AsYa SS: Please Forgive me Zoya {pt8 pg91 1/8} updated

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Hey nice update. Loved the way Asad is trying to convince her for forgiveness n to go back.
Zoya should tell him about the baby.

The story is shaping up well. Please don't stop here. Please do continue n pm me for the next part.

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

nice update
i know zoya wont forgive him easily
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Simi

@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Yay! An update!

And a mighty good one, Zoe!

What Asad did was indeed very wrong and Zoya has every right to shun him out of her life and never want to talk to him or see his face every again, however attracted she still might be to him, but it is plain wrong to keep a child away from his father!

She is feeling guilty about that too, because she knows how it feels to not have that and she has craved her father's presence in her life. I don't think she can keep such a big thing from him. Its almost cruel, if you ask me!

And knowing Asad, I have a feeling, Zoya's revelation, when it happens, is not going to be accepted nicely?

It is very harsh to let someone believe that their baby did not survive! And Asad always acts before he thinks, so...Zoya should brace herself. Although the baby revelation is most likely to happen inadvertently, right? He is going to see the baby, or hear the wail or something!

Please don't let Asad hate her for that!

You are amazing and I wish you get your muse back and hop back on the writing train! 🤗

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Awesome update... Loved it!! :)

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

it was amazing!!
now i got it!! zoya is hiding the baby truth because she thought asad is there to take the baby away!!!! omg...
u wrote the whole asya convo beautifully !!!
please continue it...asap ..