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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

YAHOO!!

I AM FIRST!!

THOUGH IT SEEMS FUNNY TO SAY IT CAUSE I AM ALWAYS AM BUT STILL IT FEELS GOOD AT TIMES

🥳

Reading your work is a treat for me always

I so enjoy your works be it in whatever context because your writings touch the heart

P.S. scroll down for comment on the OS

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

It has a little mature comment which made me blush... well mature stuff always does 😳

The story was fast but for an OS it was perfect 😃

The title was well justified 👏

and I totally loved it ❤️

my fav part was of course Asad and his superman boxers... I could imagine him in that totally

It was light enough to take my mind away from the show and you posted at a perfect time ⭐️

It was short... enough to change it from a drabble to an OS

but totally mesmerizing

I loved both the povs

Asad's was my fav though

The way his feelings are shown when he laid his eyes on Zoya are amazing

I wonder what happened to the omelette

I am vegetarian and so can't eat it... you can have it though

I loved the last line too

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

HAHAH RES
Unres

I was about to hit the bed and then I saw your PM and this OS ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

This was such a naughty naughty OS 😳😳

Superman shorts? 😳😳

Asad and Zoya - attraction at first sight!!😉

I liked how Asad offered his help in the kitchen😉😉

When Asad said 'I love you' I was also like Zoya and said huh??😲 abhi se kaise ho gaya? 😆😆

and then came 'Love thy neighbor' line 😆

I'm hungry!! Can I have the omelette?😃

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
HAHAH RES

I was wondering where you had gone 🤗

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

Res

OMg...ye kya tha dee mean kya hai...woah...so quick..

Asad z so quick man...

ZOya z on naughty mode...

Surely vl fal in love if vl find my neighbour so hot n sexy like asad...

WAt a chumeshwari os dee...

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

It ws good n light
Lvd it

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Whoa, things escalated really quickly, huh? 😉 Didn't they just meet? 🤣

LOL. 😆

It did have a little mature stuff that made me blush (you're not the only one, Mahi! 😳 😆), but I really liked it anyways. 😳 Great job! 👍🏼

Write more for us, please! 🤗

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

I was wondering where you had gone 🤗

🤗 and 🤗

I came in late to read FFs..Was about to leave when I saw Mrina's pm!

Boy! I am glad I did😉

Btw- Unresd at pg1

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

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