FF - Asad and Zoya in Italy - Thread 2 - Completed - Page 54

ok...i am here again...😳... you are a straight-forward writer...and that's why i like your story so much...there is no cheesy things which can give anyone artificial scene.. as always gives natural flavor ( i don't know why i hate cheesy romance😡)..,

Originally posted by: swapno

ok...i am here again...😳... you are a straight-forward writer...and that's why i like your story so much...there is no cheesy things which can give anyone artificial scene.. as always gives natural flavor ( i don't know why i hate cheesy romance😡)..,

congratulations...for completion of your story...although i know i am gonna miss your writing...by the way the ending was superb...👏

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Thank You so much 😳

I hope last part wasn't cheesy 😆

Originally posted by: swapno

nope...not at all...whatever it was...natural...😆

It goes without saying I loved it...
Asad n Zoya were amazing... n their little interaction with Ali was adorable too... I loved how Zoya n Ali were able to slightly annoy yet make Asad smile...
Asad's hesitation while talking to Humeira or the way he moved back when she came close to take Ali shows how much the past incident affected him... Ayaan witnessed it n I know he's feeling guilty...
I loved Asad more after reading this last update... he forgave everyone just because he can't see anyone in pain... how good can he be... :)
Sameerah finally realized her mistakes... her first step to redemption...
I totally loved how Asad asked Zoya the same questions again n Zoya answered like always... :) Asad does have his nightmare... I still became sad after reading about how he asks for help in his sleep... he's still haunted by those nightmares but Zoya's presence helps him to overcome it... :) they should stay happily ever after because they deserve every bit of that happiness!! :)
Will miss this story!! Do pm me your new story!! :)

Originally posted by: mysticlover

It goes without saying I loved it...
Asad n Zoya were amazing... n their little interaction with Ali was adorable too... I loved how Zoya n Ali were able to slightly annoy yet make Asad smile...
Asad's hesitation while talking to Humeira or the way he moved back when she came close to take Ali shows how much the past incident affected him... Ayaan witnessed it n I know he's feeling guilty...
I loved Asad more after reading this last update... he forgave everyone just because he can't see anyone in pain... how good can he be... :)
Sameerah finally realized her mistakes... her first step to redemption...
I totally loved how Asad asked Zoya the same questions again n Zoya answered like always... :) Asad does have his nightmare... I still became sad after reading about how he asks for help in his sleep... he's still haunted by those nightmares but Zoya's presence helps him to overcome it... :) they should stay happily ever after because they deserve every bit of that happiness!! :)
Will miss this story!! Do pm me your new story!! :)

hello,

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hello,

Now really I don't understand how time flew by reading this ff. it indeed was a beautiful story portrayed with skill & excellence. I am sad that you've decided to end this now but I understand all good things come to an end, but my question, why?? Why can't they go on forever happily?

The last part was beautiful just like the other parts. I was laughing reading the interaction between Zoe-Ali in the car at night & then air port too.

So at last Zoe is Zoya Akdu Ahmed Khan, congrats. had to wait so long to see dis but am glad you didn't drag the whole thing to make it a drama.

I appreciate Asad's efforts & respect his opinions of not leaving anyone with a guilty conscience behind, because he himself has decided to move on with his Love.

the best part was no actually two. one was where Asad gives Zoe the pendant & asks her about reminding everything of this night each Friday too. the second and most fav was where Zoe comforts Asad in his dream. it indeed was needed & without it the story wouldn't have been complete.

Okay now start writing your next story soon & do pm me once you start.

Till then lots of love.

Thanks for the update!😊 This FF was awesome I can't believe it ended😭 You're a great writer though 👏 and continue writing.

Originally posted by: CherryonTop

Thanks for the update!😊 This FF was awesome I can't believe it ended😭 You're a great writer though 👏 and continue writing.