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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459

Wow awesome update. I just loved it. Feeling really happy for AsYa. It was nice to see them spend time together and remembering their old days.

I wonder what is zoya's surprise for Asad.

Can't wait to read the next chaprer. Please update soon. 😊



Hey there...I jsut felt so happy reading ur comment..n u liking the update...thank u so very much...n will update the next ch soon...n reveal the secret..😉😃


Originally posted by: --Mahima--

read chapter 19 and 20

wow

this was superb

loved the way you portrayed the whole Zoya being still married thing



Thank u thank u thank..for a such a sweet comment...thank u the compliment..m glad u liked it😃



Will do for sure..😃




will do😃



Originally posted by: asyafreva

Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Pretty Pweaz... 😳 with a cherry and a strawberry and whichever fruits you like on the top... 😳 UPDATE..????? 😆

the surprise is killing me...! i dont noe y i have the feeling that it is related to her buying a house or something lyk dat...! So please take pity on us and put our excited souls to rest by updating... !😆 😳


aashka



Hey there.awww...i'll take the cherry and the strawberry..I dont mind😉😆.I will update Wednesday morning..India time..for sure...Just gotta wait nother day...I just have had no time to sit down n write it up..so please bear with me..n hey...ur feelin in goin in the rite direction😉..n I so wanna update but yaar m not gettin ne time to sit down..I go to work tomm n thats wen I'll be able to write..so soon...😃

Thank u Aashka for a lovely sweet sa comment😃



Soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Ciao Bella,

Now, now what do I say? It's like.. I m out of words.. It was superb, especially the pace with which the day went on & ended. You know the starting had only made me grin & by the end of it i was grinning like an idiot. I won't say that I didn't cry because I did, but for the first time they were Khushi ke aansoo, 😭 OMG. how did I get lucky enough to see this day? 🤔 You've been nothing less than a sweetheart in this update Aashna, itni meherbani aik saath. Ye sach hai ya hai sapna... Okay I get it, you understand my state of mind after reading the part. 😆 I'm laughing, flying high, all happy shappy. Just love you for this & for a lot more, us ki details alag se doon gi, u know.
I'll quote all my favorite lines at the end.
Okay getting back to the part. It indeed was A New Day & A New Beginning. Seeing both of them nervous & yet relieved of all agony. Smiling, blushing, teasing, laughing, that feeling of like being in love for the first time & appreciating the other as their other own, with full rights was so amazing & a very powerful feeling. this zest of starting again together was the point that set my mood.
Of course it was nothing new when Asad got the breakfast according to Zoe's likes. He remembers every detail about her. & so does Zoe.
I could so visualize an all hyper, babbling, laughing & jumping Zoe, walking ahead of Asad, reminding him & herself of the places & memories they had made together. Asad, what can I say about him. He's a man who's got his life back, whose fears are removed, whose deep wound is healed, all just in a moment, by the declaration that Zoya still belonged to him. She was His to keep & love. You know seeing Asad, has taught & reminded me of how much Love & Life are co-related. My heart had swelled in love for Asad, just by the way he was gazing at Zoe. I am not saying that Zoe loves him any less, but you know she was holding on to his name & knew they were still one, even though on papers. But he was dying in pain & restlessness that whole time trying to accept that they weren't together anymore & that zoya had wanted to go away from him.
The most important part of this update was the communication between AsYa acc to me. Asad & Zoya have been always been connected through heart & soul but I agree with Zoya on this point that hearing literally gives you the hope & strength to face everything. The physical distance has dampened their spirits & changed their outlook on life. To begin a new, they need the assurance that now they have the support & love of their beloved.
So I guess I know what the letter has. But what I want to about it is the memories attached with it, I mean why is she so excited about it? You didn't tell by when you'll post the next part.
Here are my fav lines:
She looked away, not wanting to stare,but then she turned back and stared, hell he was hers and she had full rights to oogle at him...
Somehow hearing the truth, that they were still married and Zoya was still Mrs Zoya Asad Khan, had erased all the pain and bitterness from his heart.

Zoya-my husband Mr Asad Ahmed Kha blushin...she laughed O man I gotta take a picture of it...she tried grabbing her phone..but Asad grabbed her hand...glaring at her...having no effect on the effervescent Zoya...

Asad just follwed her footsteps, content in the realisation that his company was the reason for Zoya's smile, the constant repeatation of the words, Mrs Zoya Asad Khan, mending even the deepest of cracks.He was a happy man today, he felt his age he was acting his age, and he was having the time of his life, with the girl of his dreams. (My most favorite)
She smiled even more when she remembered the moments just a while ago when Asad called her Mrs Zoya Asad Khan, Making her heart swell with joy,Asad considered her his own, and he had already accepted everything she had confessed, choosing to still call her his wife. She was happy, today finally Allah was giving her everything back..
Asad-The how did you mean it?? Zoya I need to know...Are you mine or are you mine?? He asked his possessiveness reeking in his every word...
Aray yaar, this is being unfair. Can I post the entire part? I feel like I'm being unfair with my own self, so many of my fav lines are getting missed due to this. I think I shouldn't do this. I hope you know that this chapter does indeed mean a lot to me, as this is the basis of their new start.
Lots of Love..



Hey there...here I go again...responding back..n lovin it..😃


O yiee...for the happy days...its happy its..lovely..n its..funny...n reading ur comments..its flattering...
I am happy to read u were happy bout the update...n happy that u had happy tears n not sad..n Hey I guess It was the patience for waiting 20 chapters to see them together..that has brought upon this day..so CHEERS...👏😃..n koi meherbaani nahi..I wanted to get here too...I love to c them in love again..so ya..

N u have officially made my day..amazing...sayin such happy things..n seein u happy is just happy day for me..so thank u so so so very much for that...m glad I could send happy ur way..😃

Together they were a happy couple..with all the happy positive things in life..I enjoyed writing it n m happy to see it was conveyed right...ASad and Zoya finally ready n together..reliving their past n movin ahead..happy days happy days..😳

Zoya..Asad..Asad Zoya..they just make it all so very entertaining..Zoya with all her zest n enthusiasm,...n Asad with all his wit n charm..just make a normal..mundane thing so very interesting


Asad's turning point..was finding that they were still married..just erased all his pent up pain..n here he is..ready to start fresh hold her hands n walk the road..Asad finally has a reason to pursue his love n he he doing that...as for who loves the other more..I guess they both do...both somehow unaware of the others..pain..but now its healin n loving time...already they are talking it out..so its all good frm here..happy times r here..

Once again thank u for quoting ur fav lines...Awww😳..makes me feel really really happy...n ya u said it rite...it is the basis of their new start...so gal keep readin..n commentin..I love it..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosamale

Res.

will be back soon😉n hopefully😆

Unres

And here i come😆

Mrs. Zoya Asad Khan

Mrs. Zoya Asad Khan

Mrs. Zoya Asad Khan

What a nice name! it sounds soo perfect


"Zoya... Are you mine or are you mine?"

👏What an epic question👏 i totally loved this question. after reading this update i got hangover in such a way that i started asking questions to my friends twice like "are you coming or are you coming"😆 they were looking at me as if i am alien😳


Zoya I want to move on..and I want to take you along with me...as my wife..so tell me...are you mine...or are you mine???


This is my favourite dialogue. awe he want to take her along with him as his wife i wonder what the media will say about it though😆

What's cooking Zoya? what surprize are you planning for Asad Miyaan.?😉
Sorry, wrong question. why i am asking this to Zoya? i should ask this question to you😆



hello hello...kya comment hai..mast yaar..loved it..Mrs ZOya Asad Khan..ya a nice ring to it naa😉😆

n my epic question..ru mine or r u mine..giving an option but not giving n option..sahi hai..use karo...mazze aate hai😆..aur I guess ur friends will get used to it..so keep sayin it..n u'll get ur way everytime😉😆


N now u gave me an idea..😆..with ur last para..but ya..Asad is all set to go on with Zoya..😃

n actually she wasnt planning ne surprise..it just fell into place..so it will turn out to be a surprise for Asad..so keep readin..n comment to karna bhulna hi mat..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

happy days are back..


really love their sweet romance..❤️

asya were so lovely...

asad poured his heart out..

this update is so heart warming..❤️

it brings smile when I read this..😊

they are back, as asad and zoya..

truly and crazily in love with each other...

so curious to know zoya's surprise.😉

update soon..



yes yes yes...happy days r here...fun, romance..n all..😉..
Thank u so much for a lovely comment..loved readin every line..mazee aa gaye..thank u...n ya they r back together..fallin in love again..😃..as for the surprise ...u'll know soon😉



Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wow tis is totally superb...

fabulous...
mind blowing...
asya are too cute...
it so beautifully written n imagine the whole scene...its so lovely n romantic...
wonder wat is the surprise...
totally addicted to tis ff...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...



Thank u for a superb..comment...n all the amazing adjectives u've used for this update..m just a happy happy gal readin ur comment..n i feel so elated to read that u were able to visualise the whole scene..😳..n that u like my writing ..n ur addicted to this ff..bas I am happy simple..😃...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

yaay yaay yaay yaay You kept your word. it had romance and oh god it was so cute especially the part where asad is having candies! ASAD! having candies? Gah how cute is that?


I'm sure the surprise is the house keys that aapi sent right?

and wait do they have a shoot in the morning? do show some scenes on the sets please! 😃

Eep i cant wait for the next update! 😃 🤗



Yieee...u liked it party time..🥳..n m glad it stood up to ur expectations...n m glad u liked the candy part...unexpected tha nai??😆...o n ya definetly cute..him..shweing on him..his eyes closed n savoring it...fun fun fun😆..n gal..u got somethin rite😉...umm..n as for ur desire for all those filmy scenes..lemme c wat I can do..😉..thank u though for a lovely comment gal..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Smmm

Dude I loved this part ( we'll tell me which I didn't :p ) but after their 1st photo shoot and the turnaround I loved this part the most !!!

I love Asad every time he called her mrs Khan I loved it they were sooo cute and adorable together ,

The whole new beginning , their coffee shop and going into memory lane . I could literally visualize it all .

And the the part of the candies all I could do I go aaawww , the way he told I don't share what's mine , and what came after that puff I don't have words for how much I loved it
Would love to see more conversations like that between them

I can't wait for the surprise , I'm pretty sure it might be the house .

I hope you update soon and thanks for the pm 😊

As well as going to watch Ram Leela 😭 I wish I could but sadly I don't have cinemas that play Bollywood movies here I'm going to have to wait until it's released online 😭 I love every bhansali movie they are like many Van Gogh paintings all put to together

Ps : this Is completely irrelevant but pls don't go the erotica way to show them getting intimate I just can't stand erotica I think something so beautiful Is turned into something cheap 🤢



Loved readin ur comment...u enjoying the update n the stroy over all..just makes my day...😃...m glad I can provide a good read..
Asad n his ways were kinda a highlight in this update..his candies..his possiveness..was all welcome treat LOL..so again m glad u enjoyed that..😃..the conversations..yes it will happen more now..since Asad is open for discussions..

as for Ramleela..I saw it the first day..n u truly said it..its an artwork in motion..very dramatic and visually grand...n even though it was the same romeo n juliet story..u still enjoyed it..diff frm his other movies very raunchy..a gud watch I'd say..well watch it wen it comes online for sure..

ur prediction😉

n as for Erotica..n ruining the beauty of the relation..I have no such intention..as in I dont know yet how I will make things work..but its not me to go really umm...I'd say obvious for the lack of a better word..but they r married..in love...n...they will express it physically..so have a lil faith...I guess..my updates with such content wasnt very crude now was it?? so do read if u feel comfortable...n again have a lil faith..😃


Thank u so very much for a lovely comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Where is my update?

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup



hello hello...kya comment hai..mast yaar..loved it..Mrs ZOya Asad Khan..ya a nice ring to it naa😉😆

n my epic question..ru mine or r u mine..giving an option but not giving n option..sahi hai..use karo...mazze aate hai😆..aur I guess ur friends will get used to it..so keep sayin it..n u'll get ur way everytime😉😆


N now u gave me an idea..😆..with ur last para..but ya..Asad is all set to go on with Zoya..😃

n actually she wasnt planning ne surprise..it just fell into place..so it will turn out to be a surprise for Asad..so keep readin..n comment to karna bhulna hi mat..😃


idea?😲what idea😲 i cant seem to get any idea from ma last para😆 may be u r genious than me dats y😆 not may be, u definitely are😃 you know what strings to pull to make ur readers happy or sad😆 so cunnig huh😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosamale


idea?😲what idea😲 i cant seem to get any idea from ma last para😆 may be u r genious than me dats y😆 not may be, u definitely are😃 you know what strings to pull to make ur readers happy or sad😆 so cunnig huh😉😆



chalo acchi baat hai u didnt notice nethin..I guess will promt u wen I use it😆😉...n me no genius..just a simple gal...with too much of romance goo in her head..so puttin it out..😆..n as for the strings..I try I try...n sometimes..I succeed..in making my readers happy..so no cunningness there..mein to bholi si..nadaan ladki hu😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup



Loved readin ur comment...u enjoying the update n the stroy over all..just makes my day...😃...m glad I can provide a good read..
Asad n his ways were kinda a highlight in this update..his candies..his possiveness..was all welcome treat LOL..so again m glad u enjoyed that..😃..the conversations..yes it will happen more now..since Asad is open for discussions..

as for Ramleela..I saw it the first day..n u truly said it..its an artwork in motion..very dramatic and visually grand...n even though it was the same romeo n juliet story..u still enjoyed it..diff frm his other movies very raunchy..a gud watch I'd say..well watch it wen it comes online for sure..

ur prediction😉

n as for Erotica..n ruining the beauty of the relation..I have no such intention..as in I dont know yet how I will make things work..but its not me to go really umm...I'd say obvious for the lack of a better word..but they r married..in love...n...they will express it physically..so have a lil faith...I guess..my updates with such content wasnt very crude now was it?? so do read if u feel comfortable...n again have a lil faith..😃


Thank u so very much for a lovely comment😃




I completely trust you until now I love every bit of your fiction , even the intimate scenes they are beautifully depicted .
Sorry for saying that it's just my best friend made me read some passages of 50 shades of gray calling me a prude and trust me after reading that I wouldn't recommend it to anyone :P

Though I know currently everyone loves that book (as many people those many opinions )

Now I can't wait to watch ram Leela !!!! Puff why don't I live in the Canada at least I would get to watch it


And now to wait until Wednesday !!!! I'm sure it's going to be worth it !!!!

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