FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 83

Originally posted by: volatile

What a explosive update Paly...loved every single part of it, especially the ending! I mean who can resist rich sweet melted chocolate right? 😉😉

I was really happy to see Asad stand up for Rohan in the end, it reminded me of a line that Zoya said about her Mr Khan in the show once...bhar se strict dikte hai, lekin ander se bahut sensitive aur emotional hai. Asad proved that he had DIlshads upbringing when he stopped judging Rohan and supported him against Sunny and Lucky. Rohan always had Dilshad on his side. She is not the kind of woman who would waver from her stance. Asad was the new support that Rohan desperately needed. That - and learning that Zoya had nearly died protecting him (almost like Rohit) - was the push Rohan needed to break out of his insecurities and guilt. He couldn't stand up for himself but he could stand up for Dilshad, Najma and Zoya. That put him on the same side as Asad. Rohan needed to realize he had a support system!

Speaking of Sunny, how stupid can that guy get? He was lucky that Dilshaad and Zoya were there to control the tiger, if not he would not have walked away alive, thats for sure.

So, so sad that I have to wait more than a month for the next update...my bday is on 14 March...any chance of a early update as a bday gift???? 😛 I'm sorry. I was so sad at ending my wonderful Indian adventure that I couldn't write upon my return. It's taken me a few days to get over sadness and find my balance again. I will post the new chapter next week.

Oh btw, kudos to you for describing AAK to perfection. Sweet, sexy and rich chocolate, is a little bitter but it grows on you! Thats exactly how the original Janahpanah Six Pack is! And I loved that you showed how secure and confident he is when it comes to Zoya. He knows she loves him and he is basking in that knowledge! MS Dhoni definitely has nothing on KSG! I wanted to end the chapter on a funny note since I'd be gone for such a long time. I had originally planned a sad and heavy chapter ending but decided against it. Still, I was worried that readers wouldn't understand the connection the between shirtless Asad and chocolate but, luckily, they did! Sadly, Zoya will not get her candy bar. Asad won't allow her to eat or drink anything that will upset her blood sugar.

Wait! That means Asad must be very careful not to upset or stress Zoya for the next few days. He can't scold her, be over-protective or take his clothes off around her as all those things raise her blood pressure. How will he manage? 😆

How will she? 😉

Originally posted by: Akilla

Yoou know what I realised?...you're something even better than a 'good writer'...in your stories, you have something for everyone which I think is a testament to your talent that you can cater for all of us. For the little sherlock holmes out there, you have a sense of mystery, thrill "who's the bad guy, what's gonna happen next"..., for the emotionals out there, you've incorporated strong family bonds, friendship beyond bounds, the emotional battle we fight in ourselves everyday, for the little cherubs you have asad and zoya...it might not be the fluffy romance but we're happy when we get to see their teasing smiles, asad's jealousy and overprotectiveness, their understanding of each other. You've managed to incorporated this well into one chapter where many authors fail to do it in an entire book. So I re-iterate, you're a brilliant writer...a talented one. It goes without saying that I looved it

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

no update today

I feel like crying 😭

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

I'm very sorry. I felt like crying all last week when I had to readjust to cold, snowy weather after weeks of fun, warmth and sunshine. I miss my family and the good times so much. It depressed me to look at videos or remember the places we visited. I just could not focus on writing about India when I was so far away. I'm better now and adjusting to the winter weather again.

I'll post the new chapter next Monday - I promise!