FF-Twists of fate & Tests of faith **Please read note on pg11**

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An experimental fic, written in the middle of the night-ish.
Main pairings will be Asya, Ayra and Nikhat/Farhan.
Basically, Farhan is not going to be Haseena Bi's son, but Imran's cousin instead. I've given him a backstory as well which will unfold in the story. He will be an important character in this story.

I will mostly concentrate on Asya though, beause they are my favourite pairing. The beginning might be confusing as I start to set t he pace. The Nikhat-Imran-Najma triangle will be important as well, especially at the start of the story, so please don't hate me for this. I'm not sure if anyone will read it...but here goes.




Prologue: Choosing the players.

Zoya disconnected the Skype call and got up from her bed. It had been a while since she'd last spoken to her Jeeju so she had decided to call him up this morning. She could only talk to him in the morning or at night, given the time difference between Bhopal and New York. She mulled over the conversation that they had. She knew very well that although her past was important, submerging herself into it would be bad. She made an important decision at that moment. She would enjoy the here and the now. Ultimately, if it was meant to be, she would find her father.

Asad Ahmed Khan, fondly refered to as Jahapana 6 packs by his lovely wife-to-be, was already awake and immersed in making the arrangements for his sister's engagement. Although the preparations were going ahead full-scale, Asad was uneasy. The whole Nikhat-Imran-Najma issue was always prominent somewhere at the back of his mind, making him feel conflicted. He simply hoped what he was doing was right. All he really wanted was the happiness of both his sisters.

Farhan lifted his bag out of the hired car and turned around to pay the driver. The time difference was already starting to have its effect on him as he counted out the money. Being back in India after all these years made him feel kind of out of sync. He walked up to the door and rang the bell. Here's to new beginnings' he mumbled to himself.

Nikhat stood in the middle of her room, letting the tears fall silently. She didn't understand how things had gone so far, so fast. It felt like these days, everything was just tearing at her, trying to pull her apart as she barely held onto the seams. 'Imran loves Najma' she whispered into the empty room, as if saying it outloud would make the situation more bearable for her. She was simply tired. She was tired of trying to hold things together, she simply wished to leave it all in the hands of fate.

Ayaan was angry. He wasn't angry for himself, but for his sister. Nikhat. Why her? Why was the world throwing all these hardships at her when she deserved none of it. He was angry at his Bhaijaan for not understanding his sister's pain. He was angry at Imraan for leading his sister on and leaving in the worst way possible. He was angry at Haseena Bi for tormenting them to this point. Most of all, he was angry at himself for not being able to anything as he watched his sister cry. If only there was something he could do.

Humaira could feel the tension in the house. It was like everyone was under immense pressure and they were all waiting for someone to crash. She couldn't watch her loved ones hurt so deeply, she couldn't take the heartache hidden in Nikhat's eyes, or the helplessness in Ayaan's eyes. It felt like there was a ticking time bomb and they were merely waiting for it to explode. It was getting to her.

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Index

Chapter 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91701984
(Or just scroll down 😊)

Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97362645

Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97527556

Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97765615

Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98115339


My other Works:

SS- Concrete Jungle of Dreams

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3842657/ss-concrete-jungle-of-dreams-chapter-2-pg-5

SS - Revelations

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3814924/revelations-a-short-story-updated-part-3-15-12-2013

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Nice continue soon and please PM me 😊
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Very good. Continue soon and pm me if you can 😊
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Embarrassingly enough, I'm kind of new to the forum and not sure how the PM thing works😳.Will try my best to figure it out, but if anyone is willing to help out, I'd be super grateful.



Chapter 1

Ms. Farooqi!' Asad didn't know whether to be amused or irritated which was nothing unusual when it came to Zoya's many shenanigans. It was a busy day at the Khan Villa, and they were all running around getting things ready. Zoya was fleeting about, trying to help out as much as possible, while simultaneously teasing Najma, every chance she got. That wasn't all either, she managed to get in the way of Asad completing any single task. She was great at multi-tasking. Finally, giving up on having the lighting fixed, he decided being in the same room as Zoya, while they argued about every little detail and therefore got nothing done was counterproductive.

'Mr. Khan! You can't put...' Zoya had managed to bump into the ladder the lighting guy was standing on and it wobbled before a second man steadied it. Asad grabbed her hand and lead her into the kitchen. 'Ms. Farooqi...' he began, only to be interrupted. 'Mr. Khan, you know if you wanted to be alone with me, all you had to do was ask, you didn't need to drag me out in front of everyone' Zoya finished with a teasing smile. Asad felt like face-palming, and barely managed to stop himself from doing so.

Humaira stole a look at Ayaan who was pacing the living room. He seemed to be deep in thought and hadn't noticed her enter the room. 'Ayaan...' He looked up hearing his name and waited for her to continue. She wanted to go somewhere, outside the house where tension just kept on building and building. They both knew today was the day that was meant to be Najma and Imran's engagement. They both knew it was going to be a painful day for Nikhat no matter how much she tried to hide it. Ayaan nodded, but was doubtful Nikhat would agree. Humaira smiled as Ayaan voiced his doubts, and Ayaan realized he hadn't seen her smile in a long time. He definitely missed that smile.

Farhan argued with his mother on the phone, growing frustrated at how stubborn she was being. What he couldn't see was the woman listening in at the door. She smirked evilly, she had some plans for Rashid Ahmed Khan and his family. They were probably already regretting breaking the union, and now that her son seemed to be getting out of hand, she knew it was up to her to do something. Farhan coming back home had given her an idea. One she had already put into motion. She would fix up Farhan and Nikhat, only to have the 'truth' reveal itself at the end moment. She could handle the arrangements in India since Farhan's parents were still stuck in America for the time being and milk the situation for what it was worth. Then she would have the 'truth' about Nikhat come out at an opportune moment and then...well then, everything would be where it was supposed to be. She moved away from the door, now that her plan was in place.

'No Humaira' Nikhat said patiently, 'I'm going to attend tonight's ceremony and give them my blessings. 'Najma is my sister, and I want to go.' Ayaan growled at this, his frustration apparent as he tried to stop himself from saying anything that would further upset Nikhat. 'You can't be serious!' he finally managed to choke out. He couldn't believe it, how could she even think about going THERE, to THAT house. He would have voiced his thoughts if Humaira hadn't given him a shut-the-heck-up look.

Nikhat wasn't trying to add to her pain, but she knew that for some reason, she had to go tonight. Perhaps seeing it with her own eyes would make it real. Perhaps it was because she honestly didn't want to give anyone the impression that she would stand in the way of Najma's happiness, and perhaps it was even to prove she held no grudges, that she was ready to move on with her life. What had happened was painful, and tonight would be even more so. She knew Ayaan didn't understand, that he was angry with Asad bhaijaan. Even hough there was somewhat of a shaky truce between them now, there was a lot more at stake than any of them could see.

Zoya was in the middle of arranging the sweets on a platter when her phone vibrated. She checked the message which had come from an international number.

I can't believe you're engaged and I had to find out through facebook.

Samira. Flashbacks of New York played at the back of her head as she thought about how long it had been since she'd talked to her friends back home. It felt surreal how far life had come in such a short amount of time. She definitely wasn't the same Zoya who had walked off the plane, intent on searching her past out and nothing else. She was a woman in love; in love with the kind of man she had previously disliked. A traditional guy. Her friends back in New York would find that hilarious...but right now she had to concentrate on getting things done for tonight. Her friends could wait, tonight was Najma's night.

Tanveer watched through the window as the Khans prepared for the engagement. She smirked evilly, thinking of the card she would play tonight, the games were just beginning and right now, for once, she had all the aces. She rubbed her pregnant belly, and decided then and there, her kid would never go through what she had gone through. She vowed to give her child the life she'd never been able to have. First though, she was going to destroy the entire Khan family and Razia as well. She turned on the phone she'd bought and started typing. The game had begun and this time, Tanveer would come out on top no matter what. Broadening her evil smirk, she pressed send. Game set match.

On the other side of town, Imran's phone beeped, alerting him that he had a message.

Edited by meezishu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg! I loved it! Ur writing is great!

Will ya PM me?
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That was a very beautiful start...Hope you will up-date soon...!!! 😊
About PM, If I am not wrong, you have to have 25 posts to be able to PM anyone...
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Woow that was such a great start...
Pls continue soon n pls pm me
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continue soon..pm me ..
add some friends.. copy the link and paste in the msg box nd send it
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Don't for get to do index... you can still edit your 1st post... add it


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Chapter 1..

Super so natural feel like watching the actual QH in the TV
nicely narrated story..👍🏼
from everyone.. not to be miss.. all tangle up

i have to wait and see... now how this going to happen
very interesting...
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Any good asya stories to read

Can anyone recommend any good asya stories to read pls.

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