FF - Asad and Zoya in Italy - Link to Thread Two on Page 1 - Page 11

Hey nice update again. Read last two parts together...I m really liking how Asad is feeling a change in himself. I hope he gets all ok soon. Zoya is super adorable. I really like the way she cares for him. Very well written.

Beautiful Update...😊

some colours filling Asad life! 😃

I loved this one and whats is the past which is hounding him so much and to this extent I hope she makes him feel how he also has the right to be loved and did he has done something wrong the way he got angry on zoya about rape victim discussion but I loved the way it is going

Originally posted by: aashiqua

wow..asad actng less akdu..bt what is his sad past? Related to sm girl..is dat why he got angry at zoya? Omg..cant wait for nxt part

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Yes!!

You updated!

Thank you! :D

And the update was amazing! I like the pace of the story... its not fast but not quite slow too.

The little, meaningful conversations are needed... and not a plethora of it!

That's what I love the most. 😃

And I always feel that there should be a strong friendship between the couple, before they pounce on each other!

Love the way how Zoya takes care of a tormented Asad! 😳

All the best for your next update!

PS - You give me inspiration. Well, I'm a newbie too... and I MIGHT pen down an OS after my mid - terms.

So yeah, thanks for the motivation!

( If you're thinking what I'm thinking you're thinking.. then NO! I like your initiative... and won't steal the story line! 😆 )

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Hahaha thanks for the great response.

PS: No I am not thinking what you are thinking that I must be thinking 😛

Best of luck for your story.

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Thank you!

But I need a suggestion.. I was thinking of 'Zoya in SM' ( No, it won't be tragic ).

But should it be Asya oriented?! 😕

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Ya go for it

it seems different 😊

but do you want to write on zoyaan ??😲