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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: reenah

I love the way you wrote the story.


Thankyou 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ankita.M

OMG Kashuuu 😃 that is a brilliant write up. Its a surprise that you've actually begun writing. I know you write well but you wrote a story which is brilliant 😊 its so so so well written and such a beautiful concept too. I love how you've incorporated a track we would have rather seen than the one we're seeing now.

Are you going to continue this? 😳


Ankuuu 🤗 thank youuu ! I would love to continue this but like I said im very bad at writing dialogues . You'll have to help me with this 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it continue soon and please PM me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was really really really brilliant. Thank you. you made my heart feel a less heavy.

And yes if you continue PLEASE do pm up :))) i really dont want to miss this :)) Dont worry even if you dont i will keep an eye 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hy its sooo nice...so emotional. ..
Jst loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

U r writing for the first tym??
Amazing yaar...cont soon

Yes 😊 Will definitely try to continue . Thank youu!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: beekay1

OMG what a beautiful OS.

I did wonder if that night (night of the dance), if Asad-Zoya did go all the way... I also wished that this would happen in the Zoyaan track... She moves to SM and she realises that she is pregnant with Asad's child... I didn't want to share this thought as I didn't want to raise anyone's hope...

But I so wish...so wish, it would happen this way...

Beautifully written...


Thank you so much 😳What a brilliant idea , I would love to see something like that on the show . That would give Asad a good reason to defend Zoya and claim her as his even though they're not married . But unfortunately the makers don't think like we do , they're ruining a very good show :(

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