New FF- Our Love Stays the Same (Chp 2 pg 16)

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Fabulous first chapter👍🏼

Well written👍🏼

Dilshaad and zainub planning their childrens future😃

Asad and zoya sitting on tree

k-i-s-s-i-n-g

First comes hate

then comes love

put them together, just perfect soulmates😆

Thats my lame attempt at poetry😆

Awesome story👍🏼

Thank you for the pm🤗

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garimaksgian

@garimaksgian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Its awesm do pm me whn u cont.

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

wow very nice
love from childhood
too cute
continue soon and pm plz

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Very good udapte continue soon 😃

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

such a wonderful start 😊
two first standard kids with an amazing chemistry 😆
their unique banter...n then patch ups!!!! 😆
their mothers already thinking about their future...hayyyeee 😳
and the standard first kids...too smart!!! love...kissing n all... new generation...ahaan!!! 😉
overall it was a sweet gripping start ... 👏
cant wait to read more...
plss make it soon 😃

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

hahah the whole teasing AsYa scene reminded me of when i was in 3rd grade and someone spread a rumor that a guy from my class loved me (yeah not even like) and even would go on and on and on! The thing is the teasing went on till i was in 10th grade! bloody hell thats a lot man!

hahaha i loved the first part! dilshad and zainab are already planning their future LOL

update ur other FF too please 😃