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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

ayan and humie are cuteee...helping zoya 😃😃

asad was memrised by seeing zoyaa...😉😉😉

luking forward for nxt prt update soon...😳

thnx for d pm...🤗

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

She is obviously hurt by his behavior and now is scared when she is receiving the attention that once was hers, his attention. I could imagine how beautiful she might be looking. Asad is all mesmerized by her beauty. But, what if she again comes in her real self what will he do then. But, at this moment I am loving his attention. I want Asad to know her better, her inner beauty and be with her as her best friend Asad not as the famous Asad Ahmed Khan. They are perfect for one other but Asad needs to learn that what matters is the inner beauty not the outer beauty. Although, Zoya has both- She is beautiful In and out...

Continue soon.

Dee

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@Asya6

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

A.W.E.S.O.M.E! And I love AyRa as ghosts!

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Nice udapte continue soon 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

awesome update..continue soon..😊

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

This is mind-blowing! I love it Fari <3

I can imagine Kekti, Vikrant, Surbhi and Karan do these roles <3

Love you! 🤗

-Nisha

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Okay i read the prologue and the first part and its AHHMAAZING!!! Superb concept and superb story 😃 Ayaan and Humeira as Ghosts is an awesome idea! And I love the idea of Asad being to cool guy and Zoya being not-so-cool girl. Loved the first part to bits, especially when Humeira does a make-over for Zoya and Asad is mesmerized by her beauty. Great job done girl!! I'm really becoming a fan of your fluff!! I'm sure going to catch up with all of your work till date, and i sent you a Buddy Request. Please pm me when you update this or write something else!!

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

wow tis is amazing...

totally luv it...

ayaan n humeira are too cute...

luv the way humeira dress zoya up n did her make over n the way ayaan n humeira are helping zoya...totally luv the way asad is so mesmerized n totally attracted to her n hw he wants them to do the project together...

its wonderfull n mind blowing...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...