SILENCE...Chapter 4 UPDATE 31/1/2014

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Posted: 11 years ago
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KSG is only ASAD!

Disclaimer:
This is not the story for light hearted people..so if u r one..i suggest dont read it..
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prologue
A girl is running in the house..she is scared , tired and freked out..sweats are dripping all over body..her hands contains a blood mark and dress coated with shriek blood..she runs as she hears a voice behind her...she stumble upon something and screamed loudly..
"ayaan..ayaan.." she cries as she jerks the dead corpse..in front of her...
she pulls her body close to her heart as tears of pains scroll down her cheeks . a sudden hush on the door was enuf and she panicked..kissing ayaan's body on forehead she struggle herself to stand on feet...she drops a couple of time befor e completelt balancing on feet,.,
she looks at the body in front of her...and then run to hide..
she run towards a maximum turns but dint get any door open to hide..
finally she finds a big dinning table..she dragg herself on knees and slip inside the table..
she looks here and there and sigh as she feels she is safe..
just a minute later she shivers on a feeling she feels behind her...
its a foot step a giant foot step getting
closer and closure to her..
she keeps hand over mouth to stop moaning in fear..
but the feel of it so close make her escape a moan ..it was hardly audilble..but enuf for him to find her..
she feels a drag on her body and next thing she knows she is in his arms..
"tum?" "please..please chordo mujhe..please!" she begged to the figure which almost appeared like a shadow in dark..
she feels a pain as she is thrown on in the room... a dark room..
the wall hears a scream for about 20 minutes and when the door opens the figure step out of the door while humera is on the floor on her stomach and neck twisted on one side..her spine is broken form her neck..he body jerks as she is loosing blood and like an electric shock..no words comes out of her lips as she mouths to say something,,
her eyes have turned red as blood collect drop by drop and slowly slowly she reached to the edge of dying...

the figure turn back to her..and smiles at her misery..enjoys the feel of her dying..he mouths as he says..
"ab tumhe aana he hoga...ZOYA!" he laughed hysterically and dab his feet on her face...
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this is it..its a start..if u feel i should continue..comment and like this page..if i get good number of readers i will continue it..
remind u..its not a thriller storry but a horror one..
i promise i will reply to all if time permits..
Milli😃
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--Nihirash-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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m speechless,
no words,..
Lukng forward for horror nd suspence filled update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Horror!!!! I love it 🤗
You have to continue, Bas!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love horror story.please continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!... horror ... sounds good ... nothing can scared me away
then real QH serial

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Horrible. . .pls continous. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Horror n thriller is your forte, right??? ;)
N I love horror stories... continue soon...
N pm me...
Can I ask you something else too? Mm... whenever you write something, violent or not, please pm me. I won't always be searching the forum for new stories n I don't wanna miss a story by you... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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!!!!!!
ye kya hai???
*speechless*
but continue!! im a dark gal!!
*_*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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must say ur the best in wriring this type of stories
tnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love horror stories
Pls continue
Thanks for pm

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