#2|| AsYa SS: With All My Life (Chp 5 to Chp 8)

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reyna winget

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

it's just fab !!

i loved it

continue soon mahima 😉

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
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Gourav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Awsome update... 😊

Really like the dialogs of asad...😊

love the update yaar... 😊

waiting for nxt part update soon... 😊

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

aww.. so cute and lovely... Loved this update... this is just amazing...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

it was really beautiful...loved all asya scenes...
hope we'll get a dance sequence during the ball...
continue soon

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Nice update...
I liked shooting part a lot...
Asad-"have u ever focussed on something continuosly?"
Zoya-"Obviously,your eyes!"❤️
waiting for ur nxt update...

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happygolucky234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

ilike how zoya was fliritng with asad lol.

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

super awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c..

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zoyaah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

wooow awesome i love this part too much

waiting for the next pm me plz

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#470

OMG, saying that this update is awe-fab-fan-some-ulous-tastic would be an understatement! 😆 IT WAS FLIPPIN' MAGICAL! 🤪 Best chapter yet, honest! 😉

Fave parts! 😉 (the parts where I was swooning at my computer screen and smiling like an idiot. 😆)

Asad holds Zoya from behind and starts pulling the reins of 'Black Beauty' to make her move.

Asad "You can stroke her mane. She won't mind you."

Zoya (Wow! Asad knew that I wanted to do this.)

Zoya "Why did she bow to me when she only bows to you?"

Asad "She bows to me and I bow down before you so you can figure the rest out I am sure."

Zoya (Asad at times says such beautiful things and that too without any attempts.)

Asad makes 'Black Beauty' take a huge leap but carefully making sure that Zoya doesn't slip.

Zoya "This is so amazing."

Asad "You'll soon be able to ride her on your own."

Zoya "She is amazing. I wonder why people think she is terrifying."

Asad "She has faced many hardships in the past. She grew without parents and for years her foot was damaged but she is a strong girl."

Zoya (OMG! Asad really has a pure heart. No wonder I got pulled towards him.)

BROWNIE THE HORSE! 😲 I LOVE IT! 😳 BROWNIE IS SUCH A CUTE NAME! AND THEN NUTTY! ❤️ OMG! AND ASYA WERE RIDING HORSES TOGETHER! OMG!

Asad "It's time for your lesson. And I won't be lenient."

Zoya "I don't mind as I am in love with my teacher."

Asad "Fortunately for you, your teacher loves his student back."

Asad "Now, let's begin."

Zoya (I am really nervous.)

Asad "Just be relaxed. I am there for you."

Zoya "I haven't done anything like this before. Not even shot a gun in a fair."

Asad "Have you played darts ever?"

Zoya "No! Not at all."

Asad "Have you ever focused at something continuously?"

Zoya "Obviously! Your eyes!"

Zoya (Asad is blushing. And he looks so cute.)

AAAH! SO CUTEEE!

Zoya holds up the arrow in the shooting position. Asad warps his arms on Zoya's arms and positions her hands correctly.

Zoya (Asad's proximity always gives me goosebumbs.)

Majorly romantic! 😉 😳

Zoya "I can't do it without you."

Asad "All you need is to just think about the target."

Zoya "But all I can think about is you."

Asad "Zoya!"

Zoya (Asad looks cuter when he fakes being angry.)

Zoya tries hitting the targets with little help and manages to usually strike between the middle and edge.

Asad "That's it for today. You were fabulous."

Zoya "And my treat?"

Asad looks here and there and after noticing that nobody is around, he kisses Zoya on her lips.

Zoya (Asad sure knows how to make my heart skip a beat.)

Haye, so sweet! ❤️

Zoya just hugged Dave in response only to pull away after Asad coughed.

Dave "I see green!"

Asad wrapped his hands around Zoya's waist to show his possessiveness.

Asad "I admit I am jealous."

Dave "Zoya is only yours and for me she is just a best friend... like a sister."

Zoya "Come on Dave! I'll show you the palace garden. It is beautiful."

Dave, Zoya and Asad walked in the gardens with Dave continuo sly teasing Zoya and Asad.

AWWW! 😃

Asad "I have always been proud of you. You released everyone but one."

Zoya (Who?)

Zoya "I don't see any bird here."

Asad "I was talking about me. You have captured me with your love. And I don't even want to be set free."

Zoya (I can't let you go even as a part of me would then be away from me.)

Asad "You are going to make history for sure. People will remember you for your bravery, kindheartedness and love."

Zoya (It feels great hearing this from Asad. It makes me feel that I can handle all of this.)

Zoya is so amazing and kind. ❤️ Like her, I believe that birds should be free and not caged. I'm SO happy that she let them go! 😳 That part was truly beautiful. 👏 👏 👏

Well, my point is that I really, really loved this update! 😆 This one and the last one are my two faves. 😉 Keep up the great work, Mahi! 👍🏼 And I'm sorry if this comment is ridiculously long. 😆

LOTS OF LOVE! 🤗 🤗

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 11 years ago

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