AsYa OS **Pitter-Patter Rain Drops*

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**Pitter-Patter Rain Drops**


Asad's POV.


Asad Ahmed Khan. Yes that's my name, very powerful name that is! I am very successful in my business. Heck, I own one of the best business industries in Bhopal! I gained millions and I had everything me and my cute little family could ever want!

But yet I felt so incomplete, not until the best day of my life came. Because she came. My life came and that made it the best day. There she was twirling around in the rain, her dancing feet synchronizing with the beat of the rain-drops.

I chose a really good day to work late especially knowing there was heavy rain that day. And before I knew it, possibly it was a magnetic force pulling me towards her and it seemed as if my legs had mind of their own. And before I knew it, there she was in my arms. She fit perfectly as if a missing puzzle piece in a puzzle or a key in a keyhole.

She was just perfect.

We were just staring into eachother's eyes after what seemed like centuries.

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Zoya's POV.

My name is Zoya Farooqi. Parents died and left me at the age of three. And a tragedy that was until my Zeenat Appi and Anwar Jiju came and adopted me. They gave me a mother and father's love that I thought I could never get back. But thanks to them, I don't have that empty gap anymore.
Yet, I still feel incomplete. I've always believed in love. I've always believed that one day my prince-charming would come and sweep me off my feet and live happily ever after like they did in those fairy-tales. Finally when that day came, I was speechless. Never I had thought i would ever feel this feeling and was happy I did. Looks like I chose a good day to get soaked in the rain!

I just love rain! Rain, rain, rain. I can dance in it all day long if I could. There I am dancing to the pitter-patter sounds of the rain when I tripped over a rock.

I was waiting to be confronted by the cold ground when I felt myself in a guy's arms. I didn't know who it was but it felt safe and I made a mental note to thank that rock.

Then we ended up in that eye-lock. I tried multiple ways to rid his intense gaze in my eyes. But I knew deep down inside I wanted to continuously stare into those deep brown eyes.

Finally after what seemed like forever, we got back to the present and that's when that awkward conversation started but being the girl I am, I figured no conversation could be awkward when it's with me.

Background (Mitwa Ishq Per Zoor Nahi)

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No POV.

Asad: "Assalamu Alaikum. My name is Asad. Asad Ahmed Khan."
Zoya: "Walaikum Assalam. Mere naam toh Zoya hai. Zoya Farooqi."
Asad: "Mashallah, bohat khoobsurat naam hai. Zoya"
Zoya: "Thank You! You know Zoya means life and happiness. It also means light. I used to think my name was really weird but after I searched it up, I was so happy because that's what my appi always says to me..."

She kept blabbering and blabbering much to Asad's amusement.

That was when Asad remembered the time and realized he had to go much to both of their disappointment.

Asad: "Sorry Zoya, I have to go now, my ammi and sister are waiting for me."

Zoya pouted. Asad saw the most adorable sight he had ever seen at that pout. But then Zoya flashed him her 1000 watt dimple wala smile and Asad's couldn't help but suppress a dimple wala smile too.

Zoya: "I just got a brilliant idea! You tell me your number and I'll tell you mine and we will meet tomorrow at my favorite coffee shop just around this block."

Asad: "Sounds good. I'll see you then."

After that, they used to meet every-single day. They became really close and thats when they realized they feel in love. Finally they got married and lived happily ever after. Everything Zoya had ever dreamt of came true and the incompleteness they both felt vanished in just the nick of time.



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Hello wonderful people! This my first ever story I have ever written and I have been inspired to write this of the many wonderful stories I read on this forum. I was about to name this Hamesha and I was all like that has nothing to do with my story mainly because the story didn't come out how I thought it would.

Yes it was pretty crappy! Lol I thought the ending was REALLY stupid. And please forgive me for my hindi/urdu. I'm not sure if i got the words right but hey I tried.

This is not proof-read so please forgive me for all mistakes.

I do not own any of the characters. This is just my imagination

Please tell me whether you liked it or not. Chappals, tomatoes, anything are allowed. 😆😃Hope you loved it!!!!!

-Love,
Waswas!!!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, was that really your first story? 😲 That was so cute! 😳 I loved it, too adorable!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You call this STUPID? This is so freaking ADORABLE! :D I doubt this is your first story. I loved it! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww... Soo cute 😳
Lovely 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was s cute
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Aweee...This was so sweet and cute
And they all lived happily ever after😆

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