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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it, thanks for the quick update, u r awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Dear,
I know I am extremely late in commenting on this story but I had a reason, I was out of town & couldn't connect my laptop. I read the 1st part on the go & believe me you succeeded in your mission, that is of confusing us. I mean there was nothing clear at all after the 1st chap.
Just returned today 7 yours is the first story that I'm commenting on.
It is beautiful. the story's theme is really different, just like your last ff. I have to say that you are an Amazing writer & I love your writing skills.
The way this story is opening up is just to beautiful. you have kept the pace of the story so perfect with the past & present.
I feel sad for all the pain Asad, Zoe & Najma have gone through in their childhood. seriously their parents have never given a thought to the adverse effects their separation will have on their kids. I fell sorry for Zoe the most, because she has been raised without both her parents. She was treated by indifference from both of them & then she had to lose her best friend too. I know all this causes extreme stress & trauma to a normal adult & then she was just a young nave kid. I understand her reasons for staying apart from Asad when he visited earlier, her insecurities made her react so. but now she has learned to trust him again. but she still remains the same stupid Zoya she was in teenage. I mean she hasn't even realized that her concern & care for Asad isn't just as a friend but more.
I agree with Asad. Rashid is a jerk. how can he even think of trading his own son for his business? Disgusting! I really hated his words that he spat at Asad & Dilshad. on one hand he tells Dilshaad of his problems with Asad & asks for help & on the other hand he bad mouths her. I really couldn't believe him saying all those things. I felt Asad's pain & the loneliness he must have gone through all those years when he was in hostel & even when he had to stay with Rashid. Just because the court had decided to send him away with Rashid, his whole life is ruined as the consequences of this have made him a different man. Asad's worry for Najma's wedding is right. he has seen marriages breaking in front of him & bore the after effects too & so doesn't wish bad for his sister.
The AsYa chemistry here is too good. all from the past incidents to the present fight, they are just too cute & adorable together. Asad isn't agreeing to marriage because he loves Zoe, isn't it? Dilshad knows of it too, right? lets see how the Akdu makes up for his mistake or just takes her for granted.
update soon.
Love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am not commenting that doesn't mean I am not readding...I am just so depressed and sad...because & for Umer,Asad and QH wale Asad Ahmed Khan and KSG...matlab, sab ke liye...😭 But know that I love reading your this Fic...and will continue to do so...😊 I just can't transform what I feel in words...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459



This question has been bothering me for long, so I am just going to ask...is asad eventually going to become like his dad.


Ahh ! What can I say ??
I guess I can't tell you 😆
Just kidding 😛
No he won't but he won't change his current thinkings even 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

I am not commenting that doesn't mean I am not readding...I am just so depressed and sad...because & for Umer,Asad and QH wale Asad Ahmed Khan and KSG...matlab, sab ke liye...😭 But know that I love reading your this Fic...and will continue to do so...😊 I just can't transform what I feel in words...!!!


Thank You soo muchh 😳
You can comment anytime you want 😉
and I understand what you are going through, even I feel the same 😭
Edited by Bubble007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Neeluaaro2009

Loved it, thanks for the quick update, u r awesome


Thank you sooo muchh 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Dear,

I know I am extremely late in commenting on this story but I had a reason, I was out of town & couldn't connect my laptop. I read the 1st part on the go & believe me you succeeded in your mission, that is of confusing us. I mean there was nothing clear at all after the 1st chap.
Just returned today 7 yours is the first story that I'm commenting on.
It is beautiful. the story's theme is really different, just like your last ff. I have to say that you are an Amazing writer & I love your writing skills.
The way this story is opening up is just to beautiful. you have kept the pace of the story so perfect with the past & present.
I feel sad for all the pain Asad, Zoe & Najma have gone through in their childhood. seriously their parents have never given a thought to the adverse effects their separation will have on their kids. I fell sorry for Zoe the most, because she has been raised without both her parents. She was treated by indifference from both of them & then she had to lose her best friend too. I know all this causes extreme stress & trauma to a normal adult & then she was just a young nave kid. I understand her reasons for staying apart from Asad when he visited earlier, her insecurities made her react so. but now she has learned to trust him again. but she still remains the same stupid Zoya she was in teenage. I mean she hasn't even realized that her concern & care for Asad isn't just as a friend but more.
I agree with Asad. Rashid is a jerk. how can he even think of trading his own son for his business? Disgusting! I really hated his words that he spat at Asad & Dilshad. on one hand he tells Dilshaad of his problems with Asad & asks for help & on the other hand he bad mouths her. I really couldn't believe him saying all those things. I felt Asad's pain & the loneliness he must have gone through all those years when he was in hostel & even when he had to stay with Rashid. Just because the court had decided to send him away with Rashid, his whole life is ruined as the consequences of this have made him a different man. Asad's worry for Najma's wedding is right. he has seen marriages breaking in front of him & bore the after effects too & so doesn't wish bad for his sister.
The AsYa chemistry here is too good. all from the past incidents to the present fight, they are just too cute & adorable together. Asad isn't agreeing to marriage because he loves Zoe, isn't it? Dilshad knows of it too, right? lets see how the Akdu makes up for his mistake or just takes her for granted.
update soon.
Love.


Woohoo That was the longest comment I have ever read
Well I was waiting for your comment, I thought you don't like this new story but now I understand why you didn't. So its ok 😊
Thank You ssooo muchhh for appreciating my work 😳
Ya the point of the story is what you have described, its on broken marriages.
No there is some other reason behind his disapproval for marriage, you will get to know sooon 😉
Will be updating soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubble007



Ahh ! What can I say ??
I guess I can't tell you😆
Just kidding😛
No he won't but he won't change his current thinkings even😉



And what is his current thinking? That he doesn't believe in marriage.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubble007


Thank You soo muchh 😳
You can comment anytime you want 😉
and I understand what you are going through, even I feel the same 😭


🤗 *Thank God for smileys* lol

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