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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiii guys...how r uh ol?...m thnkn of writing a new ss relating to ongoin track...m fed up of dis track so i thought i shld ryt...anyways the storyline lyn will be d same bt in my story zoya's abbu truth will be out nd more romantic moments between asya nd there reunion...
So wht do thnk guys i shld strt or nt?
Part 1 -http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=2
Part-2 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=4&#p93120398
part-3
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=7
Part-4
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=9&#p93597991
Part-5
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=12
part-6
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=16
part-7
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=22&#p94466735
Part-8
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=27
Teaser
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=33
Part-9
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=36&#p94996570
Part-10
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=40&#p95026625
Note:-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=44&#p95125023
Part-11
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=47&&loggedin=1
Part-12
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=51&#p95226529
Part-13
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=55&#p95249091
Part-14
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=59&#p95318797
Teaser
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=64&#p95419421
Part-15
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=67
Part-16
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=74&#p95641831
Part-17
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=79&#p95901799
Part-18
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=83&#p96072128
Part-19
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=89&#p96345806
Part-20
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752674&TPN=98&#p96521965
Thread 2😊
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3824122#p96577507
Love Vish❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys m updatng my story sorry for short update but as it is first part so i wanted to know how was it...so it starts with zoya taking permission from everyone to visit khan mansion to meet her phoophie after two days of her marrige
Part-1
In the morning at sidiqui's
Zoya-main ap sbse kch bat krna chahti hu
Rashid-bolo beta...
Zoya-vo main ek din ke liye phoophie ke ghr jana chahti hu..
Siddqui-tum shyd janti nh ho pr is ghr mein un logo ka nam bhi nh lete aur tum vaha jana chahti ho...nh hum tumhe ijazat nh denge
Zoya-lekin vo mri ammi jaisi h aur rhi bat ap logo ki toh apko jo krna h vo kriye pr mjh pr apne rules nd regulations mt thopiye...plz abbu mjhe vaha jane ki ijazat de dijiye...
Rashid-thk hai beta lekin kal vapis aa jana kuki parso nikhat ki sagaayi h..
Siddiqui-yeh tum kya keh rhe ho rashid tum jante bhi ho(cuting him in between)
Rashid-jee main janta hu ki main kya keh rha hu aur vaise bhi yeh meri bahu h toh main iske liye faisle le sakta hu...jao beta tum tyat jo jao ayaan tumhe chod ayega
Zoya-koi bat nh abbu main khud challi jaungi
Rashid-plz
Zoya-ok abbu main abhi tyar hokar ati hu

At khan mansion
Dilshaad is very upset with the situation and is missing her zoya...than only doorbell rings
Dilshaad-zoya tum yaha
She hugged her tightly and cried her heart out and zoya olso hugged her back and cried...
Only she knows how much she missed this familiar touch the warmth
Aasd who is siting in his room comes out to the livinf area to see what is happening and as he sees zoya is shocked and stucl to the place where he is not able ro beleive what he witnessed...
So how was it?plz tel me through the comments and likes ans also tell if uh dnt lyk it plz let me knw

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-12
IN khan mansion
Zoya was cleaning the kitchen, asad cam out of the room dressed in his office clothes zoya saw him
Zoya-asad ap kahi ja rahe hai?(r uh going somewhere asad?)
Asad-ha vo main office ja raha hu(yes m going to office)
Zoya-what? Plz tell me one thing after marridge on the very first day who goes to office
Asad-m sorry jaan but its really urgent i have to go i promise i ll return after 2 hours
Zoya-fine go i wont stop Saying so she goes to her room and slams the door hard thumm
Asad-oh no now i will have to make up for this ya allah why olways its me
Zoya was getting bored in the house. After sometime the maine door clicked open she knew who was on the door instead of welcoming him she pretended as if she is sleeping. Asad was expecting this so without wasting any time he entered the room and saw zoya sleeping he went and sat beside her
Asad-baby wake up see i am back, after getting no response he understood that she is not sleeping
Asad thought-now how will i cheer her suddenly an idea came in his mind
Asad caressed her face lovingly and said(As zoya did to asad on his birthday)-zoya ap sote hue kitne cute lagte ho bilkul chote bache ki tarah. I love you so much meri cute princess saying so he pulled her cheeks a little hard(purposly😛)
Zoya in her mind-yeh actions thode jaane pehchane lag rahe hai(our innocent zoya 😃)but she didnt respond to him
Asad-aww mere bache ko zor se lag gayi. He started stroking her cheeks and placed kisses on both her cheeks and said-ab thik hai ab mere chote baby ko dard toh nahi ho raha
Zoya-haww uh lier that means uh were not sleeping that day
Asad-no i was not sleeping(puppy+innocent lyk a baby face)
Zoya-i ll never talk to uh, and saying so again laid on the bed
Asad also laid on her an rested his head on her chest and hugged her like a small child hugging her mother-sorry na baby meeting was really very importnt plz forgive me. Zoya liked this gesture of his and snaked her one hand on his back and with the other hand she stroked his hairs loving pulling him more closer
Asad-zoya?
Zoya-hmm
Asad-uh knw on my birthday when uh treated me like a baby i felt very good the feeling was out of the world. You toh knw that i have not experienced my childhood but when uh pampered me that day i felt as if i olso have the right to be happy and to be pampered, A tear escaped from his eyes and fell on zoya's skin
Zoya-aww plz dont cry with that she placed a kiss on his forehead
Asad-zoya i want to feel as a child and want to feel that how uh feel when uh r pampered. I am not saying uh too pamper me with gifts and suprises because that is my job but i want uh to pamper me with ur sweet love
Zoya-i promise uh asad uh ll olways remain my first child but if uh have forgotten than let me tell uh that i have olso not experoenced my childhood so who will pamper me[With a cute pout]
Asad-obviously me bcoz noone has the power to pamper uh nd love uh except me, with that he gave a quick peck on her lips converting the pout intp smile and again rested his head on her chest
Zoya-asad i want to ask sumthing from uh?
Asad-carry on
Zoya-if uh desired me nd wanted to have me thn why didnt uh had sex with me on our bachelors party nyt?
Asad-bcoz main chahta ki tum us beautiful moment ko feel karo nd moreover main nahi chahta tha uh regret it i knw uh woul have not but still i wanted to do it after our marrige
Zoya-aww uh knw uh the cutest,swtest and best man in this world i love you
Asad-i love you too
Wit that they both remained in the same position and slept for sometime.
You knw what guys yesterday i wished uh diwali through the pm but none of uh replied i waited for a long tym but not a single person replied. I am very upset with ol of uh so here is a short update not a long one. Bye take care do comment and tell me hows it if i get good comments than i ll definatelly update it today. I know i m behaving lyk a little child but its ok

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Hiii guys how are you all? Thnku ol for ur wonderful comments they really make my day and also they are very inspiring. This part i dedicated to shreya nd akshaya di my new friends. Vaise anyone of uh have ever experienced that amazing moment when uh write half of the part and suddenly mobile gets switched off and all data just vanish huh i hate it now i have to write it again
Part-15
All four couples seated on four different benches which were face to face so that they all can talk to eachother easily.
Zoya-asad ku na hum sab sath mein honeymoon pe chale vaise bhi yeh log bhi kahi nahi gaye.
Asad-good idea infact kisi ko koi problem bhi nahi hogi.
Najma-ap log honeymoon par jaa rahe ho.
Zoya-sirf hum nahi tum sab bhi chal rahe ho hum sabse bat kar lenge bas haseena bi, with that she stop and looks down.
Imraan-unse main bat kar lunga vaise bhabhi ammi ne aj bht galat bola so uske liye main apse sorry kehta hu plz unhe maaf kar dijiye
Zoya-are koi bat nahi ha yeh sach hai ki mjhe unki baton ka bura laga tha par jab tak mere asad aur ammi mere sath hai i dont care, with najma stood and just hugged zoya tightly
Najma-ap sach mein bht achi hai zoya oops bhabhijaan i luv uh
Zoya-i luv uh tamatar
Humaira-wow
Ayaan-kya baat hai humaira begum ap bahut excited hai honeymoon pe jaane ke liye, all smile and humaira just blushed.
Zoya-ok so kaha jaana hai?
Nikhat-kisi religious place chalte hai.
Zoya-ya allah koi apne honeymoon ke liye religious place pe jata hai kya? Asad kaisi antique nanand di hai apne.
Asad-thik toh keh rahi hai vo hum log allah ke paas jakar apne khusiyon ke liye duaa mangenge.
Najma-ok than lekin hum log kisi aur jagah jayenge.
Zoya-hum kisi aur hi jagah jayenge tamatar hehe tumhara matlab kya hai kehne ka?.
Imraan-inka matlab yeh hai ki is bar hum ksi aur ke mazab ke riligious place par jayenge bilkul different experience ryt najma?
Najma just nodded, zoya, humaira and ayaan-ohh hoo
Zoya-vaise i have a place in my mind
Asad-batayiye na.
Zoya-meri ek firend hai jo punjabi hai and vo last year ek jagah gayi thi whts that umm ya 'Hemkunt Sahib' we can go there because she told me that palce is very beautiful and full of nature.
Asad-kaha hai yeh jagah?
Zoya-utrakhand but exact place main apko google karke bata dungi and uh knw what unho ne toh mujhe specially kaha tha ki main jab bhi jaau apne husband ke sath hi jaau with a blush
All-ohhh. All were sitting and were discussing about the destinations. All the girls were wearing full sleeved suits except zoya who was wearing a very thin top and capree. The environment was very cold and zoya was feeling very cold, to reduce the shivers and cold sensation she was rubbing her arms everyone one busy in their talks so she didnt want to disturb anyone. After few seconds she felt a very warm thing against her upper body and she turned and saw asad was wrapping his blazer around his shoulder.
Zoya-arey its fine asad m fyn uh wear it uh olso must be feeling cold.
Asad-ya but its ok uh wear it plz.
Zoya-ok thn lets do one thing because i cant see uh shivering frm cold
Asad-wht?
Zoya just signalled him to keep quiet and she sat on his lap and then covered the blazer around both of them and than she held asad's arms and wrapped it around her body so that she can get warmth from his embrace, she rested her head on his chest and wrapped her arms around his back and hugged and cuddled more into his warmth they both were looking very cute at that romantic moment in the chilling breeze under the moon light. Everyone stopped for a moment and admired the beautiful couple infront of them.
All the girls-awww uh both r so adorable
Asad- so lets go for dinne or we will remain here only?
Everone nodded and one by one left for dinner.
Asad to zoya-now what uh ll do my fix-it-ol now uh cant cover me neither i can do tht
Zoya-dnt forget asad zoya can do everything in this world
Asad-lets see
Asad sat on bike following by zoya. Zoya hugged him so tightly tha there was no space for air also, than she wrapped the jacket aroynd both of them.
Zoya- see i told uh i can do anything.
Asad-ya whatever. After having they all retired to their homes.
In asya's rooms
Asad-zoya apko thand lagi thi na?
Zoya- ha bt now i am ok
Asad-but mujhe lag rahi hai thand
Zoya-wait main apke liye blanket lati hu
Asad-no na kaisi biwi hai ap apne shauhar ki needs ko nahi smajhti
Zoya suppressing her smile-tbhi toh apko blanket de rahi
Asad- i dont need blanket i need uh i want uh
Zoya snaked her arms around his neck-toh roka kisne hai, With that he smacked his lips on her and they had a wonderful night.
That's all for now i know its a short but till december uh ll get short updates plz bear with me. Plz do tell me how was it?
Love Vish❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

First of all Happy Guru Nanak Jayanti to ol of uh may god bless uh ol😊...Hii guys how are uh ol? Thnku so mch for ol ur comments they really motivate me. So here is the part plz do tel me how's it?
Part-18
Early[4:00am] in the morning in asya room
Zoya was awake because she was sleeping from last evening, she thought of waking asad but seeing him peacefully lyk a baby she dropped the idea. She was admiring his sweetheart, she placed awt kisses oloever his face. Asad awake with sudden kisses but was very tired to respond so he decided to sleep and let zoya do wht she wants. Zoya started unbuttoning his shirt, she caressed his upper body very lovingly she placed wet kisses ol over his chest and six packs. After kissing his body she pecked his lips, when she was about to leave the bed asad pulled her towards him and kissed her hard, after breaking the kiss zoya was shocked.
Zoya-ap jag rahe the?
Asad-ha i was njoying ol this but when uh stopped i felt bad so i kissed uh.
Zoya-oh so apki ninni puri ho gayi[Caressing his face and speeking in baby voice]
Asad-ha aur apki tabiyat thk hai?
Zoya-ha kind of actualy thand ki vajah se hai so koi bat nahi now i am fine.
Asad-ok so lets get ready.
Zoya-hm asad bht thand hai mujhe nahi nahana[Like a baby].
Asad-par ok fyn dre clean urself bcoz aj hume darshan nahi karne but kal nahana pdega apko
Zoya-yeah ok kal main nahaungi but aj main sirf dry clean karke ati hu. After sometime both were ready, zoya was combing her hair and applying mosturizer, asad was sitting on the bed and admiring her. Zoya came to asad and started applying mosturizer on his face.
Asad was njoying this but acted-zoya yeh ap kya kar rahe ho i am not a kid and vaise bhi men dont use ol dis.
Zoya-firstly uh r my kid so stop struggling nd chup krke baitho yeh boys bhi lagate hai and thn she applied lip balm on his lips.
Zoya-mjhe ammi ne bttaya tha ke apko bht gusa ata hai jab apki skin kharab ho jati hai thand mein and vaise bhi yeh sab main specially apke liye layi hoon
Asad-ammi ne apko kab btaya.
Flashback:-
Once talikng to dilshad before asya nikah dilshad ne baton baton mein zoya ko btaya tha
Dilshaad-zoya tumhe pata hai asad jab chota tha na toh vo kabhi sardio mein moustrizer nh lagat tha aur phr mre pas ata tha'ammi dekhona meri skin phat gayi thand ki vjh se' and thn i used to apply ol this forcefully on his face and body,
Flashback Ends
Asad-tab main bacha tha.
Zoya-ab bhi ap bache hi ho mere cute se baby ho[Pulling his cheeks]oh my cutie pie.
Asad naughty-vaise yeh konsa flavour hai hum dono ke lip balm ka?
Zoya-um pta nahi mujhe padne ka tym nahi mila bht jldi jldi mein hua sab kuch.
Asad-ok thn let me taste it and tel uh which flavour it is. With that he smacked his lips on hers and tasted her lip balm by sucking her lips
Asad--its strawberry and whts mine?
Zoya-um urs is pineapple vaise bht naughty ho gaye hai ap.
Asad-its our honeymoon so itna toh banta chalo lets go sab wait kar rahe honge hmara.
Zoya-hm lets go but before that let me apply the balm again and mostrizer properly on ur face, arms, neck thn v ll leave.
Asad-apne laga lia moustrizer?
Zoya-ha ku?
Asad with a pout-yeh toh glt bat hai apne toh mjhe laga dia par meri toh bari hi nahi.
Zoya-aww koi bat nahi kal ap laga lena ok?
Asad-yes.
After 5-10 mins they both left theie room and walked towards other couples waiting for thm near the starting point. At 6:00am they both started their journey, they started their journey walking bcoz they wanted to experience th nature. They ol were walking hand in hand and clicking pictures of beautiful scenes.
That's it guys ihope u lyk it. Plz do tel me hows it through ur cmnts and lykes😊.
Love Vish❤️

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Hiii guys how are you all? Thnku so mch for ur comments. Here i am posting part-19 plz do have a luk and let me hows it through ur comments and lykes.
Part-19
Location-Yatra of Hemkunt Sahib
All were walking, clicking pictures with eachother. After walking for 4hours all were hungry and tired to they have covered 9kms in that span of time.
Zoya-asad chalo na kuch kha lete hai bht bhuk lagi hai.
All-ha bhaijaan lets take a break.
Asad-ok yaha rukte hai[Pointing towards a dhaba]
Discription of dhaba-Dhaba was on the stones actually full yatra was on stones proper road was not there. Ice was melting and was flowing in the form of water, water was flowing in a very fast speed, itna fast ki agar koi gir jaye to dere is no chance of survival but it was really very beautiful. Tables and chairs were set in an open area, firstly the mountains[Some covered with snow] were a treat to the eyes than the water flowing, the voice of that water flowing was just awesome. Basically it was the best dreamland, it was not less than heaven[I personally loved that place very much and sorry if i failed in giving uh proper description but it was lyk jeete jee jannat mein aa jana😉].
Everyone's jaw fell down seeing the most beautiful site infront of them-wow.
Zoya-asad yeh kitni beautiful jagah hai oh my God the best place.
Asad-yes it is mindblowing and romantic too[Last word to himself].
All sat there and ordered for aloo parantha. All were so tired that they slept on their on chairs. But our zoya is special case so she placed her chair close to Asad's and side hugged him and slept, asad also hugged her back, they all slept for about 20 mins and were disturbed by the waiter.
Zoya-oh my god itni achi nind mjhe ajtak nh ayi, ek toh jagah mashallah itni sundar hai and upar se yeh thndi thndi havayein[In asad's ear] aur mre shauhar ki bahon mein sona toh is cherry on the top. Asad smiled listening. And they all ate their breakfast and enjoyed their yummy breakfast.
Zoya-now come lets click some pics chaliye na asad vaha ani ke pas chlte hai kitna awesome lag raha hai vo.
Asad-no zoya its risky plz ap yahi se dekhiye na.
Zoya-kya hai apko main khud hi chali jati hu. Nd befor anyone could stop her she ran from there, as she reached there she was unable to stop herself nd she tripped. She was about to fall when one a man of 40-45 held her hand and saved her.
Man-beta ji ap thik toh hai?
Zoya was so scared she only wanted one thing and that is her husband. On the other hand Asad and ol others ran towards her and asad hugged her tightly. Zoya was scared but now she was fine she also hugged him tightly. They both had tears in their eyes but there one was disturbed by someone's talkngs
Othe man-shukr hai tym pe un uncle ne sambhala hota toh pta nahi kya hota is ladki ka. And listening to this our angry young man was back.
Asad-apko bilkul bhi fark nh padta mana kia tha na apko phr ku ayi ap yaha pe. How can uh be so careless. Saying so he turned and stood alone from everyone, he was thinking about what would have happen if that nyc man would have not saved her. Suddenly she felt to arms around his waist and chest.
Zoya in her sobs-i am sorry asad i promise i ll not do that again.
Asad didnt say anyting and shrugged her hands off. Zoya turned him and made him face her. She kissed him tightly on his cheek and hugged him tightly again, this time asad also hugged her back.
Asad-apko pata hai main kitna dar gaya tha ap ku karte hai aisi harkatein agar apko ana hi tha toh main apko leke ata par nahi apko toh musibat mein padna hota hai apna nahi toh kam se kam hmara toh khayal kia hota. Agar apko kuch ho jata toh hum mar[BUT ZOYA covered his mouth with her hand]
Zoya-plz aise mat kahiye i am sry aage se aisa nahi karungi. And saying so they both hugged again. All there siblings and some more people clapped.
Asad to uncle-thnku uncle so much ap nahi jante apne aj mere upar kitna bada aisan kia hai.
Uncle-oh koi ni putar yeh mri beti jaisi hai bhagwan ap dono ko khush rakhe.
Zoya-thnku uncle sach mein agar ap nahi hote toh pata nahi kya ho jata.
Uncle-jo hua nahi uske bare mein kya sochna and he left from there.
[Note-people there are truly very helpful without any selfishness and real relation they help eachother. This is the only of the things which touched my heart]
All clicked pics on that place, asya also went near the water and played but this time they both were careful. They also clicked pics in titanic pose. Everyone played with the cold water and also enjoyed there special moments. After resting for sometime they proceeded there yatra.
So i am finally done plz do tell me hows it, and sorry if i failed in describing the places.
Love Vish❤️

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Hiii guys how are uh ol? Thnku so mch for ur lovely comments and thnku for understanding me guys really thnku.
Part-20
Yatra of Hemkunt Sahib😊
They all covered first half of the journey till afternoon. They all were resting in their rooms. Next day they all again started their journey. After many hours of walking they all reached their destination.
Najma-oh my god this is so beautiful. Full area was covered by snow , it was really cold zoya's head was aching but she didnt tell it to anyone except asad.
Some information:-
On the top i.e. Where the main gurudwara[a place where sikhs and punjabi worship lyk church, dargah, temple] is there there is a kind of lake named 'Hemkunt Sahib Sarovar' the water in that lake is spcially melted by some people before the journey starts so that people can take bath. It is said, that the water[Which we cal amrit] is truly magical, if uh take bath in that water with purity ur all problems will be vanished. And it is also sad if uh dont take bath in that amrit thn ur journey is incomplete. People ol take tht water to their home in bottles or ny other container.
Men can take bath in open and for girls it was a place covered in private. So all the girls took there clothes and went inside and boys took bath in open. Before going
Asad-zoya plz baby zada mat nahan bcoz uh olready have severe headache plz.
Zoya lyk a child-ok
The water was really cold all of them took quick bath and gathered at a place. They ol entered the gurudwara after waiting for long, they ol offered there prayers.
Zoya and ol joined their hands as told by uncle
Zoya-baba ji[Our God] plz hum sab pe apni meher bnaye rakhna plz bless us. Maine aur asad ne bht dukh sahe hai plz ab hume kabhi alag mat karna meri family ko hmesha khush rakhna. Asad olso did the same prayer. After sitting inside for sometime as sitting their gives uh a unique peace which uh cant get anywhere else, thet ol came out and than ate the parshad. As parshad only khichdi and tea is offered bcoz its not gud to have heavy meal bcoz of the environmant and the fact tht they have to go down.
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When they ol were returning back ol took the long way whereas zoya insted to go from stairs which was a short cut as wel as risky, asad has to agree on it otherwise she would have gone alone.[Note- I have experienced this personally that was really scary but we took that path bcoz of someone else. But they are the moments which i cherrish till now.] When they were walking suddenly drizzling strted, the stones on which they were walking were now alll slippery. Asya held eachothers hands tightly, bcoz if uh slip thn uh ll directly fall down deep nd there is no chance of survival. They both took slow and small steps very carefully, a point came when asad slipped and was about to fall but zoya held his hand tightly and others also supported him. Zoya was queit all her journey asad noticed this and also asked her but she said that she is fyn. They again started their walking. In the evening they all reached down.
As zoya was quiet so Asad said-ok so go and have some rest.
Ayaan-nahi bhaijaan plz aj no rest aj only masti nd masti.
Najma and ol-yes bhaijaan plz.
Asad-ok so milte hai phr 1 ghante badmilte hai. In his thoughts 'till thn main apni begum ka mood thk karta hu'
All-ok. And ol left for their rooms.
Asya room
Asad came out of the washroom and saw that zoya is sitting in the same position not even moved an inch. He advanced his feet towards her direction and sat with her.
Asad-hi baby
Zoya sad- hii
Asad-kya hua jaan ku itna sad ho ap?
Zoya-kuch nahi.
Asad-kuch toh hua hai btaiye na plz
Zoya just hugged him tightly and cried, asad also hugged her back.
Asad while caressing her back-ssshhh kya hua btayie toh sahi.
Zoya-i am sorry asad aj meri zid ki vajah se ap girte girte bach gaye i was so near to lose uh. I am very bad main bht gandi wife hu apne hi shauhar ki jaan jaukhim mein dal di maine.
Asad-its ok baby nd mjhe kuch nahi hua i am fyn jab tak ap mere sath hai ntng can happen to me uh held me so tightly thn hww can i fall nd dnt be sry bcoz ur every wish is my command no matr wht so stop crying.
Zoya-i love uh❤️
Asad-i love uh too my jaan with kissing her forehead❤️ now stop crying go and freshen up sab ate hi honge vaise hows ur headache now?
Zoya-abhi hai thoda bht.
Asad-toh main sabko mana kar deta hu uh take rest
Zoya-no plz i am fn nd room mein hi toh hai sab kitna khush i dnt want to spoil there mood.
Asad-but
Zoya-plz
Asad-ok
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After sometime ol gathered and decide to play truth and dare.
Asad-ok so main sabke liye kuch khane ko lata hu aj dinner yahi karte hai till thn uh strt it.
Farhaan-main bhi chlta hu bhaijaan.
Precap-truth and dare nxt part mixture of romance, anger, care total package😉
Phew i am done now its ur turn to tel me hows it through ur lykes nd cmnts.
Love Vish❤️

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Hii guys how r uh ol? Uh must be thinking that y m giving this update so early, actually my firend shreya is going out for 8 days so i thought to give it early so that i can get unres cmnt. So plz shreya do comment on it. Thanku so much guys for ol ur lovely comments.
Part-16
In morning at KM
Dilshaad has returned back and all were having breakfast.
Dilshaad-so tum dono ne ek dusre ko kya gift dia?
Zoya just stood from her chair and went to dilshaad.
Asad thought-ya allah meri pagal biwi ko thodi toh akal do. Zoya was about to lift her top but dilshaad closed her eyes.
Dilshaad-zoya aisi harkate apni shauhar ke samne karte hai naki saas ke aage.
Zoya-ammi ap bhi na jaiye katti main apko btaungi bhi nahi
Dilshaad-are sory mri pagl ladki main toh mazak kar rahi thi acha dikhayo kya dia tumne
Zoya shows her the tatoo, Dilshaad-mashaallah bht khubsurat hai[while caressing it]dard nahi hua tumhe.
Zoya-hua tha but jiske liye yeh gift tha uske liye toh jaan bhi hazir hai phri yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai[Asad was very touched by this]vaise ammi main toh apke nam ka bhi ek banvane vali thi par socha bad mein banaungi coz bht dard ho raha tha.
Dilshaad-sach mein pagal ho tum, vaise asad ne kya dia?
Zoya shows asad's tatoo
Dilshaad had tears-allah tum dono ki jodi aur khusiyo ko salamat rakhe.
Seeing asad emberresed zoya-asad dont wry main paka aur kisi ko nahi bataungi Suddenly they heard 'WOW' and turned in the direction from where the voice came. There on the door all the siblings were standing there.
Ayaan-wow bhaijaan ap kitne romantic hai
Najma-yes bhaijaan. Asad was lukng at zoya and zoya was giving i-didnt-do-nythng. Dilshaad seeing all dis changed the topic.
Dilshaad-asad beta tumne honeymoon ke bare mein kuch socha?
Asad-jii ammi agar apki ijazat ho toh hum sab kal hi niklna chahenge coz sabki yahi farmayish hai.
Dilshaad-no prblm beta vaise sab kon?
Asad-ammi yeh sab bhi jayenge apko koi problem toh nahi hai na.
Dilshaad-nahi bete mjhe koi prblm nahi hai infact tumne mere muh ki bat cheen li main tumse yahi kehne vali thi. Chaloo tum sab baitho main apne room mein ja rh hu rest karne koi zarurat ho toh bula lena
Asad-ji ammi, dilshaad left and all sat in living area.
Zoya-ok now listen to me guys vaha par no mens are allowed in 3 piece suit.
Ayaan-haha r uh serious mona kon apne honeymoon pe 3 piece suit pehen ke jata hai.
Zoya-yeh jo mere item shauhar hai na yeh zrur soch rahehonge.
Ayaan-i am not surprised vaise bhai she is ryt plz dnt take formal clothes.
Asad-main vaise bhi nahi lene vala tha.
Zoya-ok another thing girls uh can wear nythng there ur bhaijaan will not stop uh hai na baby
Asad was so lost in her beauty that without listening he nodded in yes. Everyone was shocked to see this syd of asad.
Zoya-ok now uh ol go and pack ur bags v have to leave early morning.All-ok
In morning
All were ready to leave.
Dilshaad-asad-zoya sabka khyaaal rakhna kuki tum in sabse bade ho. Aur ha asad tum meri choti bachi zoya ka bhi khayaal rakhna ku harkato mein yahi sabse choti hai.
Zoya-haww ammi
Asad-dekha teasing her
Dilshaad-zoya dnt wry beta main tumhe bhi ek duty de rh hu mere is chote bache asad ka khayal rakhna
Asad-ammi
Zoya-yes thnku ammi dnt wry main khayal rakungi
Dilshaad-aur ha in short sare pati patni ek dusre ka khayal rakhna. Bye allah hafiz and have a safe journey.
Asad-bye ammi allah hafiz thnku.
[Note-i dnt knw ki is type ki koi bus hoti hai ke nahi but yes tempo zarur hota hai.]Asad has hired a mini bus for ol of them in which instead of seats gadde were there so that there journey would be comfortable. Asad has hired this bus so that they all can be comfortable[Our overprotective asad]. All the couples were sitting with eachother hand in hand. All were having full on masti they all were having fun. Zoya was fully enjoying herself asad was being himself and was not able to be the part of masti. Asad was happy seeing zoya so happy. It was one full day they were travelling than at night all slept.
Zoya-asad mujhe nind aayi hai.
Asad-aa gayi apko apne shauhar ki yaad?
Zoya than realised that she has totally forgotten that he was not at all njoying thmselves.
ZOYA WITH TEARS-i am so sorry asad main apko bhul hi gayi kaisi biwi hu main i am really sorry, with that she placed kisses all over his face.
Asad-i am sorry zoya mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga infact apko khush dekhke mujhe bht khushi hui and main toh mazak kr rha tha mera apko hurt karne ka koi irada nahi tha
Zoya-i am sry aisi galti kabhi nahi hogi. She hugged him tightly and rested her head on his chest. She was cuddling more into his embrace. Asad also hugged her back and pulled har more closer into him, soon they both slept with a smile plastered on their faces.
So i am done, now its ur turnto tell how was it.
Love Vish❤️

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Continuation of part-7
Zoya was more than happy to see so much love and sad to see fear of losing her in his eyes but Seeing asad so broken and ol teary zoya decided to lighten the mood
Zoya with a puppy face-asad agar ap mere bhai ban gaye toh problem ho jayengi
Asad small smile on his face-apka kuch nahi ho sakta aisi situation mein bhi mazaak kar leti hai aap vaise maine kaha ki bhai ki tarah chedunga yeh nahi kaha ki bhai banunga
Suddenly asad's smile was faded and more fresh tears made there way. Zoya noticed this and said-kya hua asad?
Asad-aap ko mujh par itna bhi vishwas nahi tha vaise bhi ap hi kehti hai na ki main apni ammi ka beta hu toh usi tarah apn bhi toh apni ammi ki beti hai. Plz zoya promise me that uh ll never ever try to do this again
Zoya- i promise uh asad main ab apko kabhi nahi chodke jaungi
with they both hugged tightly and asad kissed her on cheeks sucked the tears from her cheeks and zoya olso kissed him on his cheeks and sucked ol his tears and again hugged eachother but were disturbed
Najma-main akeli reh gayi mujhe bhi apne bhaijaan aur bhabhi jaan ko hug karna hai and saying the trio hugged
Zoya-ammi aap itni door ku khadi hai aayie na idhar
Dilshad-mat kaho mujhe ammi. Agar ammi samajhti toh itni bada kadam na uthati tum itni selfish kabse ho gayi zoya tumne ek bar bhi nahi socha ki tumhe kuch ho jata toh hum sabka kya hota
Zoya-sorry ammi i promise aj ke bad kabhi aisa nahi karungi and ap aaj ke bad kabhi mat kehna ki ap meri ammi nahi hai
Dilshad-nahi kahungi par tum bhi aisa mat karna nahi toh main tumse bat bhi nahi karungi and bahut pitayi karungi
With that they both hugged and soon asad and najma also joined them
Precap-zoya and siddqui talk and many more sorrys
Pheww i have finally given a long update and did my homework so its nw ur duty to give me long long comments and tell me hows the update
Till than take care hasta la vista bbye take care luv uh ol

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Continuation of Part-8
In khan mansion
Zoya was resting in her room and also waiting for asad with his hand made pizza. Asad came and sat near to zoya seeing her sleeping he stroked her hairs and placed sweet kiss on her forehead
Asad-zoya ith jao dekho main tumhare liya tumhara pizza bnake le aya taste karke batao kaisa hai
Zoya with help of asad sath on bed
Asad-kahke batao na kaisa hai?
Zoya -nahi khaungi
Asad-ku maine itne pyaar se banaya hai khake toh dekho
Zoya-jab itne pyaar se banaya hai toh utne hi pyaar se khilao bhi toh sahi
Asad-oh toh madam mere hathon se khana chahti hai
Zoya-umm
With that asad fed her one bite and asked her with excitemnet hows it
Zoya supressing her smile-acha nahi hai mr. Khan bht ganda bana hai agar apka man nahi tha toh pehle bata dete main nahi kehti apko
Listening to all this asad's face drop and he was very upset
Asad-koi bat nahi ap yeh rehne dijiye main abhi apke liye bahar se order kar deta hu. Saying so he was about to leave when zoya held his hand
Zoya-aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ki jahapanah kuch apni kaneez ke liye banaye aur vo acha na bane yeh world ka best pizza hai(Seeing him still upset she held her ears)sorry asad
With that they both fed eachother. Near their lips cheese was there on both there faces. Seeing cheese on zoya's face asad just leaned towards her and licked the cheese from her face leaving a shocked zoya
Zoya-yeh kya tha mr.khan
Asad-vo actually ap bacho ki tarah khati hai so apke face pe chees laga tha so maine socha khane ki cheezo ko waste nahi karte isliye maine kha lia vo(innocent face like a baby)
Zoya-acha main bacho ki tarah khati hu aur aapne apne ap ko dekha hai kaise khate hai
Asad-matlab?
Zoya- matlab yeh saying so she also licked the cheese from his face'matlab yeh ki apke face pe bhi laga tha
Asad-acha zoya ap plz so jaiye bcoz abhi bhi ap week hai but befor that take ur medicines
Zoya afetr taking her medicines-asad apko yad hai na apne kaha tha ki ap mujhe ammi aur abbu ki tarah pamper karenge
Asad-ha yad hai mujhe swthrt
Zoya-toh mujhe bed par nahi sona apki godi mein sona hai bht tym se main chain se nahi soyi aj main apke godi mein chain se sona chahti hu
With that Asad sat leaning his body against the bed and signalled her to keep her head on his lap. Zoya kept her head on asad's lap asad was gently stroking her hair and within no time she dozzed of to sleep. Seeing the beautiful angel infront of him asad kissed her forehead spet peacfully
Precap-girls bachelor party and ol the girls full on talli
Phew a very long update for those who complained that last one was a short update. Ok guys as m working hard and giving you long updates so plz uh olso give me long comments and sorry but from next time i ll pm only those who will comment. And tell me one thing more guys i am thinking of showing a bold zoya being a little intimate with asad being a little besharam so plz tell me whther i should do it or not no respond means i shld not do it. Bye guys have take care