~~ Asya FF: KNPH#1 (Say you love me) ~~ - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
inna tension na liya kar puttar padhai kar and do well in your exams ye comments nu goli mar inka kya hai aa jayenge tu tension na kari teri story witch dum hai and I te love your story too much hain ji padhai kar all the best hai ji and update soon hain puttar 😆😆😆😆😆
sorry watching karan sigh grover again and again his southafrica interview sardar ki aatma ghus gayi hai cant help it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1 more comment, until it reaches 75
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Nice. Hey buddy dont make asad as a cheater like previous update. It is realy very hard to accept asad as a cheater. May be he dont like zoya and always hurt her. But please dont make that asad sleep with that billi and make her pregnant. But i think in next chapter u r going to this way. In your previous verson asad too much harsh to zoya and always insult her.I read rantara version where raghu is very harsh towards antara. So this is my request please avoid this kind of stuff. Make it little sad for 4-5 chapters but dont make very sad and continuing torturing us with sad update. Because we r already very much upset and angry and depressed about current track. And now if wonderful writers like u also give sad story then how we survive for this depression.So i have some to my woderful story writer
1) dont make asad too harsh towards zoya
2) dont make that in every chapter and every moment asad insult zoya
3) dont make jannu sleeping and pregnancy track. This is never digestable for me.
4) not a cheater asad. Make a understandale asad in next updates that may be not accept zoya as wife but sometime appreciate zoya, care for zoya, a loving asad
5) last and least dont make it sad story
well this a reader request towards his writer rest is your hand.
Dont mind for my comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Superb update dear...
I also agree with AAK007...asad's image as a cheater & that pregnancy track is not digestable
i know its ur story...but i just stated my points...& anyways i will read ur story...i know soon all things will clear...so continue soon...waiting for the next update...
Thankew so much for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: skavya

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Superb update dear...</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I also agree with AAK007...asad's image as a cheater & that pregnancy track is not digestable</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i know its ur story...but i just stated my points...& anyways i will read ur story...i know soon all things will clear...so continue soon...waiting for the next update...</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thankew so much for pm😊</font>


thanks for agreeing with dear. Yes i never imagine asad cheat zoya by sleeping with billi. Well lets see how our writer present her story. Hope she listen our request.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
All the best for your exams... study well... do update when u have time... our story is awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Why r u nt continuing it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Part 2
Asad Rushed To Tanveer, And Found Her Sitting In a Park.
Tanveer Rushed To Him Hugged Him and Started crying.😡😡
Asad Was Shocked by her Sudden Action.
He took her face and Said
Asad - What happened Tanveer ? Why Are You crying?
Tanveer(Faking Cry)- Asad !!!! I...m.. P..re...Gn..ant!!
Asad Was Shocked!!!!
Asad - Taveer ur kidding right!!
Tanveer - No Asad
And Hugged asad😡
Asad- You will do abortion!!!
Tanveer- What Asad!!!
Asad- Abort or Break up!!!
Tanvver - Nekin Tum Mere Saath chalo doctor ke paass.
Asad- Nek...i..n...Fine!! Hum abhi chalenge!!
And They went to the doctor-
Doctor's Cabin
They Went and asked
Asad - Hamme abortion karna heean.
Doctor- Sorry but ek mahine ke baad hi ho sakta hai..
Asad- par kyun?
Doctor- pregnant hone apr jald se jald abortion kiya jayega toh apki patni ko khatrah hain.
Asad did not want tanveer to die and also wanted to kill the baby so he had no choice rather than waiting..
At Night-
Zoya was waiting for asad . She did not see him from morning and she was getting impatient.
Just then dilshad got a call
Dilshad - Hello
Asad - Ammi mein ghar raath ko aaonga office ka kaam hai..
Dilshad- but come home soon.
And Cut the phone. Dilshad formed ZOYA ABOUT ASAD . Zoya went crying To Her room.
At Night Asad didnt come home because he wanted to make tanveer to live in his farmhouse for 1 month. Tanveer Agreeed.

Precap - Zoya crying as she came to know about asad and tanveer. Asad Realized His Love

For Next Update I Need 120 Comments
I WILL open 2nd thread if i get 50 pages
Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
My poor Zoya😭😭😭 Asad is such a jerk😡 continue soon... eager to know what makes him realise his love... and one more request, next time can you give a bada wala update?😳 plshhh

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