Asya OS:|| It's Just You and Me Tonight || - Page 5

This is amazing. Doesn't look like its your first piece of work indeed. Seems like a skilled writer's tale. Love it... 👏

this os is soo good,esp the monologues of zoya.

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

This is brilliant!!! An awesome read! I can't believe that you actually wrote something for the first time!!! You are really talented!! and therefore, i request you to keep coming up with more stories like this!!! Loved this!!

Wow! had read this before long time back but now read it again!
Zoya's reply 'in ur arms'
zoya is so childish asking asad abt his six packs 😆
and asad let zoya take charge! 😳
The end was epic! he left it on zoya to figure out! 😉
amazing os miss mcdreamy 🤗

I loved it
Wow it ws smething which ws i searching frm a long tym
Thnk you so mch fr writing this
U r awesome

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

~|| It's just you and me tonight ||~

Ok so starting with the title ...I ❤️ it...yes I really do love it😳...so apt for the OS as well as it is just beautiful <3😉

How is it possible that I fall in love with him every time I thing about him? I must be crazy!

I love that line...brings out the feelings so specifically that she loves him more than anybody else.and even more than she ever could ...so pretty and what should I say...PURE...coz love is pure and that truly shows it even though in a half comical half kiddish manner!!!

" And ermm...a...Zo-...Zoya ...you K...Kissed me?" He stuttered nervously.

"Yeah, I did. So?

😆😆 Asad's so shy...😉 and on the other hand how can I not mention Zoya's outright frank attitude and blunt behavior...and the fact that He stuttered nervously...that was epic👏

"You are beautiful."

"who tho main hoon!" She giggled proudly.

again another manner of showing Zoya's cute behavior and Asad's true love for her which he can't mould...coz he is quite awkward at that...and neither can he express it directly...he is poor at that as well😳 but syaing it this directly takes courage at last for a man like HIM...and this is very well written👏

Does she trust me so much?

it is such a beautiful qustion that arose to Asad...coz the fact that she trusts him more than she loves him (my perception...) might have scared him but it doesn't and he reciprocates what would allow her to think that she is right...in TRUSTING HIM😳...good 👍🏼

"You have a marriage-fantasy'?"

I just wanna answer Asad's stupid question...YES for great lord's sake😡

He was heading towards the door when Zoya stopped him midway and asked, "I forgot to ask you one thing Mr. Khan...What was the best moment in your life?"

Asad smiled and replied, "You are an intelligent girl Zoya...I will leave that for you to make out" And saying that he quietly left her room.

Zoya knew what Asad meant.

Indeed the moment' was what they shared a while back.

Yes! She had a special moment with him...Their very first Special Moment'.

And I needn't say it specifically ...this was a TREAT😳

OMG Thankyou Zoha!!❤️

Originally posted by: Enchantress

This is amazing. Doesn't look like its your first piece of work indeed. Seems like a skilled writer's tale. Love it... 👏

Dee

Originally posted by: elenaa

Wow! had read this before long time back but now read it again!
Zoya's reply 'in ur arms'
zoya is so childish asking asad abt his six packs 😆
and asad let zoya take charge! 😳
The end was epic! he left it on zoya to figure out! 😉
amazing os miss mcdreamy 🤗