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Originally posted by: ABBY92

AWWHHH, That was such a sweet way to surprise Asad and Zoya and seriously, no better day for them to be engaged than the first day they met each other. Looks like Karan is also gonna admit his feelings to Najma, can't wait !!

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Suprise was superb.. Update soon

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GREEN ROOM


"Kaho?" Said Najma expectantly.

"All i wanna say was...that...i wanted to say...that...i...that...actually...it is like...mai kehna chahta tha...ki...vo mai...actually" Stammered Karan.



HALL


All the people had started retiring to thier homes as the engagement was done. Asad & Zoya always a short and sweet engagement! Thats what they got!

"Kiara! Listen na" said Rida comming towards Kiara.

"Karan & Najma love each other" said Rida excited.

"WHAT THE HECK?" Kiara exclaimed.

"I am serious! Karan is just gonna propose her! I need your little help in this! Please!" Said Rida expectantly.

"Par how can you be so sure about Najma? I mean they are just friends! Andd..andd..." Said Kiara.

"How Karan explained me his side anyone can know that he loves her amd she loves him back! She will say yes! Pleasee i need a little help" said Rida.

"Okaay! If this happens it would be so cool! They would look so cute together" exclaimed Kiara.

"Very very cute" said Rida.

Rida had put a camera secretly in the green room where Karan was supposed to propose. All the guests had left but Kiara had yet kept the family in the hall. Rida switched on the projector which sometime back were showing Asad & Zoya's pics. Rida connected it in such a way where the family could see Karan & Najma on the screen.

"Tum kya kar rai ho? Tumne vaha cemeras lageye? Apne bhai ki kuch toh sochti?" Said Kiara now worried.

"Uski fikr hai issliye toh ye sab kiya! Mera bhai jitna bhi tough apne aap ko dikhaye usse Najma ke bhai ko ye bata nai pata kyunki vo Zoya ke fiance hai aur Zoya se issliye kyunki vo Asad se baat karegi! Iski vajah se agar Asad & Zoya ke beech problems aaye toh Karan kabhi muh nai kholega! Isse accha yahaan ho baat khatam ho jaye" explained Rida.

"Life is complicated" exclaimed Kiara

"Very" replied Rida.

"Does Karan know theres a camera?" Asked Kiara.

"No" replied Rida casually.

"What if theyy... After the confession...youu knoww..get cozy?" Asked Kiara not yet conviced with the idea.

"Najma is traditional girl and Karan knows that & Respects that! Vo mera bhai hai jitna apne aap ko cool dude dikhata hai utna hi Sensitive bhi hai! Usse philhaal sirf Najma ke jawab se matlab hai" replied Rida confidently.

"Lets see now" replied Kiara worried.

The whole family could now see Karan & Najma with each other. They even heard Karan stammering a little which added to their curiosity.



GREEN ROOM


"Karan ek hi cheez languages badal badal ke mat bolo! Kaho na jo kehna chahte ho! Pleasee!" Said Najma.

"Seee...Najma...partner...meri permanent partner banogi?" Said Karan the last line quickly.

"I thought hamari partnership permanant hi hai" said a confused Najma.

"I mean meri life partner banogi?" Said Karan frustated with himself a little loudly.

Tears flowed off Najma's eyes.

"I love you Najma! I agree i was a casanova kind off but i have bow fallen head over heals for you! I wanna share my everything with you my life, my food which is my second love after you ofcourse, my happiness, my sorrows just everything! I know i may be not the dream guy you have always dreamt of but i will definaltely try to be one! I really love you! Yeh vo timepass wala pyaar nai hai partner ye sachha wala hai! Mai tumhara boyfriend bannke tumhe pamper karna chahta hoon, tumhara fiance bann ke tumhe tease karna chahta hoon, tumhara husband bann ke apni life tumhare saath share karna chahta hoon, aur jab hum bhuudhe ho jaye tumhare saath hamare baacho ke bhaacho ko khilna chahta hoon! My feeings towards you are pure, and really strong! Please apni zindagi mein muje thodi so jagah de do?" Said Karan finally able to speak up.

Tears kept on flowing out of Najma's eyes. She was unable to just answer.



HALL


Here, Zoya was also in tears. She had never seen Karan so serious. She could see the true love in Karan's eyes. She was touched.

While Asad burned with anger. He stood up to go to the green room.

"Mr. Khan ek baar ke liye bhool jayye ki Najma aapki behan hai! Sirf unn dono ki aakhon mein dekhiye! Aapko sachha pyaar nazar aayega!" Said Zoya.

"Karan ko badi mehnat se maine confess karne ko manaya tha kyunki vo nai chahta tha ki uske pyaar ki vajah se aap dono ke beech problems ho issliye maine ye sab kiya" said Rida to Asad.

"Najma baachi hai!" Exclaimed Asad.

"Aapke liye Mr. Khan! Vo badi ho chuki hai Mr. Khan! Aur ye baat aap bhi jaante hai ki Karan ek bahut aacha ladka hai!" Said Zoya.

"Najma sirf ro rai hai! Ussne koi jawab nai diya! Vo choti hai! Usse kisi se pyaar kaise ho sakta hai?" Said Asad being stubborn.

"Jaise aapko mujse hai Mr. Khan" said Zoya finally and asked him to look at the screen where Najma was about to say something.



GREEN ROOM


"I dont know what to say Karan" said Najma finally.

" are'nt the feelings mutual?" Said Karan tears flowing off his eyes too.

"I...i...dont know" said Najma stamering.

Karan looked down in defeat. Tears constantly flowing from his eyes. He had many break ups before but never cried for any! He had no value for them! But right now he was affected. Very affected!

"Agar uss do din ki mulakat ke baad se maine tumhe as partner accept karliya. Do din ki malakat mein muje lagne laga ki mai tumhe aache se jaanti hoon! Mahine bhaar tumse roz baat ki! Yahaan aane ki baat sabse pehle tumhe batayi! Tumhare muje New York ghumane ke baare bhool jane par muje jaise ek sui ne choob liya tha! Bhaijaan ke baad sirf tum ho jiske saath rehte muje kisi baat ka kabhi darr nai hota! Agar isse pyaar kehte hai toh haa Karan mai tumse bahut zyaada pyaar karti hoon" accepted Najma.



HALL


Asad & Dilshad's heads turned back hearing the innocent confession.

"I told you Kia" said Rida with happy tears.

"Yepp" replied Kiara.

"Mr. Khan now what you have to say about this? Najma is not a kid! She loves Karan and i have'nt seen such a sincere Karan everr!! He loves Najma from the bottom of his heart. I know him & his family since chidhood. Vo bahut aache log hai Mr. Khan hamari Najma princess bann ke rahegi! Trust me Mr. Khan! Apni possesiveness ki vajah se apni behan ke sapne mat todna!" Explained Zoya to Asad & Dilshad at the same time.

"Aapko sach mein lagta hai ye sahi hai?" Asked Asad to the point.

"Jee haan! Waise toh hum bhi bilkul alag hai! Haina phuphi? Pleaase phuphi!! Dono ka dil na todna!" Said Zoya tears in her eyes.

"Karan ek aacha ladka hai par aise achaanak?" Dilshad finally spoke up.

"Pyaar toh aisehi hota hai na phuphi?" Said Zoya.

"Haan! Par yehi baat Karan ko hamare saamne admit karni padegi!" Said Dishad firmly.

"Haa haa kyun nai?" Said Rida.

"Thik hai! Muje bhi Karan aur Najma se ye baat sunni hai" Asad agreed.

"I love you both!" Saying Zoya hugged Asad & Dilshad.



GREEN ROOM


Karan looked up at Najma as if not able to believe his ears. Karan hugged Najma tightly to which Najma responded happily! Both of them cried in each others arms finally feeling the feeling of true love! <3
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awesome update
seriously pyaar to aise hi hota hai
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Yep a very quick update haha
It was awesome
Continue soon
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super!!!
wat a cute confession karan...im so lattoo on you!☺️
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Lovely update
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