ASYA SF #1- Zinda Rehti Hai

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ASYA SF - Zinda Rehti Hai

Hey guys this isn't an OS more like a Song Fiction... It's something I want to hear in QH once Asad and Zoya find out who her father is. Also if you guys like it a lot I may write more SF in the future. Here it goes


'Mona darling, are you OK?' Ayaan asked Zoya who was laughing a second ago. Things wasn't the same with Zoya since she moved to their house and he knew why. She loved his brother. She might be laughing and all but Ayaan knew his friend and was putting up a front.

Zoya was laughing with all the family around her at Shireen's dumbness but memories of Asad, Phoopi and Najma filled her head and it faded away. Oh she missed them loads. Her Phoopi whom was more like a Mum, Najma was a sister to her and Asad, her love. She missed Phoopi's cooking and her talks, Najma's constant plan to go on a diet yet then eating to her hearts content and her Mr Khan irritating her yet she fell in love. After all they had been through she had hoped she would have married him, but her last wish got fulfilled and she found her father - Asad's worst enemy.

Gafoor Siddiqui looked at his daughter who was lost in her thoughts. He was about to call her name as she ran upstairs but he couldn't as outside the Khan Mansion music and a dhol can be heard. The doors of the mansion open and enters Asad Ahmed Khan for the first time in his enemys house for his love.

Duniya mein kitni hai nafratein
Phir bhi dilon mein hai chahatein

Zoya stops in her tracks and turns around and sees him standing there. She looks at him and he stares lovingly at her. Siddiqui is shocked to see Asad Ahmed Khan in his house. To see his daughter. He couldn't believe his daughter had fell for Asad. It would never work. So many people in the family hate his side of the family. But Zoya Siddiqui didn't. It was the opposite for his daughter. She loved them like a family.

Duniya mein kitni hai nafratein
Phir bhi dilon mein hai chahatein

Asad looks at Zoya and she is nearly in tears. How he missed seeing her, her touch, her smile, laughter and her love. Oh how he longed to hold her in his arms. They were so close but because of their family, they are yet far away.

Mar bhi jaye pyaar wale
Mit bhi jaye yaar wale
Zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein
Zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein

Zoya runs down the stairs while the others watch. She is about to run to Asad when her father grabs her arm. She looks at Asad who is staring at Siddiqui tearfully wishing he would let go of her. Zoya is trying her best to. Asad is trying his best not to go and help Zoya from her father but he stops himself as he wants Siddiqui to accept their relationship. He would not take Zoya unless her father gves his approval. Asad closes his eyes and lets the tears fall as he turns around to leave as he realises he will never get Zoya now when he hears Zoya and turns around.

Mar bhi jaye pyar wale
Mit bhi jaye yaar wale
Zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein
Zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein

Zoya looks at Asad then her dad. Siddiqui realises that no one will ever love his daughter like Asad and she will never love anyone else. He decides that no matter how much that has happened between their family and Asad's, Kismat broight Asad and Zoya together and who is he to stand on the way of destiny?

Siddiqui tearfully lets go and Zoya runs into Asad's arms. Asad sighs in relief as he finally has his Zoya with him and looks at Siddiqui giving him a reassuring smile that he will look after her no matter what. Siddiqui smiles back knowing no matter how much their families hate each other they will take care of his daughter and lets out some happy tears as Asad and Zoya walk out of his house hand in hand to live life with each other as you know what they say Zinda Rehti hai ASYA ki mohabbatein.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vah Halima, tere mein itna talent? Awesome SF yaar. Kya gaana choose kiya.
Voh music spam aakhir kaam aa hi gaya. :P
Do write more. ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it!! 😃
Great SF Hally!
Please write more 😛
Edited by Nisbahx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it hally

also add the DDLJ tune when gafoor leaves zoya's hand 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tell me first you will not end it abruptly 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahan!!!! That was the mohabatein version of Asya.. Asad has already been in Salman avatar for O O jane jana.. And I think he was perfect doing that. I loved him more then salman.. And, now if we get a shah rukh version of Asad that will be sone pe suhaaga.. Loved it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really loved it!😃Awesome SF hally!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Super story

Hally great job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome Hally. all the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
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musical it was..
lovely SF..
do write more..will be waiting

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