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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Here I was waiting for your update for months and now I got 2 back to back! 😃

Can't believe that Asad actually slapped her.. but she's acting like a haughty brat. She deserved it! Now would she plan to fool him by pretending to be in love with him?

If this was a novel it would have been a page turner! I'm again dying for the next update already. Can't wait to find out how their hatred will turn into love and what would make them separate then.

You're an amazing writer man! This is a genius plot! 👏 Thanks for the PM! 🤗

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Wow that was such a gripping update !

I loved Tanya the most 😳

Reason i share the same name 😆

Oh i loved that line of Edward Cullen and damon Salvatore !

Seriously asad is a mixture of these guys 😉

You got to continue soon

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

wow.. is zoya a -ve character in the start is it ?
the story is getting very interesting day by day

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

That was a wow update!!!

it was so damn intense!!!

Asad already assumed zoya is a liar when she told him her story...so he behaves like he does...arrogance!!...alright i get his point though i dont quite agree with it...

but zoya..seriously girl?!😲 she is way beyond asad in this matter...too arrogant! n that challenge...God she is gonna suffer alongside asad in this revenge game!🤢

btw...u wrote it in an awesome manner!!!👏

waiting for the next update!

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arorasurbhi

@arorasurbhi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Awesome update...
Asad is right zoya shouldn't her friends life in danger just because of her anger...
How is zoya going to take revenge from asad ...
Continue soon

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deziqt611

@deziqt611

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Such an intense chapter! I loved it! Can't wait for more!!!!

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Amazingly written...i js loved d way u moulded up d presnt n past ..esp d wrd monster
U r sch a lovely writter to read...pls dont leave d forum its a request

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Zoya is at d path of revenge interesting...

I loved d way tanya described SWOT omg she gave nt only a new name bt meaning also

I wld love to see zoya faroqui mre thn zoya siddiqui

Well update soon

N chnge it into a ss or ff in stead of ts

Thnks fr d pm

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

I can't contain my happiness on knowing ur
Continuing it. it's superb . The way it's shapinup
An extremly eduring one. Please continue
all ur story.

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nikki1810

@nikki1810

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

wow ur back with a bang. Ur updating frequently and m loving it. But i jst cant believe asad slapped zoya. I mean wat d hell. Seriously if someone had done that to me i would have killed him to death. No one on earth has dat right except for ur parents. I am sure zoya will make him pay, no matter if she falls for him later. Eagerly waiting for the next part.