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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

YAYYY 😃 Fari starts a new story..Congrats girl...

And what a start..what a start...i am so bloody hooked already...you are such a talented writer at such a young age...i can only imagine you becoming better with time.

I love the way you started the story romantically with a fall and catch but gave it so much depth by showing the sorrow in Zoya's life, but yet her liveliness...Asad and Zoya's interactions were sweet..

So this story will be flashback mode, Zoya has a accident of some sort and Asad will relive their story while he is in the hospital...Sounds like a great read..

Looking forward to more :)

-Reya <3

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

what happened to zoya ??

the prolouge and the begining were really interesting !
why is zoya in a hospital?
plz continue soon :)

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Just read the prologue and chapter one and they are just brilliant!! You are really an awesome writer Fari! But why on earth did you send Zoya to the hospital in part one itself?? I really wonder what;s wrong with her but i just can't guess! Please update this soon!!

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

OMG! I'm so sorry for the late comments Baby Pink! Just too many PMs in my Inbox! 😳

Read the prologue and Chapter 1 just now! 😃 That was BRILLIANT! I'm in love with the story and the word ~ serendipity! Really gripping and addictive! 👏

Both the encounters were wow! 👏 Zoya's talk with her parents at the graveyard was flawless!

Back to present... WHAT HAPPENED TO ZOYA? 😲 TELL ME NOW! 😡

Brilliantly written baby! ❤️

Continue soon!

Love and hugs, 🤗

Mrina

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
OMG YEUSS! What a wonderful start, you've got me hooked to your story yet again! WHY YOU GOTTA BE SO GOOD?! Sometimes I forget you're only thirteen, damn girl you're a fab writer!

I love this Asad and Zoya Well truth be told I love all Asad and Zoya's so long as they're not serial killers 😆

NO SHE'S IN HOSPITAL!

OMG NO WUT HAPPENED?! :O

But here are some cupcakes for ya 'cause chapter one was Class A 😎

Thanks Tanvi! Love ya loads! 🤗 🤗

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by mochhug...

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Allah miya! What's wrong with the Fari's on this forum!??!? Why do you all write SO DAMN WELL!!! AW, thanks SO much! 😃

Okay tell me honestly. You lied right? You're not really in middle school and only 13??? Not lying, I really am! 😳

YOU CAN'T BE!! You write SO FLIPPING WELL!!! THANKS! 😳 😳 😳

The way you described their first encounter was so sweet and cute. Especially how she blushed and thanked him quietly. So cute. I wish I could have seen it as a scene in a movie. Haiii 😳

And then the second encounter was even cuter!!! The way they said hello to each other, so softly, so shyly. How she let him accompany her. How they help hands, so comfortably. And how he waited for her the entire time she was chatting away with her parents' graves. It's so heartbreakingly adorable. 😳😳

And then you drop a bomb. HOSPITAL!?!!? WHAT HAPPENED TO MY ZOYA BABY!!?!?!?!?!?!??

😭

^Chill. 😆😆😆

I can't wait to read more flashbacks and really curious to know whats wrong with her. I'm pretty sure she's in a coma. But I can't fathom why. It could be so many things! Coma is correct, you'll find out what happens soon...😉

P.S. I LOVE LOVE LOVE how you bolded the words that were synonyms or meanings for the word Serendipity Thanks so much, Monica, you're awesome! 🤗🤗

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: princess101
OMG why is she in the hospital I hope she is ok thanx for the PM and update soon 😃

You'll see! 😉 Thanks! 😃

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: aashiqua
omg..what happnd?

You'll find out soon! 😉

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
nice story!!!
is zoya in coma???? why on earth?!?
continue soon...wanna know the real story!!!

Thanks! :D

Yup! You'll find out. (;

Thanks again! (:

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Awesome and fabulous update...
So he also met her parents...

In the hospital..sick, accident...

Looking forward to read more...

Thanks for the pm

Thanks! (:

Yup. :/

Yeah. ):

Yay! Thanks! :D

No problem! <3

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