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Fatema

@DoremonLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Plzzz do write a new ff soonn plzzz I just luv ur work n I'm sad it ended

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

finally rashid died felt sad for him and baby asad he is soo broken
u just ended this story i am literally sry i am actually feeling so sad
u r update refreshes my mind after stressful day
i hav no words to talk about update
plz continue writing

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

That was an awesome update !!!!

i really didn't expect Rashid's death at all !!!

well i'm glad to see that Zoya could make Asad share his feelings with her !

like always i loved their littles fights 😆😆😆

'He was never like this, we were also a happy family but he made me hate everything.' He said and she felt relieved that he is sharing his feelings.

'Whenever they fought they used to yell that they are regretting because of this marriage and are bound because of me and Najma.' She heard him saying. This wasn't anything new to her, he had told her this thing many times before and she understood very well how much he was hurt with those words.

i almost cried ready this part

you so well said that when parents say that they are still bond due to children only , it really hurts !

but i guess that they don't realize how much it does

loved Zoya saying : don't forget your wallet next time

and it is Asad who is supposed to be bossy 😆😆

I really liked your ff ! 👏

sad that is ending 😭

well it's said that all good things comes to an end !

i would really be glad to read more if you decide to write another one !

so do sure pm me if you do ! 😉

ps : one of my favourites scenes is when Asad fights the goons and that Zoya tells him to stop if he loves her and he does stop !!

Edited by zola007 - 11 years ago

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Amazing ending...loved it so so so much🤗...but that was the end😭...btw when r u planning to start writing the sequel??😉😉...will be eagerly waiting for it or anything else u write😳😳...don't forget to pm me😃

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Good update. So finally it ended.

My favorite scene was AsYa romancing in the bathroom. 😳

Hope to see you with the new story soon. Good luck and all the best.

Thanks for keeping us entertained. Don't forget to PM me when you start the new story.

Bye,

Vinita

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

No you ended the beautiful ff. I am sad.

Ok my most favorite scene was when Asad beat those four goons for harming zoya and then how zoya stopped him.

Please start something new super soon. I am addict to read your stories.

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

thank u for such a wonderful ff
u r an amazing writer
my fav was the challenge she had wit
him and how she caved in after...haha
also the last chapter is awesome.
nice ending
do write more in the future

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Surbhibornstar
Awesum update it ws a gud end so wn wil strt ua nxt ff wana read more n i must say d bst ting in u is u update evri day vich is lovely plz do rite again its a request

Thank You 😳

I am planning to write a sewuel to this one but that would be coming next week !!

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: manognasai
Awesome and cute ending!👏
Loved it!
Yes as expected u killed Rashid!😆
Loved the way Zoya brought him out of his thoughts and their long walk!⭐️
And their future plans and conditions!😃
I actually loved every update of this story!
But I think pillow fight scene is the best!Bcoz when Asad entered again after he left her,thats the first cute fight!❤️That day I was really lost in some other world reading it!It was so cute...😛
And their mid-night walk and Asad's lame bahana's that they are playing hide n seak and Zoya hid behind him only!😆
And I love the update in which Zoya is in problem and Asad saves her!Best was again when Zoya says stop beating him if u love me and suddenly Asad comes back!⭐️
Now Im eagerly waiting for sequel!
Love U for this FF🤗