AsYa OS: The special day (16+) - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

53

Views

22.4k

Users

44

Likes

218

Frequent Posters

Azraa01 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Thank you for the pm. This was honestly a good read..
Mayee2217 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Gosh..you are so damn good.Cutest OS😊
Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#33
really hot and beautiful...
wonderful explanation by asad!!!
Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#34
wow
this was hawt

oliveira thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#35
amazing thanks a lot continue please
😉
sona_naksh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#36
well dat was hot n cute ..
mahek is just sooo cute
saida.m thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Wow this was very sweet and funny and hawwtt😳

I loved asya's bedroom stint...won't say anything more
and mehek is so so so cute...bechare asad and zoya ki to band baj gayi sabke saamne😆
planning another baby huh😳
You mentioned 29th oct as their anniversary...is that it?


YES! You got it! 😃
And thank you!!!!!!
NainaAlex thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#38
love the way u write...
and mahek is a darling
saida.m thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

After reading this I am so sure of one thing...you have a great sense of humor and you also rightly know how to apply it in a lovely story like this!👏


I just loved loved loved this story! Not to forget, I was blushing throughout..😳.

A lot more awake now, Asad leaned over and moved to kiss his wife but before their lips could touch, Zoya placed her hand on his mouth.

"Morning breath, Asad!"😆

God! Zoya is such a kid...

Zoya giggled and said, "You caught me! But, I have no other option! Our lovely, but crazy family is going to swamp us and with your princess hogging you all the time, we will have no "us-time" all day, wanna bet? And I read it on internet that "let anniversary sex be the best gift". So..."

Atleast someone is making the right use of internet and technology in the Khan family😉...Trust me sometimes I wish that Indian TV was bold enough to show something like this! But sadly!😔

Asad agreed, "I know, and what a way to wake up. Can we make this a routine? A peck and simple "good morning" is so over rated."

Loved this line!

And Mahek is such a sweetie!😊

"But I heard them, Abbu! I heard them making weird noises, like someone was hurt." She gasped and continued, "I think there are ghosts in your bathroom!"

The funniest part of the entire story...adored it!😆

And then...

"Dadu! I know what today is! Ammi-Abbu got married today! They told me when I went to their room. I heard silly noises in the morning and I thought there were ghosts but then Abbu told me that they were cel-y-bating their love!"

OMG...This was the Bessttt!!!🤣 I was literally laughing like anything...Poor Asad and Zoya! Love the play of words here!😉

Also I finally understood how 'Practice makes a man Perfect' can be applied in all spheres of life!😉

This was a truly Hot, Funny and a cute little story ... I loved it to bits!❤️

Seriously...you know what I am your FAN now...Love your stories...They are just PERFECT!👍🏼

Keep writing and I will keep reading your amazing stories!😃

Love❤️🤗




You get the biggest, warmest and fluffiest hug! 🤗
Your comments make my day!!!

Thank you so much for once again, leaving a detailed comment! As for the humor - i take pride in that!! 😎

Much love!!!
Simi!❤️

saida.m thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: nnn

😳😳mahek is so cute man! and asad explaining to her😆


MOST BEAUTIFUL OS EVER..❤️❤️
YOU should be giving GUL some ideas😉

👏

😊


Thank you so much!😃
Mahek's character is highly inspired by own life! So, I'll take that compliment!😆

As for Gul, I'd be more than happy to advise on some much needed fluff! 😎

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 7 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".