llAsYa TSll Stuck in an Elevator~UPDATED~Part 2 on pg.10

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-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Res

Wooohhhooo 😃 [:D/] i'm 1st to comment for the 1st time!!!!!!!! [:D/] 🥳 i just LOVED the 1st part couldn't comment earlier but now that i got the chance 😳 😆 I know i'm sounding crazy 😆

Will (continue my) comment after u unres and post the part 😃

Unres

Wooow what an update dear 😳 I LOVED IT 😛 i loved the way Asad teased Zoya in the lift 😆 Then even after 3 months she's daydreaming about him 😳 👏 It was just too good 👏 Please write another one asap 😕 Can't get enough 😆

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oliveira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

very good thanks a lot continue please😉😉😉😉😉

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delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Enjoyed reading this! Maybe you could do another TS continuing off from here? :)

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jazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

loved it

thank u for updating it

was so eager to read it but you should plzzz con with how he convinced her

pleachhh

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princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

I LOVED IT BUT PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASEEE THANX FOR THE PM AND PLEASEE CONTINUE I LOVE THIS STORY 😃

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rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

this was absolutely mind blowing. .

shut up...led to shut up. .

hit or miss..

for zoya it was a hit..

their elevator. ...

thanks for the pm

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Tanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

OMG this is just amazing

I loved the twist in the end she was dreaming about that day

Awww 😳

This was such an awesome TS :D <3

Loved it !

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Tanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

And then he took her to dinner, proposed to her, then they made love under the stars

Haha, great TS Candy! Loved your writing as always! :D

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Interesting trend: the more Asad Bhopali cries, wavers and falls short, the darker, handsomer, hotter, more dominating, more powerful Asad Forumwala gets! 🤣

Love your work though! 👏