AsyaTS~ Misunderstanding the Misunderstandings~ updated pg 5(12/11/13) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow that was amazing dear...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very well written
Omg zoya always finds stupid reasons to be angry at asad
Awesome
Thanks for d pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its nice..update and pm me
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Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Awesome TS..👏
Very well written aashka...
Continue soon.. Its really interesting




thnx so sooo sooo much...!! 😃 nd m glad u lyked it...! 😳


aashka
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Originally posted by: princess101

VERY NICE THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃



m glad u lyked it..!

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Originally posted by: aksasya

Wow that was amazing dear...pls continue soon...



m glad dat u lyked it...!!



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Awesome love it please update soon
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very nice👏👏👏 Loved it❤️
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The third and the final part:
the sari which zoya is wearing:
http://www.southindiafashion.com/2013/08/red-and-black-saree.html

Zoya was silent on her way home and on reaching the house she went immediately to her room only to be shocked...!!

she was even more shocked when she felt a pair of arms cuddle into her back and kiss her on her cheeks...!

Asad: toh miss farooqui kaisa laga mera gift...??

Zoya: Toh aapko yaad tha mera birthday...??!! OMG...!! (saying this she hugs him tight making him stumble a little)

Asad: Of course...! Agar chahun toh bhi nahin bhool pataa...!! Par aaj ka din tha hi bohot special...!

Zoya: Obviously Mr. Khan...! Afterall mera budday jo hai...!!

Asad: Wrong..! Ms. Highly Self-Obsessed..! (zoya looks at him shocked and was about to retort to which he smirks and keeps his finger on her mouth)

Aaj ka din bohot tha special kyunki aaj aapko itna irritated aur frustrated dekhne main kabhi pehle itna mazaa nahi aaya...!!

Saying this he moves away from her into the living room... After which she takes of after him and they are chasing each other in the hall... she throws whatever she can get her hands on...

After a nice session off work out they both slumped onto the sofa..

Asad: Ms. Farooqui ab aap room mein jaakar mera gift kholkar mujhe pehenkar dikhaye aur baaki saari gifts baad mein dekhlena...(zoya is excited) aapki iss stupid si Misunderstanding ki vajah se mera surprise nearly spoil ho jataa...! Ya allah..! Kya karun inka mein!!(She pouts and gives him an angry look) Par aapki iss pagalpan se hi pyaar karta hun aur mein nahi chahta ki aap kabhi bhi apne aap ko badle...!

Zoya gives him a small peck on his cheeks and runs off leaving a dreamy asad behind...

But only to be cut off from his dreamland when he hears a scream from zoya's room... Scared and tensed runs to zoya's room asking her to open the door...

Asad: Zoya, darvaza kholiye...! Aap theek toh hai na...??? Kya hua..?

Zoya: Allah miya..! What's wrong with you Mr.Khan...?!! Mujhe shaanti se taaiyar bhi nahi hone dete...! Aur mujhe kya hoga..? Mein toh bilkul theek hun..!!!

Asad: Ya allah..! aapne toh aapki cheekh se daraa hi diya tha mujhe..! Aapne chillaya kyun? aur shaanti ki baat aap na Karen toh behtar rahega..! Aap aur shaanti... Barf aur aag ki tarah hain..! Aapki so called "shaanti" ki vajah se mujhe aapne disturb kiya...!

Zoya: Allah miya..! Main toh bas aapki gift dekh kar khush hui!! Aur aap kya so rahe the ki maine aapko disturb kiya...?? ek minute... aap kisi ladki ke bare main toh nahi soch rahe the na Mr. Khan...??!! Kya hai uska naam..? Haan "Shamira" (zoya said trying to make her name sound like a piece of shit)

Asad trying his best to control his laughter as zoya had opened the door...

Asad: Main so nahin raha tha par haan ladki ke bare mein hi soch raha tha...

Zoya: Aapki himmat kaisi hui kisi aur ladki ke baare mein sochne ki..? Kaun hai voh chudail...? Mera naam bhi zoya nahi agar main uss chudail ko maar na daalun..!! Boliye Mr. Khan...??!

Asad: Bechari ko itna "pyaar" se mat bulaiye... Aur haan voh "chudail" ka naam hai Zoya Farooqui...!!

Zoya: Allah miya...! Jaaiye Mr. Khan ...! Main aapse baat nahin karungi...! nd turns away...

Asad comes close to her and wraps his hands around her waist saying sorry and giving small kisses on her neck... Zoya tries to protests only to have Mr. Khan wrap his hands around her tighter...

She finally decides to give in to him cuz firstly she cannot stay angry wid him for long and secondly she couldn't wait to get into that stunning cum gorgeous sari which he had gifted...!

Zoya: Chodiye mujhe Mr. Khan aur haan maine aapko maaf kar diya..!

She finally goes into the room and wears the sari... she is shocked when she sees that it is completely backless on a dori attached to it at the top and nothing else...

She puts minimal make -up and after brushing through her hair once steps out of the room into the hall only to see the hall completely decorated ... there was a note saying that follow the path with the red rose petals.. she had never felt so loved and happy and was wondering.. life is soo strange i mean ek hi din main itna saare feelings...??! she reaches the backyard and is spellbound to see the decorations...

But is shocked when she sees maulvi sahib entering into the garden... she tries to look around for asad but cannot see him anywhere when suddenly najma(she is not yet married), humeira, nuzzat come upto her and take her to the place...

she is nervous since she is wearing a backless blouse that too in front of maulvi sahib and is shocked when she sees asad seated on the mattress opposite to hers... she slowly understands that today is their nikaah... she looks at asad only to see him staring at her nervously as if to gauge her reaction...

She then understands that he is nervous cuz he juz sprang this upon her without her permission...

So she gives him an assuring smile and only then she could see was he relaxed...

The rituals of the nikaah finally took place and the maulvi sahib declared them as husband and wife... zoya's happiness knew no bounds cuz today was double celebrations.. firstly her budday and secondly her day of marriage...! Asad only had eyes for zoya and was also happy..! once the maulvi sahib left the siblings left no stone unturned in teasing them...! Everyone wished zoya on her birthday giving her their gifts for their nikaah as well...

Only when dilshaad decided that they needed to be left alone did the siblings calm down...

When zoya was sent into the room, she was mesmerised by its beauty.. d entire room was candle-lit and flower petals were showered on their bed , and on the floor in the heart shape was written Happy Birthday and A married life Zoya..!

Soon her jahapanah six packs entered only to see her waiting for him near the window... it was only then did he see her fully... and started to gaze at her lovingly... he comes near her and back hugs her and says so Mrs. Khan...? Happy birthday! Aur kaise lagi meri gift..?

Zoya: I love this gift..! main kitni kush hun mai nahi bataa sakti...!

Asad: aap bas gift se pyaar karti hai..?

Zoya: Of course..!! Aur haan aapse bhi..! (Blushing)

Asad: Main bhi aapse bohot pyaar karta hun aur vaada karta hun ki aapse humesha karta rahunga..!

---------------------------------------------THE END------------------------------------

heyy guys...! i finally was able to finish... i noe i dint give much of romance bt juz wrote dis... will try nd post an epilogue if i can... i want to thank each nd everyone hu has commented nd especially Saima- Syed hu is my inspiration...!! reading her writings make me try nd write...! So thanx to all..! Also to d silent readers... though i wud hv been glad if u had commented..!

aashka

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super adorable update dear friend

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