AsYa FF- Ishq Ki Dua- 12/17/13

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Introduction

Zoya ran through the halls as fast as she could. She cursed herself for sleeping in so late and now she was going to be late for the first lecture of the day. She turned the corner and slammed right against a hard muscular body. She yelped out loud and closed her eyes waiting for the moment she would hit the ground but it never came. She felt a pair of strong muscular hands around her waist. She slowly opened her eyes and looked into the pair of dark chocolate brown eyes that was staring down at her. It was as if she was in a trance she got lost in the depth of his eyes. She could see the pain they held inside them. She also didn't understand why but she felt as if she had seen those eyes somewhere before but just couldn't put her finger on where. She heard someone calling her name from behind her and finally came back to reality she jumped out of the stranger's embrace as if she was on fire. She turned around to see Najma standing there with an irritated expression on her face. She looked back to the stranger finally and her mouth dropped open.

Zoya: "Tum! What are you doing here? Are you stalking me? How dare you! I will report you to the dean!"

Asad: "Ha! Why in the world would I ever want to follow you around! In fact shouldn't you be apologizing to me because you ran into me! What are you to blind that you can't see where you're going?"

Zoya: "How dare you in fact you're the one that was holding onto be like a bechari so explain your behavior for that then!"

Asad: "Well I am so sorry that I saved you from falling Ms. Musibat! Next time I will make sure that you will fall down on your face!"

Zoya: "What makes you think that there will be a next time Mr. Akdu! Besides..."

Before Zoya could continue she was cut off by Najma.

Najma: "Will you please stop wasting time! We are already late as it is so please hurry up!"

Zoya: "Okay let's go."

With that Zoya gathered her things up from the ground and ran off with Najma without sparing Mr. Akdu another glance.

Hey guys! I am back with a new FF as I promised you all. This is just an intro to it as you can all see. Please comment and let me know how it is since this is my first time writing something completely new and different.

PS: Also... do any of you lovely people want to make me a banner for this FF?? 😃

My photoshop skills aren't that great so if we have any creative members please help me out. Pretty Pretty Please with a cherry on top! 😃

PPS: Does anyone want to help me give this FF a title? I like stuck.. I thought maybe Forbidden Love or Unexpected Love or IDK.. HELP PLEASE SEND ME SUGGESTIONS I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT!! 😊

Ruksar

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Character Index

Asad Ahmed Khan: He is in his last year and recently transferred to the college. He came for his MBA and then will go back to India to live with his ammi and his sister. He loves his family a lot and would do anything to protect them. He hates his father Rashid Ahmed Khan because he abandoned his ammi when they were little. His best friends are Arjun, and Arnav. The rest of his character will be revealed in the story.

Zoya Farooqui: Also a new transfer she lives with her aapi and Jeeju in Dubai. But came to New York for the education. She is a very, bubbly, free-spirited person. She puts others happiness first before hers. Her ammi was killed when she was a child. Her father gave her up when she was a child to live with his other wife. Her best friends are Najma, Khushi, and Purvi. Rest of the character will be revealed in the story.

Najma Ahmed Khan: Is in her last year of college and then will go back with her brother to India to live with her ammi. Same as the other characters will be revealed in the story.

Khushi Kumari Gupta and Purvi : Purvi, Khushi, and Zoya are like sisters. Purvi was orphaned as a small child. The three of them live together next door to each other. Character will be revealed in the story.

Arjun and Arnav: They grew up in India with there respective families. Arjun, Arnav and Asad are friends since childhood. More of the character will be revealed in the story.

Rest of the characters will be revealed as the story progresses forward. I am still writing out the plot of the story but the story will have a lot of twists and turns. I am trying to do something different but I hope it comes out with what I have in mind.

PS: If you guys have any suggestions or concerns please let me know. I would be happy to hear them.

PPS: Chapter one will be updated soon. As well as other FF's


Edited by rockstarrfn786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!!!

I'm liking it already 😉

Mr. Akdu and Ms. Musibat 😆

Will comment more after reading the character sketch.. If you're still doing one??



Edited: Hmm how about "Suddenly I see" or "Love Unforeseen?" 😃

Edited2: Character Sketch!!! YAY!!! College!! OMG YOU'RE INCLUDING ARJUN AND PURVI!?!?!?!?! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 And ARNAV AND KHUSHI!!! YESSES!!!

AHH I'M SOOO EXCITED!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

I love that Purvi and Khushi are like Zoya's sisters. Sigh. I always wanted a sister. 😭 I was actually telling my mom to have more kids 😆 She looked at me like I had 5 heads 🤣 But I guess I do already have a sister 😉🤗

And YES!!! I was really hoping there would be a dynamic where Arjun would interact more with Asad, kinda like his playful side pusher 😆 And well who doesn't love Arnav Singh Raizada??? ☺️ All my fave Indian Telly male leads. Haiii!

Continue SOON!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃
Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Start! Love the concept and story already!! 🥳Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YAY Please Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loveee it!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its great. Do pm me whn u cont.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a good start...
u can keep the title when love is no more forbidden if this ff has a happyy ending...
continue sooon...
and plz add me to ur pm list
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Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

a good start...
u can keep the title when love is no more forbidden if this ff has a happyy ending...
continue sooon...
and plz add me to ur pm list


I like that one too 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm liking it already
Mr. Akdu and Ms. Musibat
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aahh akadoo and miss musibat ki laaoo story

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