|| AsYa OS || - I've Come To Take You With Me -

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Everyone!

This the second time I am writing something on AsYa on this forum. I am very disappointed with the current storyline and the way it is being executed at the moment. The new spoiler gave me a tiny bit of hope that maybe next week things will get better and we eill have some better episodes.


This OS is based on the new tatasky spoiler. I am the best of writers but please bear with me.




The moment Asad ended the call he regretted it. He was frustrated! Everything was going wrong at the moment. He failed to keep his promise to Zoya, he promised her he will fix eveything but right now everything is getting more complicated. What did she said, two more days? Its difficult to spend a second without her now, how will he stay away from her two more days? Asad decided to call her back, he needed to hear her voice to gain back his strength but allah was not with him at the moment, Zoya did not picked up his call.


Zoya sat on the floor in Ayaan' s room hugging her knees to her chest, her tears slowly flowing from her big brown eyes. She was getting scared now. This situation was getting more complicated now.

"Allah miya, why are you testing me like this?"

"Mr.Khan... when are you coming?"

"I can't stay away from you anymore! "

Remembering her last moments with Asad, Zoya drifted off to sleep.


A loud thud on the window, woke up a sleepy Zoya. She slowly got up from the bed and was shocked when she saw, Mr.Khan... her Mr.Kham slowly climbing through the window of Ayaan's room. She ran up to him and said..

"Mr.Khan, what are you doing here at this hour?"

The minute she saw his bloodshed eyes and tears slowly forming in his eyes, she couldn't control herself and crushed herself into his arms, raining kisses on his face. Asad felt like he has gotten back his life. He wrapped his arms around her bringing her closer to him breathing in her familiar scent. Zoya broke away from him and start slapping him on his scent, sobbing between her tears.

"I am very angry with you. .. Mr.Khan!"

She grabbed his collar and looked into his eyes crying harder now, she was totally broken now. She slipped down on her knees ripping away the left side sleeve of his shirt in the process. Asad dropped to his knees and cupped her face, he kissed away her tears and said,

"I am very sorry Zoya but now no one can take you away from me"

"You are mine, only mine!"

Zoya looked into his eyes and saw sincerity, honesty and pure love.

"Tomorrow will be a new beginning for us"

" Do you trust me Zoya? "

Zoya nodded, "I trust you more than I trust myself"

He stand on his knees and take her into his arms. She felt like she was in heaven, the place where she belonged.



Bright and early the next morning, Zoya woke up she showered and dressed in hrr favorite jeans and shirt. She felt like she was already home. She quietly walked to the breakfast table, everyone was already there. Mumani and Shireen stared at her intently.

"What nonsense is this Zoya? " said Shireen

"The bahu of our house can't dressed like this, haven't I told you this before!"

"She is not your bahu", said an angry Asad Ahmed Khan at the door of Siddiqui Mansion.


Everyone was shocked, Shireen and Badi B was stunned, Razia was a little shocked but had a smirk on her face. Zoya was overwhelmed. Asad slowly make his way into Siddiqui Mansion, he walked past everyone and looked intently at Zoya.

" What are you doing here, Asad? " shouted Shireen

"I am here to take my love, my life, my heart, the reason of my existence, my Zoya" said Asad trying to control his tears.

" Your love? " questioned Shireen

" She is the daughter in law of this house. How dare you talk about her like that?"
"What do you think you can barge into my housr anytime like that and try to ruin our happiness?"

"Ammi, what are you saying?" Said Ayaan.

"You shut up Ayaan!" shouted Shireen.

Asad clenched his fists together trying to control his anger.

" I brought Zoya into this house, only to save Nikkhat and the honour of this house, " said Asad

"Zoya and I sacrificed our love, our happiness so that this house can be happy. Nikkah is a bond between two hearts. Zoya and Ayaan's nikkah was accidental and no one has the right to forced this relationship onto them. Nikkhat is married now and I'm here to take Zoya back with me".

Shireen walked up to Zoya who has tears in her eyes and said

" Bhabi was right, you are a wretched woman, married to one brother and having an affair with his elder brother" shouted an enraged Shireen.

Asad was so angry that he lifted the entire breakfast table smashing everything into peices hurting himself in the process. He dropped to his knees and said

" the biggest mistake of my life was bringing Zoya into this house, the people of this house doesnt deserved my Zoya and her sacrifice"

Zoya looked angrily at Shireen and said,

"Aunty I respect you but that doesn't mean that you could say anything that comes to your mind and insult my pure love, yes I love only Asad Ahmed Khan, he's my life and the only one in my heart! " screamed Zoya.

"Ayaan and I got married accidentally, it was the biggest mistake of my life but I came only into this house to save your daughter life, sobbed Zoya.


Zoya walked up to Asad dropped to her knees and took Asad's hands that was bleeding and kissed the spot that was cut badly. Asad cupped her face and said

" I love you Zoya, I love you so much that it hurts"

Zoya threw herself into his arms and hugged him with all her might.

"Just take m e away from here Mr.Khan"


Without wasting a second Asad lifted Zoya into his arms and walked out of Siddqui Mansion leaving the whole house in total shock.



I know its a little too much and it won't happen like this on the show but I couldn't help it I have a weird imagination.


Please leave your feedbacks...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...
lovelyy ending..
i hate shireen...
but i doubt this will happen in the show but reallyyy nice imagination...!!! 😃 😃


yippee.. mee first...!!! 😊 😊
Edited by Splash-ASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS

Hope it happenned like this 👏 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!wat i just read😲...its frigging fantabulous girl👏...& obviously dis much exaggerated wont happen in da show😆...bt i luv da way u wrote it😳...ripping his shirt off & breaking da table ws a bit 2 much bt how i wish dis happens🤣...i really want dem 2 confess their luv in4rnt of da whole SM & dey shud hug each other...i'm dying 2 c shireen & badi bi's epic expressions😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ras224

OMG!!!wat i just read😲...its frigging fantabulous girl👏...& obviously dis much exaggerated wont happen in da show😆...bt i luv da way u wrote it😳...ripping his shirt off & breaking da table ws a bit 2 much bt how i wish dis happens🤣...i really want dem 2 confess their luv in4rnt of da whole SM & dey shud hug each other...i'm dying 2 c shireen & badi bi's epic expressions😉



Thanks I know it was a bit too much but I couldn't help it, lol...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice I wish this happens 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess101

Very nice I wish this happens😃



Thanks.
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Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

dreamy dreamy dreamy dreamy



Glad you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a relief to read something positive and the charachters being true to themselves and how they were instead of what the present script writers have made them into!

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