaan ,najma , dilshaad : surprise
zoya's eyes filled with tears
she ran to asad and kissed his cheek in excitement and she forgot that everyone was looking at her...
everyone giggled and asya were hell embarressed

zoya : thank u all...
dilshad : happy birthday bacha(and she hugs her tightly)and u r looking beautiful
zoya : thank u phupi
humera : happy birthday baji...hope u always remain happy
zoya : (zoya pulls humera's cheeks) thank u princess
ayan : HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U
U ARE BORN IN THE ZOO
WITH ELEPHANTS AND TIGERS AND MONKIES LIKE U..
zoya : thank u bandar(monkey)
najma : happy birthday zoya...and i wish mujhe jald se jald meri bhabi mil jaye
zoya blushes
zoya : thank u najma
everyone settles down
humera goes to the stage
humera : so this special dance is just for my baji
humera dances on "desi girl" of dostana movie 😉
zoya : wohooo...awesome princess...
after her dance everyone clapped for humera
ayan went to the stage with a mike
ayan : kya baat hai humera begam...yeh hunar toh maine kabhi dekha hi nahi hunera...
humera : mera naam humera hai
ayan : ok hunera...vaise bhi itna attitude dene ki zaroorat nahi hai mai tumse zyada acha dance karunga
humera : lets see
everyone started laughing seeing there antics
humera comes to zoya
humera : bagi maine kaisa dance kiya
zoya : bahut acha...aur kyu nahi karogi aakhir choti behen kisski hai
humera : aapki (and they both hugged)
and everyone was confused
humera : bagi mujhe unki choti behen manti hai aur mai unhe apni badi behen manti hu
ayan : hunera begam agar aapki senti lines ho gayi ho toh kya mai apna dance mona darling ko dedicate kar sakta hu ???
humera : pehli baat mera naam humera hai...dusri baat aap meri baji ko darling mat bolo...asad jiju ko acha nahi lagega haina jiju
everyone laughed at her innocence and asad just nodded
ayan : bhaijaan ko ya aapko...and he ran
humera : u 😡 just wait n watch aapki band kese bajti hai
ayan had decided to dance on " batameez dil " and he took his postion to dance but suddenly to song started sheela ki jawani😆
I know you want it but you never gonna get it
Tere haath kabhi na aani
Maane na maane koi duniya yeh saari, mere ishq ki hai deewani

Hey you, I know you want it but you never gonna get it
Tere haath kabhi na aani
Maane na maane koi duniya yeh saari, mere ishq ki hai deewani
Ab dil karta hai haule haule se, main toh khud ko gale lagaun
Kisi aur ki mujhko zaroorat kya, main toh khud se pyaar jataun
(what's my name, what's my name, what's my name)
My name is Sheela
Sheela ki jawani
I'm too sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani
Na na na sheela
Sheela ki jawani
I'm too sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani...
ayan : what the hell is this ??
everyone started laughing like a mad dogs
ayan : i m not going to dance on this !!!😡
humera to zoya : baji...tell him to dance on this song na 😆
ayan : humera ki bachi...i knew it yeh tunne hi kiya hoga
zoya : mr khan please tell him to dance like a girl in this song please its my wish mr khan...😆
ayan : no ways mona...this is black mailing...
asad : ayan its just a dance do it otherwise remember mr mukka ahmed khan 😉😆
ayan : bhai jaan this is pure wala black mailing and if its just a dance u also do it na
zoya : ya perfect...donno bhai ek sath...please mr khan...
asad : r u mad ???? i think u have lost it...not even in my dreams!!
zoya : (making puppy face) please mr khan this is my last wish i promise...please
nikhat, najma, nuzat : please bhaijaan...we promise haam kissi ko nahi batayenge...please
zoya : last wish...please..please...
asad : ok fine...but just a little bit
zoya : dance like katrina... ok...😆😉
asad : zoyaaa 😡
zoya : ok...ok..sorry...now go...bomb phodu performance dena
asad rolled his eyes and went
the song again started " sheela ki jawani"
asad and ayan danced like katrina 😆🤣
everyone wooted and where laughing like anything
asad and ayan came to there places
zoya :(while laughing)this is the best dance i have ever seen...
humera : the best
zoya : i wish i could give u a dupatta while dancing it would be perfect
and she again started laughing and gave a high- five to humera
asad and ayan : haas lo hamere bhi diin ayenge
dilshad : mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha k mera beta itna achi ladki ban sakta hai 😆
asad : ammi aap bhi na 😡
najma : seriously bhaijaan u were to good 😉
asad : tamatar 😡
humera : ok...ok...its now time for our favorite couple dance
asad and zoya came to the stage
and the song started mere haath from the movie fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho... (2)
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho

Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Panaah Mil Jaaye
Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye
Jitne Paas Hain Khushbu Saans Ke
Jitne Paas Hothon Ke Sargam
Jaise Saath Hain Karvat Yaad Ke
Jaise Saath Baahon Ke Sangam
Jitne Paas Paas Khwaabon Ke Nazar
Utni Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan
Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho...and so on...
asad held zoya hands at a distance, and pulled her towards him, and she fell on him,.. and he held her closely in his arms, and swayed a bit, and twirled her, and then arrested her in between his hands...zoya back to asad back...and asad breathing in zoya neck...his breathe was creating a havoc inside her.. .. then he realized her from his arms, but hands were still holding her hands..and he swayed her to his left... and then to his right... zoya was just a puppet in asad hands... . he twirled her round and round.. and bent her down... holding on to her waist... Asad hands in zoya waist... Was doing it own dance there...and then he pulled her up... and held her close to him. And pulled both zoya hands to his neck, and held her in her waist... And just swayed...
and they both were into each other that they forgot the surrounding...
ayan : wowww...too good...i never saw this part of u bhaijaan...so intence...so naughty...
everyone giggled...
asad and zoya come into there senses and were embarressed
asad : ayan😡
and soon all the couples started dancing with their partners...
dilshad was sitting and enjoying
dilshad to herself : ya allah mere bacho k khushiyo ko hamesha salamat rakhana...

after their dancing and ayan and zoya stupid shayari's session
asad : cake cutting time
zoya before cutting the cake
zoya : thank u mr. khan.. this was the best birthday i ever had...
aaj meri sari wishes puri ho gayi
asad : aab se aap ka har birthday itna hi special hoga...i promise...
ayan : aab aap dono love birds ki baate ho gayi ho toh please mona jaldi cake katto...i can hardly wait...
she cuts the cake...and they all eat
zoya : whats in the dinner ???
asad : diet coke and extra large pizza's
zoya : yipeee...u r the best...love u(and she hugs him)...oops sorry(she says to asad)
everyone : what ???
asad : ya...we will try to eat that what zoya usually eats and survive on it...
ayan : bhai jaan aap toh puure change ho gaye...zoya k pyaar mai pagal ho gaye...😉
humera : sab apki tarah nahi hote
zoya : stop both of u and lets eat...mera pizza mujhe bula raha hai...yummy
and she starts dancing and jumping...

precap : new entry, propose and lots more


phewww
hey guys...hope u like it
such a long update...u have to bear it 😉😆
next update promise there will be new entry

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Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yipee yey i m first !!!!
m i dreaming i m first to comment this time
so regarding the update
it was awesome
u rock it girl !!!
the rose garden was so romantic and magical i loved it
and the birthday surprise so sweet i just love this asad
i just love zoya and humi bond😳
and this ayan is so funny😆
humi was jealous when ayan was calling zoya mona darling aww how sweet 😳😆
asad and ayan dancing like katrina omg i want to see it happening 😆🤣
then the couple dance was awesome👏
i loved it
asad planned diet coke and pizza for dinner i love this asad so much that i want to hug him😳
awesome !!!! awesome !!!! awesome update
please please continue soon 😉


Edited by angle_eyes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very good part

And thank you for this long udapte

Continue soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
great part
lovely update
asad and ayaan in shiela ki jawani avatar 😆
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for late res


its awesome yaar👏👏

lovely garden romance asya😳😳

and the ayan and asad dance just hilorious😆😆

loved ut😊😊

waiting for next😃
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...👏

Love asya garden romance...😊

Precap looks intresting...😊

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it esp the rose garden n then the party waiting for the new entry,
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it... awesome job... continue soon...

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