{|AsYa/KaBhi SS| ~Serendipity~} (Part3-Pg33+Note-Pg47) :) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Wow tis is amazing...
Very interesting...
Wonder wat happen to her...
Thx fr the pm n do pm me fr the next part...
Luv it...
Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Asya_Obsession

res😃


unres😛

Yipee!😃 Time to happy dance! *zoya style*
YAY!!!!! 😃😃
I already LOVE this story! Please yaar continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aw! 😃 Thank you so much! 🤗
I will, but I can't without my awesome stalker...YOU! 😉
Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

Wow tis is amazing...
Very interesting...
Wonder wat happen to her...
Thx fr the pm n do pm me fr the next part...
Luv it...

Thank you! ❤️
Yes I will! 😃
Thanks again! 😳
Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Omg, you're gonna read it?! 😲 Yayyy!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Fari its awesome part yaar👏
Super cute ss...
I loved it a lot..❤️
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm..
Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Fari its awesome part yaar👏
Super cute ss...
I loved it a lot..❤️
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you, thank you! 😃
I will! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Allah miya! What's wrong with the Fari's on this forum!??!? Why do you all write SO DAMN WELL!!!

Okay tell me honestly. You lied right? You're not really in middle school and only 13???

YOU CAN'T BE!! You write SO FLIPPING WELL!!!

The way you described their first encounter was so sweet and cute. Especially how she blushed and thanked him quietly. So cute. I wish I could have seen it as a scene in a movie. Haiii

And then the second encounter was even cuter!!! The way they said hello to each other, so softly, so shyly. How she let him accompany her. How they help hands, so comfortably. And how he waited for her the entire time she was chatting away with her parents' graves. It's so heartbreakingly adorable.

And then you drop a bomb. HOSPITAL!?!!? WHAT HAPPENED TO MY ZOYA BABY!!?!?!?!?!?!??

😭

I can't wait to read more flashbacks and really curious to know whats wrong with her. I'm pretty sure she's in a coma. But I can't fathom why. It could be so many things!

P.S. I LOVE LOVE LOVE how you bolded the words that were synonyms or meanings for the word Serendipity
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Just loved it
Amazing
Loved the way u explain each and everything in detail
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Are you for real? Is this piece of amazingly well written work for real?
You have blown me away!

The prologue was mind blowing and the first part is just WOW! 👏
The choice of words: Beautiful. The usage of words: Perfect.
You are one hell of a talented writer!

Please continue soon 😊

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