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Mayee2217 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
GOD..that was sooo intense!!!Please update sooonnn!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!

I know u hav posted 2 chapters n I hav not read dem but I was busy...ill read dem soon n post a longyy comment! 😃

im back finally!!!

So widout wating anymore time her are my comments for ch 14b:

There were no introductory lines in this update 😭 but its okay 😃

street food! I also just love it 😳 aapko canada mein nhi milta hoga na di😉

Zoya's blabbering abt asad being self conscious 🤣

ZOYA SAID I LOVE YOUU!!!! The WOW MOMENT of d update ❤️

I thought asad wudnt respond to the kiss but he did 🥳

Asad fighting the goons... 😊

asad's inner turmoil was very well written 👏

ohhh so tat paper was dat letter tat zoya had left him years back 😲

The old asad is back!!!!!!! 😲 oh no!!!

Cant wait to read the next update...off to read tat 😳

lots of love aashna di 🤗
Edited by elenaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! they were married back there...

poor asya they are really suffering so much for something that is not their fault...

I really can't believe that dilshad did all this, and can keep this shut for 4-5 years when her son is hurting himself...😲

aww... my zoya... she forgave her so easily...

how sweet...😊

ok now... ayaan cupid to the action...😉

his conversation with zoya was lovely...

zoya was so scared and care for him so much...

and now she is here, so can we hope for some really good things happen between them????

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant part yr
Waitng fr d revelation...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heya..everyone...khub khub aabhaar.(gujarati😃).i.e. very very thank u...to all u lovely peeps that read..liked and commented...on the update..it was an important update for the story...solidfying their relationship..marraige being the bond that binds them together...a lot is still to transpire..happniess..rebuilding relationships..anger..accaeptance..a lil more pain..a lot of fights..😆 n making ups...Love most of all will be the underlying current in each update..and with every update Asad and Zoya will get closer and stronger... so stay tuned..and please excuse me for a day..as I go hand out Haloween candies to the trick or treaters..and get some sleep tonight...brain cells have been burnt out due to all the madnees surrounding my life ...😆😕.. i'll get to all ur comments very soon..n hopefully in another day I will update the next part..so until later...majaa ma rehjo..(stay happy..😊)...n also..Happy haapy diwali celbrations..n vacations...in advance...😊
Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey sorry for commenting in breaks. I'll complete it now.
Chap 14 B:
Asad & Zoe's night out in the food street was awesome. I could very well get what Zoe would be feelings. obviously the reason she had fallen in love with India was Asad, but destiny hadn't given her the chance to explore this beauty with him. but now that she had it, she obviously wanted it to last forever. the stupid police man broke the momentum & killed the moment. it was due to this that Asad's anger rose & he couldn't get out of it.
So Ayaan made it to home & tried forcing his ammi to spill the truth but she didn't. it's actually right as she has promised Asad to not reveal it.
Okay the god dammit paper does what it has been trying to do since a few days, transforming Asad to someone who was born after going through it, once again. I really thought it was the note that Zoe left him but now I know it. Khair I could feel the helpless situation Asad must have found himself in when Zoe decided to abandon him just like that.
Chap 15:
Ayaan's gets answers to his questions, at last. though at the cost of making his brother revisiting his painful past. Asad's fury, hurt & pain all were evident & justified. what do you expect a person who rarely shares his feelings to do when a heap of it is thrown over him with out that person who could cure it all.
I really was SHAKEN, I mean it literally. 😲 u know I was left with an open mouth staring ahead. I seriously never thought this could be the reason. you know when you had mentioned of their love making when they were together, I did think of it once& then when Zeenat had stopped her convo with Zoe that: that's why she allowed her to.. I thought of this but I never reconsidered it. gosh you blew me woman. you deserve a big thumbs up at portraying the whole scenario just so so beautifully. 👍🏼
Now I understand why Asad was so heart broken, obviously being robbed of your life suddenly makes you go through a magnificent trauma & so his Akdu behavior is justified.
Glad Dilshad finally decided to open up her actions. I know her reason for doing so but still yaar it's a little hard to accept it. I mean she stole her own son's life & love & yet kept quiet for this long. she should have made a move & tried to bridge the difference between them rather then letting Asad hold Zoe responsible for the whole mess.
I agree with Ayaan, Asad isn't in the best of mental state to tske this huge shock of the involvement of his mother in ruining his life. I just hope Ayaan & Najm really do help them come close.
Aww my poor baby Zoe couldn't sleep without knowing that Asad was fine or not. it's so natural to be restless if your other half isn't at peace. her convo with Ayaan & then her order was too good. Mango really loves Asad madly. but the only one Asad loves unconditionally is Zoe. despite all the bitter past they've faced, their love emerges it all pure & more strengthened. Zoe has accepted her love in front of him, I hope he gets the courage to face it again too with time.
Okay so at last the Khan Ladies meet. well I must say there can be none with such a big heart as Zoe. I mean it's so natural to feel a bit bad if not hold a grudge against somebody who ruined you but this girl is just too much. it's hard not to fall in love with her. I hope she does get to go past the Akdu exterior Asad has built around him once again.
so looking forward to San Francisco. please update quick& a lengthy one.
Once again, lots of love... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
I looved this story...read all parts in one go...i looved hw U describe when zoya feels asad s presence..looved nikhat n zoya s relation..zoya is such a sweetheart ...nice concept...continue soon n thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asad and Zoya were married and this has come as a big surprise. Hope things fall into place. Great update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aha another brilliant update! loved it totally!

Zoya is so sweet, she is not holding any grudges against Dilshad that's like my girl

I abso-freaking-lutely loved the update! And day by day I'm falling more in love with this FF.

Update soonish 😃

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