#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17) - Page 94

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

RES

Unres!! Finally!!😆😆

Loved the update as always!! Enjoyed reading this one a lot!!

I liked how Asad cared for Zoya and asked her to have warm clothes!!😳
But Zoya is Zoya..She had to be adamant and rude!! Can't really blame her though!!

And they drove Aston Martins?? 😲Wow!! And Ayaan and Zoya's car race was thrilling!!
Asad's hand on Zoya by accident??😳But she removed it later on!!


And the girls sang the song Barbadiyaan??? You mentioned all 5 girls sang...but no!! there were 6 girls..I was also in the car and singing along!! 😉😆
And later Asad and Zoya danced??? 😲Really??😲 All of this happened in your story NOW ??😲 I can't believe it!! Someone please pinch me!!😕😕

I liked how Humz sensed Golmaal hai bhai sab Golmaal hai 😆😆and asked the girls about Asad and Zoya!! and also offered to help them!! All wickets down...Rashid, Ayaan and Zoya left to be bowled over!!😆😆

Aww!! Asad ordered for Zoya her fav dish!! 😳😳How cute!! And Zoya knew who ordered her dish and finally ate it!! Wah! Kya pyaar hai!!😳😳

Asad wrapped his jacket to comfort Zoya?? How super cute!! 😳Bechare khud ko kitne thand lagi hogi??

I liked the Asad Zoya moment when Asad helps her from the fall and gives her a Chotu sa lecture!!

And they did river rafting??? I wanna do it too!! Actually all of Zoya's activities in this update are something I am capable of doing!! 😉

The fountain sequence w😳😳s sweet too...Loved how Asad sent Zoya a picture of the fountain because she could not get one!

And the end??? It was so heart touching!! finally Zoya speaks to Asad about them!! She forgave him...but what is with her but???

p.s- Loved all of the LV pics!!


Love you and your comments forever

No matter what I will always remember you

I am speechless with you comment

It is very heart touching and encouraging

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shabana20

Mind blowing!!..

Zoya finally forgave Asad.. Yay!!!..
But??..
Thanks for the pm..


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

Thursday agaya...updatee??





Sorry to keep you waiting

but you might have to wait a bit more

I am so sorry but I got home late today and there are guests coming over tonight

Plus I am an exam tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
I couldn't resist
Couldn't make you all wait to long

So here is the update on the new thread

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

Res! For two chapters 😳
Ok so I am super sorry for the late comment 😳 life has been a little

Chapter 16: AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!

"I can't live without, Zoya. It is killing me slowly" sobbed Asad. Awww my heart went out for Asad! 😕

Najma stuck up for Asad, how sweet 😃

Your appi told me that it burns when someone applies dettol to you but all I want is for you to look at me and forget about everything yes. I promise that I won't hurt you."

Zoya was overwhelmed with care as Asad applied first aid. She usually would flinch whenever dettol touched her wounds but today she was calm.
OMG!!!!! What a sweet AsYa moment! Love it! And love you for creating it!!!!! 🤗

"When you say everything happens for a reason don't be surprised, when I slap you in the face, it happened for a reason" shouted Ayaan at Asad. Ok so this wasn't sweet but it was super funny for some reason, like I said before I'm loving the angry Ayaan! 😃

YAY!!!! Road Trip!!!!!! This should be fun!

OMG!!! The basketball match reminded me of KSG as Armaan and DMG so much. I know you didn't mean it for that but it did!

Zoya falling on top of Asad and the match ending with a draw.

Zoya was trying to get up but Asad was not letting her go. Zoya finally gave up and looked into Asad's eyes and she felt herself getting lost. Padfoot's bark got them back to their senses and they got up.
And this just made me want to see an actual AsYa scene like this! 😳

"Deleting from the memory of the pc was easy but how do I get him from my mind and heart" Whoa what a line! So touching! Just loved it! ❤️ 😃

Chapter 17:

OMG!!! This is just a recipe for love! Road Trip + car race/ bumpy ride+ touchy touchy couple in denial= A very awesome love eshtory!!!! 😊

I loved the pictures! You really put effort into this and I must say that they really helped actually visualize what was happening! Brilliant work!!!! 👏 👏

I absolutely love how Asad cares for Zoya! It seems so real and genuine! 👍🏼

OMG the staring is killing me ☺️

Whoa! The last part...What was that? Please tell me that what happens in Vegas doesn't only stay in Vegas and it stays with them where ever they go? That was just too good Mahi!!!!! ⭐️ 😃 👍🏼 👏


I am so glad you made an effort to comment on both separately and that too long ones

I love you for this ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! I loved how you described las vegas! And Zoe stopped at a "but"? How could you end there?!
Sorry for commenting late!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Awesome update! I loved how you described las vegas! And Zoe stopped at a "but"? How could you end there?!

Sorry for commenting late!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

another fab update

so all except Ayaan have agreed to forgive Asad n r playing cupid

loved how no matter what they were doing they always ended up in each others arms at some point whilst all other time Asad was staring longingly at her

gotta say they doing an amazing job at keeping Ayaan occupied

all the pictures were so beautiful
gotta say my fav part was their raft ride n the fact that Zoya never moved away
as for the ending what a cliffhanger ...u tease
what could it be she was going to say ...but ????????...hmmm
what will she say????
is it maybe that he needs to win over Ayaan too b4 she truely forgives him ???
anyway cant wait for next update to see whats next for our two
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

another fab update

so all except Ayaan have agreed to forgive Asad n r playing cupid

loved how no matter what they were doing they always ended up in each others arms at some point whilst all other time Asad was staring longingly at her

gotta say they doing an amazing job at keeping Ayaan occupied

all the pictures were so beautiful
gotta say my fav part was their raft ride n the fact that Zoya never moved away
as for the ending what a cliffhanger ...u tease
what could it be she was going to say ...but ????????...hmmm
what will she say????
is it maybe that he needs to win over Ayaan too b4 she truely forgives him ???
anyway cant wait for next update to see whats next for our two
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon


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