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Asad sat on his bed and thought to himself, "Maine Zoya se zyada Tanveer par bharosa kiya! Ye kaisi mohabbat thi meri jo main Zoya ke sach ko bhi pehchaan na paaya! I have to apologize for everything that I have done!" Just the words I wanted Asad to say always
He looked down guiltily and continued, "Actually ghalati meri hai. Bataya use jaata hai, jo sunne ke liye raazi ho! Main Tanveer ki chaal mein itna phas gaya tha! Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye ho kya raha hai!?" The words I was waiting to hear
He looked over at Zoya who looked at him. He spoke up, "Aapki hifaazat karna meri zimmedaari hai, jise main baar baar andheka karta raha! Uske liye main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga!" You blew my heart away
"Kya aap mujhse nikaah karengi? Kya aap apni poori zindagi mere saath rahengi?", asked Asad with a gentle smile and hope in his eyes.
She nodded in a 'yes' as a drop of tear made its way down her cheek. He removed the ring from his pocket and slipped it onto her finger.
She rose on her toes and placed a silent kiss on his cheek. He closed his eyes as he felt her soft petal like lips on his hard stubble cheek. She pulled away and her lashes fell. He pulled her into a tight hug never to let her go.A kiss... Can it get better??
"Allah Miya! What's wrong with you Mr. Khan? Aap blush kyun kar rahe hain?", she asked with a giggle. Typical AsYa
"Aapse naraaz hona chahu bhi to nahi ho sakta! Good Night!", he replied smiling at her. Oyye Hoyye *armaan style*
He closed his eyes waiting for her next move. She moved closer to him and rose on her toes. He could feel her warm breathe on his ear.
"I love you too!", she whispered. She dropped a quick peck on his cheek and ran away. He opened his eyes and saw Zoya inside her room peeking out to look at him. Zoya kissed Asad again... Looks like it just got better
He then gently moved in closer. Her lips quivered in anticipation as she felt his breathe over it. He gently brushed his lips against her and gently sucked her lower lip. She responded by sucking his upper lip. Her fingers ruffled through his hair and his hand were on her waist caressing it. They broke apart to take a breath and rested their foreheads together. They looked deep into each other's eyes. Zoya blushed and looked down.It turned the best 🤗
She looked up at him and replied, "Aapke muh se mera naam bohot achha sound karta hai!", and retreated to her room and so did he. They both stood at the door of their respective rooms.
"Waise main bhi apna naam sunna chahunga!", he said.
She smiled and said, "Asad!"
Asad blushed a little as Zoya threw him a flying kiss and shut the door. He smiled and walked into his with a feeling of contentment.It finally turned Perfect
"If you are rushing to find true love don't expect to find it. True love will find you, and grip you tight by your heart."This made it way beyond perfect
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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