AsYa SS: It's Hard To Let You Go [Part 6, Page 56]

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Hey fari.
Your updates are heart melting. They are highly
Torrid for me. The childhood vedios were.so. So
Cute. Ahsaan is all up with teasing zoha. Asya as
Parents are rocking. I can actually figure the scene
In my mind. Lov e their sweet romance.
You are one of those writer who write effortlessly
Brilliant.

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

*sniff* *sniff* u actually made me cry with this update. i was reading it on my phone while sitting with my family and they were all surprisd and shocked hwen they saw tears in my eyes. leaving that behind, it was a beautiful update

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

very nice update..well written..😊

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Maheerah

@maheerah_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: SmileyStar
This one is dedicated to Maheerah for always leaving wonderful comments on my work 😃

😲Omg!

Thankyou sooo much!(can't take the smile off my face😃)☺️ ☺️ ☺️

For the update;

Every time i read an update of your stories, i feel as if my dictionary gets empty...

I loved how you gave special space to Ahsan this time...Honestly, he is a very complicated or if Zoya would've said😆 he is an emotionally challenged person...describing him in detail was the best part...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

The video was no less...

The entire update was although lighthearted yet beautiful...

😲 I never knew Dilshaad was present in this story😲(🤣)

Although i know i am no one to give a suggestion but would love to give one😆

What if you could show how the Khan family coped up when one peice of the jigsaw puzzle went away(Zoha)...it would be a treat to read...just a couple of chapters and thats it...😃

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

hey my dear fari di !
finally i'm back !
when i logged in after a month the first thing i saw was your pm with the imortant note and i was literally scared that you'll delete me off your buddy list !
please don't delete me cause i'm very much alive and i'm still following your ffs !

gosh i really missed spamming in your thread and i missed you more :)
love you di
p.s : if you forgot me i'm kiki

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Wow... Their are no words to describe how amazing this chapter really was...👍🏼.

This was Beautiful, Poignant, Bittersweet, Awesome and such a brilliant update👏 Their memories are just so beautiful ( credit to you for making them up)...

This was such an emotionally charged chapter that it made me emotional...( I shed a few tears😭..Oh whom am i kidding, i bawled like a baby😆)

You constantly amaze me, Just when i think that your writing cannot get any better, you exceed my expectations that i keep awaiting your next update...😃

Thank You for the dedication☺️🤗 It was so sweet of you, i really was not expecting that.. I can't stop smiling...

You should understand that people cannot help commenting when you give such lovely updates and such an unusual concept that is brilliantly executed👏

All the best for your midterms👍🏼 I'm sure you'll do well.

Thank you as always for the pms🤗

Lots of love

Navi

Edited by NAVI55 - 11 years ago

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Alisha

@luv angel

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Great work! Thanks for the pm :)

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

It ws beautifully written yr...
U hv expressed d whole family's emotions in a gr8 way...
Ahsan z jst superb..witty n funny..zoha z cute n adorable...
""You and good-looking? Sorry to burst your bubble kid, but these two words don't even fit in one sentence. There is a reason why I say that Ammi and Abbu found you in a trash can when you were a baby." Ahsan said with a chuckle."...supr funny yr...n dat ugly child vala dialogue ws also gr8...gr8 timing ahsan...
Continue soon
N happy diwali

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

That was sooo emotional I loved it thanx for the PM and update soon😃

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Ohmygosh! This was seriously my favorite chapter so far!

The memories were all SO sweet and cute and funny and adorable! 😃 Zoha and Ahsan are seriously hilarious. 😆 😆 You had me giggling and aw-ing at the computer screen! 😆

This is seriously so beautiful, I can't even describe it. 😳 Do continue soon! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️