THE MUSIC BOX...Part 2 completed.

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

i was waiting for part 2 ...n here it is ...n it is really awesum ...so beautiful ...luvd it ...n angel has fallen in d arms of her protector ...wowww.
luvd it sumi ...

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Written it well...
I liked it.
Finally Zoya is home😊

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

felt u rushed to end it

but liked it

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

aur me bhi me ghar aaagaaooo 🤗

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Loved it... but felt as if something was missing in some places...
Zoya reached home...wow

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chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: s120
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I loved this 😳

I wanted to read both parts together before commenting. You write so beautifully 👏

And these lines are so brilliant:

"An angel had fallen from heaven straight into his arms. Broken, ready to be mended...and he was there for her this time and every time hereafter."

Thank choo...😊

Broken, to be mended...was one of the lines I wrote first, when the idea came.🤗

It is the music box that he mends..ab aap ko cheezein jodna bhi aaya..

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chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
felt u rushed to end it
but liked it

I did. I wanted to finish it. Ideally, it should have ben in 4 or 5 chapters...Or I should have written only the part 2 as an OS...Thank U so much for the criticism and appreciation.🤗