HELLO DEAR,
You know it's getting extremely hard for me to write a comment on the 14th chap now that I have read the 15th, but it'll be wrong if I leave out on this chap cox I had loved it when I read it & it's really important too.
Chap 14 a:
This part had taken me to a lala land. All I could see & feel after this was AsYa. this was bliss after a long for both AsYa & me. I really can't tell how much I loved Asad's effort of recreating the moment that they had once shared. I understand now what Asad's problem is, he is wanting to move ahead without facing the past & over coming it. he just wants it all to vanish from between them. well I wish that could happen & he could go on & spend his entire life with Zoe.
The past Valentine scene was sooo sweet. Asad's making up in his style was just so ideally romantic, just the way I like it.
Now coming to the present. I know how content they would have felt being together after such a long gap. Asad's "meri Jaan" takes my heart away always..
The next really had me thinking. like just see yaar, everything is supposed to of course get back to its original place but the way reconnected here is just awesome. I mean first Mango, then the bracelet returns to Zoe again just as Asad returns to her. OMG I couldn't believe Asad said that to her again. I am so glad he confessed this part of her being the owner of his heart & life still to her. their intimate moment was just ☺️ but you literally left me hanging there with that stupid call. you aren't supposed to that now!
Okay coming to Ayaa-Humeira part. bechara Ayaan is so involved in solving the mystery of a brother he has that his own love life is being affected. I agree with what Humi did, ya to Ayaan shouldn't have taken her out or he shouldn't have brought this topic out. I understand the anxiety & curiosity he has that he is left out of so much important things from his bhaijaan's life but still yaar he can't make fun of humi's feelings like this.
Chalo he gets his answers finally..
I'll post the 14 B comment in another post cox I need to read it again.
Love.