|AsYa OS| Love thy Neighbor

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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YAHOO!!
I AM FIRST!!

THOUGH IT SEEMS FUNNY TO SAY IT CAUSE I AM ALWAYS AM BUT STILL IT FEELS GOOD AT TIMES

🥳





Reading your work is a treat for me always



I so enjoy your works be it in whatever context because your writings touch the heart

P.S. scroll down for comment on the OS
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It has a little mature comment which made me blush... well mature stuff always does 😳
The story was fast but for an OS it was perfect 😃

The title was well justified 👏

and I totally loved it ❤️

my fav part was of course Asad and his superman boxers... I could imagine him in that totally

It was light enough to take my mind away from the show and you posted at a perfect time ⭐️



It was short... enough to change it from a drabble to an OS

but totally mesmerizing

I loved both the povs

Asad's was my fav though

The way his feelings are shown when he laid his eyes on Zoya are amazing

I wonder what happened to the omelette

I am vegetarian and so can't eat it... you can have it though

I loved the last line too

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAHAH RES
Unres
I was about to hit the bed and then I saw your PM and this OS ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

This was such a naughty naughty OS 😳😳
Superman shorts? 😳😳
Asad and Zoya - attraction at first sight!!😉
I liked how Asad offered his help in the kitchen😉😉
When Asad said 'I love you' I was also like Zoya and said huh??😲 abhi se kaise ho gaya? 😆😆
and then came 'Love thy neighbor' line 😆

I'm hungry!! Can I have the omelette?😃

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was wondering where you had gone 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
OMg...ye kya tha dee mean kya hai...woah...so quick..

Asad z so quick man...

ZOya z on naughty mode...

Surely vl fal in love if vl find my neighbour so hot n sexy like asad...

WAt a chumeshwari os dee...
Edited by shreya11mehra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It ws good n light
Lvd it
Posted: 12 years ago
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Whoa, things escalated really quickly, huh? 😉 Didn't they just meet? 🤣

LOL. 😆
It did have a little mature stuff that made me blush (you're not the only one, Mahi! 😳 😆), but I really liked it anyways. 😳 Great job! 👍🏼
Write more for us, please! 🤗
-Fari 😳 ❤️
Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima


I was wondering where you had gone 🤗


🤗 and 🤗
I came in late to read FFs..Was about to leave when I saw Mrina's pm!
Boy! I am glad I did😉

Btw- Unresd at pg1
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