AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Do you know you've got an amazing talent to write n portray emotions so well... I'll tell you why...
Till now I wasn't aware or acknowledging or better blissfully ignorant to what Zoya was going through... I knew she was sad... but I also knew Asad was sad... n when I thought I deduced Asad is more miserable... he's separated from her, is guilty sacrificed everything for his sister... he held my attention these many days... it never struck me what Zoya is going through... I don't know how even after being a girl I didn't get it... but today reading your update that letter Zoya sent to Asad I understand everything... I understand the gravity of the situation... the heartbreak n dejection Zoya went through... I understand it now...
Asad will have to go through fires of repentance before getting Zoya back...
"I cannot be your wife, after being your bhabhi" these words are powerful... n I believe this one sentence made me understand everything...
A brilliant update dear... :)

Edited by mysticlover - 11 years ago

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ruhiluvzaya

@ruhiluvzaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

its amezing

but ab kya hoga..?

asya kab milenge kya ayaan unhe mila ayega?

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Superb part dear...
Update nxt part soon...

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

OMG! Monica you made me cry! Like I'm sitting here and crying while typing this! 😭 😭

This was such a sad but good update! 😭 👏

I think I read that letter from Zoya about three times! You have written it beautifully! 👍🏼

So since you know you are such a fab writer and very much logical and in demand (well on IF that is 😆). Tell me when are you going to work on the show and fix this whole stupid track! 😛 😆

But seriously amazing job as usual! But I think I'm still tearing! I want to know what Asad does so please update soon 😃

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

awesome...!! ab rone se kya hoga asad miya galti to ap kr hi chuke hain...

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Maheerah

@maheerah_khan

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Weekend is almost over! Is the update done??

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: Maheerah
Weekend is almost over! Is the update done??

Haha it's still Saturday night here 😛😛😛

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Maheerah

@maheerah_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: mochhug

Haha it's still Saturday night here 😛😛😛

And you know sunday flies away like anything...😛

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#459

u r amazng..d correct dose of emotions

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#460

How did I miss commenting on the 4th part? 😕

I have no words except for:

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Monica, you write so beautifully. Zoya's and Asad's pain came through loud and clear and pierced my heart. You are excellent in writing emotional scenes. 👏

Ab, baba, mein haat jodke aapse binti karti hoon ki happy ending dikhaeye. Please! Bahut ro liya Asad aur Zoya ke saat hum logo ne. Ab toh happy aur romantic scene toh banta hai boss. How about reverse Mangalpur with Zoya screaming Asaaaddd!

Gul mata does not listen to the pankahs. I know you will and bring a big 😃 to our face.

Even if you have to use duffer Ayaan to set things right!! 😉 Go girl and may the force be with you!!