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grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

really really good plzz do update soon!!

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@metoyou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Oh yes I remember this one. How could I forget such an amazingly beautifully written piece of work...👏

You are quite spot on with your thoughts about Mr. Khan's childhood.

I took up a job (DIlshaad ammi mentioned this right after the hook scene, that he used to help his mom with sewing clothes and all)

Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan would at least make a call to congratulate his oldest son on his achievement. Of course, he never called. (This has to be one of the most painful lines. The hope and deepness of this really touches my heart. No matter how brutally kids bully you, if a kid does not get the love and warmth of a parent, that will gonna hurt even more than all the bullying or hard times one has to face at school)

Don't know why, but now that I am reading it for the second time somehow it starts to make much more sense. I can feel the depth and pain of Mr. Khan about the pain and struggle he had in his childhood.

Thanks Di, thank you very much 😊

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

You are a gem sangeetha... Very beautiful start , loved the way how u explained y he has OCD, y he loves music and y he doesnt trust anyone :)

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awww di dis was so cute...i loved how to used little details in his childhood to explain his present behaviour especially how the stains anywhere remind him of his failure in his math test...

This was just beautiful di...the reason that he was so secluded and introvert was so painful...

And the description of the first time he saw zoya was just so so beautiful...and he thought he could never ever get a beautiful as her,well i guess destiny had a lot in store for him than he expected😊

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Di this is just BEAUTIFUL!!! Just marvelous!!! I love the way you described Asad's feelings!! Especially the part about Asad's desk and gym... awesome!!! Please make this an FF soon!!!

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Thank you all for your wonderful comments...u all are very very sweet and kind

Originally, when I had started writing this first person narration, I was planning to write it for both Asad and Zoya. This was way back in February. Unfortunately, after the slapgate, there were so many negative comments on ASAD that I abandoned the ff.

Perhaps, I might resume the ff after I have completed Faasle...let's see

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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Awesome...loved it... 😊

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

for some reasons i was quite restless today... this GHSP forum is my second home in this world... but this OS has relaxed me, it gave me peace... thnks 4 writing this one... i m grateful for it especially 2dy.. bye tk cr

krati

Edited by krati5 - 12 years ago