AsYa OS: Hey, I just met you, and this is crazy

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penfriend28

@penfriend28

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

i like the way u write...i am now going to read ur other works...👍🏼

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow!brilliant piece of work!👏
Totally loved it!
'Close your mouth, wipe the drool and shake his hand, Zoya, you idiot!' 🤣 hilarious!!!
And d kiss was epic...befor tat I was wondering too why dint asad do anything 😃
wish it had another part too 😭

Edited by elenaa - 11 years ago

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Snow_kf

@Snow_kf

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Loved it.Awesome story.actualy i loved all your story which i had read.keep on writing

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

It was naughty! Youre a naughty girl! 😃😆

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

End was perfect
And i must say Dialogues were
Class
I just LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!
Please start with an FF/SS
soon...you are an amazing
writer!

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

You write extremely well :) <3 Great work :)

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Should have ended off with a call me maybe BUT amazing nevertheless!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I love you! and i have been silently stalking all your stories ever since you posted ayaan chachu! I love all your works

they are amazing and great! i love the way you give detailing and i love the way you write! it's very rich and amazing!

When i read the title i started singing Call me maybe loudly freaking out my sister 😆

it's really really fabulous! I have sent you a buddy request so if you send out pms do pm me! 😆 Btw, I'm sadie! and can you tell me when are you going to update that ff of urs (sorry i dont remember the name😳)

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

this OS was like an espresso shot, small, but with a lot of kick😆 awesome...👏

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG
Oh My!
Why did you stop?????😭
I wanted to keep reading it!😊
It was all kinds of AWESOME!!!!👏
Asad as a hot chef( Uff so HOTTT!!!)
loved how Zoya couldn't keep her eyes of sexy Asad😆...
Brilliantly written with right amount of detailing👍🏼...
I just LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!❤️

Please start with an FF/SS soon...you are an amazing writer!😳
Stay awesome!😊
Love❤️