AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling (suspended) #2 *Note* 3/12/13 Pg 26 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Amazing update

My akdu z back...

HOpefully zoya gt job at asad offc

FAb update dear

Akdu can't leave...not until he realizes his folly.
Thanks for the comments😃
Edited by QueenOfMyCastle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! This story is just awesome :))
Waiting for the next part 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part.
Awsm part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 11 years ago
uh oh
the angry ahmed khan!
and zoya is going there? bechari..or not😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Huh..phir say...

Par iss bar asad galat time par ghar aa gaya...
Phuphi..bani mrs khan...
Asad ruta..zoya mananay gayi..
Ab kya..
Thanks for this awesome update and for the pm

Yes Baby...phir se...sowie...but that's how they will get to know each other na...thodi takraar, thoda pyaar.

thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

Awesome update.. 👏 Loved it.. ❤️
I knew that there is something between Najma-Azam..Hope that Asad will be fine with their decision..😕
Zoya teasing Dilshad.. 😳 Ohh no not again Mr.Khan came on wrong time.. 😲
Dilshad bani Female Mr.Khan 😆
Now Zoya going to talk with Asad.. 😕
Hope that he'll not hurt her by his words..
Wonderful update..
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM..


-Mariam-

Asad will not find out for a long time 😆
Mr. Khan's timing is just perfecto...😆
Thanks honey
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: juggaad

You know what I admire about your story. It is so normal. So real life like. Azam is adorable! I love that character!

Thanks dear...I prefer stories without too much fluff and make believe...lol.

I love Azam too...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: me2you

Char baj gaye lekin party abhi baaki hain...

Well actually not char but do baj gaye hain and yes the party is still on! Iss liye comment toh banta hai boss!!!
Is baar sorry ki baari meri hai...took me forever to respond to PMs
Chapter 23
I want to give us a chance (Oh so nice she wants to give him a chance. Lekin yeh banda hain kaun?)
Like u have not figured it out yet???
life changing decision he has made (Ab kya hai? This guy...I tell you!!!)
He is totally nautanki...lol
Zoya as usual played the clown (Hahaha, really clown...) 😆
she is...u know they say na, clowns are the unhappiest people ever...😉
I know, Hrithik! (Sorry that man is already taken...by me) 😉
whatever😆
guzarne (If I am not wrong the Urdu word for this is 'inteqal'...not sure though)
arrey yaar...I need this part proofread but u were gone and I did not want to wait for too long...sowie
lagaw (not sure if there is an Urdu word for this...)
jaane do ab ho gaya
"Yeh kaise behood sawaal hai? Yeh koi tareeka hai apni ammi ki umr ki aurat se baat karne ka? (OOPS, trouble...!!!)
ofcourse...no love story is straight forward is it???
din (maybe 'roz')
yes
dheere dheere (I know that in Urdu and my language we use 'aahista aahista' but that can maybe differ in context)
yes
khamakha ('bewaja'???)
yes
could turn into a female Mr. Khan too (That's why I like Dilshaad ammi)
Me too😳
Agar abbu hote to bahot kuch alag hota ammi (Ouch...kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai ke abbu hote huye bhi, abbu nahin hain)
Agreed. AAK ke jaise...QH wale.
allah (Allah with a captial A)
missed it
Off to the Lion's den then (be careful, Zoya)
yes please be careful

Good to see back Rivs! Now, I really want to know who this guy is that Najma is in love with. Aur yeh Azam kya discuss karna chahte hain? Most complicated and complex character 😆
I really liked the light hearted convo among Zoya, Dilshaad and Najma. Very much needed after the investigation and Najma's sad love story in the previous chapter.
Just when I thought things were going good between Mr. Khan and Zoya, he comes into the picture and has to hear that out of all other things... Now I am waiting for his reaction (maybe an outburst on Zoya?)
Thanks dear...yes I wanted a light hearted scene too...I think the next confrontation will be the last one between Asad and Zoya...well I will try. Theek hai?
Thanks Rivs for the update! This story has a hell lot of mysteries, please resolve one! 😛
See Najma I think is practically resolved...

P.S. Bahot dinho baad, I had to use my Urdu guru skills. Just a few suggestions. Hope I was not too harsh on you 😳
no worries...Thanks for the comments

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Posted: 11 years ago

Stalkersss alert! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
This FF is going really good. Plz update soon n pm me also

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