AsYa FF Breaking The Waves - Thread One - Chapter One to Seven

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

BEAUTIFUL......loved it😊...3 magical words!!😳...oh I AM SORRY...how I wished it to be something else😃😃...update soon😊

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

totally fabulous...

asad n zoya are too cute...

luv it...

very interesting...

thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

First of all,,
Sorry for not commenting earlier,,, was gettin all your pms, buh didn't got a chance to give a reading,,
coz am having a very very very occupates + boring week,,

like now 6 in the morning am giving a reading to yo updates, i know this day would also again turnout to be a freaking busy day,, and i can't troll my updates to the weekend,

i was missing on your updates,, don't know if you noticed...

Now coming to the updates,, 3 updates,, OMG!! i missed 3 updates,,
i Just loved all the updates,,

for these 3 updates i have just 3 words,,..Amazing! Mirabilis! Prodigiosus!

Man! like these were just WOW,,
you rocked again!

Chap 5:
Oh!! this is what i all expexted,,like i predicted might be Rashid wants Asad to ge married with a grl which is kinda daughter of his some business partner,,, and here he was,,

Oh he did got married 4 times after dilshaad and that with the grls of his daughter age?? OMG,, he is sucha nebulous-characterless man,,, and asad suffered just due to rashid's ego...taking away the child when you cannot take care of him,, just to show the other member, that yes am teh Boss here,,,

Chap 6:
was more about zoya,,,she really misses her dad,, both are suffering with teh same emot probs which are commonly seen in the kids belonging to broken families,,,

Rashid is sucha spineless man,, he don't cares about his son's life,, he wass about to shoot himself, and rashd was accusing him of dramass,,, Oh God,, i hate him more now,, more than the show itself...

Chap 7:
i can really imagine zoya making way into his room through window,, he wsa sleeping there peacefully,, here i imagine asad as he was looking during GURIA-FACTORY TRACK,,, Hot + mentally exhausted,,,

How much he can take Man! like he's suffering from the day when Rashid took him away from her mother...i guess its a period more than 15 years,, might be 17...And still he's alive,, changed but with the courage of living and moving forward,, he has really gotten all stamina potions,,, Being changed, being angry is all his rights,, and you can take all your frustration out only on the ones,, you are closed to.. and so he is to Zoya,,,
he did and was also kinda guilty,, but ts again our ASYA who can't easily confess their guilts...

i can see Zoya throwing all tantrums on her childhood friend,, and yes he would geta chance to come out of all his worries and probs for the time being by trying to woo his 22 year old childish friend...

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#994

Originally posted by: laks_vish
aww our babies fighting and making up...akdu asad and ziddi zoya...adorable update👏

Thank you 😳

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#995

OMG!!! asad was so rude...

even his condition is acceptable, but he was so extremely rude when she was just trying to help him...

poor my zoya...

she is ignoring him now...😉

lets see whats next...

you are super good!!!!!!!!!👍🏼🤗

update soon..

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: nazali
Keep it up dear! always looking forward for your updates...cheers!

Thank you 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#997

Originally posted by: tsering2013
Awesome!!!!!
Asad is smokinh???🤢
He is very tensed n angry so may be it is justified ...😆 But why is he so rude n angry toward Zoya?? Poor girl she has become a vent for all his anger and frustation toward Rashid.
Finally Zoya avoiding Asad n he is not liking it... May be he wants to say sorry but not having courage...
I'm so excited abt what will happen next...

He just wanted to get angry and she gave him a reason 😆

Thank you 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#998

Originally posted by: bulou2013
awesome update...waiting for the next one...LOVED IT

Thank you 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#999

Originally posted by: nityasuresh93
Love it!! Very sweet... :) Asad can't take Zoya's silence so tries to make amends... Cute.. :)
Looking forward to the next part..

Thank you 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉