{|AsYa/KaBhi SS| ~Serendipity~} (Part3-Pg33+Note-Pg47) :)

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

i dint knw about ds one..
will luv to read all prts..
thnx for d pm..😊😊

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
Oh the irony! She's an insomniac and now she refuses to wake up. Poor Asad though Yeah, but don't worry, I won't torture them too much. 😆

Aww the flashback was adorable! And she's just like me lol! Almost two decades old and I still love Disney to death! I'm gonna make my future hubby watch reruns with me all the time, poor thing 😆 Out of the two mentioned, I love Lion King more. But my absolute favorite has to be The Jungle Book :D Same here. My future hubby is going to have to put up with a LOT. I'm a piece of work. 😆 Aw, Jungle Book! LOVE IT. :D

Omg the way they both fell asleep watching the movie was beautiful! Thank you. 😳

OMG SHE SAVED HIM AND GOT INJURED INSTEAD! 😭 And she's awake now! I get this bad, bad feeling she has forgotten him or something :S I hope it isn't so D; OMG, who do you people think I am? I'm not a Hindi serial producer for a reason! 😆 I'm not that cliched, am I? Amnesia and all. 😕😆

Great update, Fari! I'm so proud of you, your writing has improved a lot I must say! It's weird but I love that you used the word 'chary', I mean, I haven't seen writers here use it that often, I know this sounds weird but yeah 😆 Thanks, Tanviii :D My mom makes me do vocab. all the time so I'm well-prepared for SATs. Chary was one of the words! 🤣

CUPCAAAKKKEEESSS! Since they were mentioned 😆 THANK YOUUU! 🤗 🤗

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

I also love that you used the word circumspect 😳 Go momma of Fari! 🥳

Yeah I know, sorry Honeycakeroo! 🤗 You're definitely not a hindi serial producer who pens down a cliched mess. I should know better, my bad! 😆

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

^Circumspect was also a vocab. word! 😆

It's okay, I was kidding! 🤗

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

@..Shweta..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

So I kinda forgot what happened. (AHEM Because of such FREQUENT updates AHEM) Naw, jk. So I'm just gonna reread it and post my live reactions:

I smiled at free cookie. I want a free cookie.

Smooth vanilla ice-cream. Damn girl you need to calm yoself with the sweets. I WANT ICE CREAM NOW. But aww, I loved that last line "When Asad met Zoya"

They bumped into each other and fell into le grass. Can I cue the Bolly music. Pleej.

I love how you bold the serendipity components. Sho cute my Fari,

Dimples. I LOLed, how cute

Gray, see I wish I did that. But I'm just so accustomed to the Brit version. Idk I find it fancier, my teachers used to mark me off for that. But in this context, I also would prefer "gray" as opposed to "grey." IDEK why I mentioned that.

AWWW HE WATCHED HER TALK TO HER PARENTS. MY FEELS.

OMG WHAT SHE'S IN THE HOSPITAL. OH YEAH I REMEMBER NOW. FARI YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO MY FEELS. FIX HER NOW.

Part 2

Awwie, they met several times after that! This SS just proved that I do need fluff sometimes and ugh this is so cute I love it.

Aw le kiss! LE KISS!

OMG FARI WAKE THE GODDAMN ZOYA UP. NOW.

Part 3

Insomniac. I feel.

Indian Aunty, spanish soap opera, that's a first.

"Orb" Tally - I I

KJDAFKSDJFKAHDF SHE'S AWAKE! She better not "lose her memory" else I swear Fari I will... I will write something in which Asad gets married to Tanveer and Zoya gets married to Najma's husband's brother. And I'll call the character who causes this "Fari" just you know by chance. Mmmhmm

Ok overall, I love your cutesy whimsical writing style. It was cute and beautiful and just what I needed and you Fari are going to grow into a beautiful mature writer someday <3

Edited by -ShwSha- - 11 years ago

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lDirectionerl

@lDirectionerl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

You just did not STOP there, Fari 😡

And if she looses her memory then I'm going to come all the way there (wherever you live) and give you a piece of my mind 😈

And UPDATE soon or else I'll die here 😆

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Hi Fari ,,

I read this SS finally as I found it shortest right now 😆 but as soon as part 3 ended I feel like reading more !

Its amazing and beautifully written ,,

The best scene was the rain one and the way she watched lion king with him 😳

AsYa are the cutest here ,,

Hope she is fine now as she is awake ,,

Update sooon as I am eagerly waiting to see what happens next 😉

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Finally you updated

so beautiful and amazing update

Loved it so much.

continue soon.

And please update your all stories soon😳

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

OHHH YAYYY for cupcakes...u finally updated Fari🥳...i was starting to wonder you had stopped writing...but definitely glad u see you beautiful words...😃

Really loved this chapter...full of emotions...joy, love, sorrow, guilt..all expressed beautifully..

Particularly love the flashback scene when Zoe visits...the affection and pure love Asad has for Zoe shone thru..brought a smile to my face..

And the last accident scene left equally saddened...the guilt consuming Asad is literally eating him...and leaving him in pain that is felt every second..truly felt for him..

But...SHE'S AWAKE..omgg..all i can think is please let her memory be intact...i don't know why i just seem to have a bad feeling that the worse is yet to come..

Great work Fari🤗

Love

Reya <3