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Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

Wonderful update dr!!!👏

quite unexpected nikhah...i must say bt i like it a lot!!!...i just hope ki zoya said Qubool Hai in all her hosh...its not khala wo said so...

i knw Asad loves her a lot..bt still!!!...🤔

u bring loads of twist n turns in the story n that super gr8!!!...it keeps the suspense n the essence of the story alive!!!...gr8 going dr!

Originally posted by: Enchantress

OMG OMG OMG.. Did you just update. You have no idea I was so scared you will not. But, when I saw the update I was jumping and bouncing. Thank you . Thanks a lot. You know incomplete stories hurt like hell. That is their in our mind for a life time. We keep thinking what would have happened in the story. You came back with a bang. Love it.

Dee

Originally posted by: AAK0007

Nice update. But i m confused how became zoya pregnent for 1 or 1/2 months. According to timeline the torture happend more than 20 days ago. Please clear this confusion. I m also confused about the characters now. In every update u enter a new character and i m realy unable to connect each other.If possible can u give now a rough character sketch.Please preety please if posssible ok. Nice that asya nikah happen and zoya is pregnent. But i have doubt is Zoya realy said Qubool Hai or khala said it.But i dont like zoya's pregnency now. I know this is needed for your upcoming track. But i think the child give slight pain to both asya. This always remember zoya that she became pregnent when asad forcefully sex with her. Which is sometime not give her peace because whenever she show the child, deep in her heart she remember that this child is not the symbol of their love. This is symbol of asad's torture on her. Similarly asad also remember that in which circumstances he impregnate zoya. He remember that due to his torture she is pregnent. Which is also give asad a bad taste in future. He whenever watch the child deep in his heart he felt a slight pain that what he done with zoya. So i think if you dont make zoya pregnet toh jyada better hota. And i want due to any reason Zoya lost this child.Because i think when ASYA sort out all their problems and full in love with each other and trust each other this is the time for Zoya's pregnency. because this reminds them that this is the symbol of their love, not symbol of torture. So i realy hope u make it this way. Please dont mind. this is entirely my POV. And one thing i m realy very bad in words so ignore my mistakes please.Thanks for pm and update next part soon.

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

or log mujhe pagal bolte hai🤣🤣🤣🤣 ayra aaloo..fimmy ka comment padh..i actually rofled on it🤣🤣

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

🤣🤣🤣🤣

I swear Partnal ka comment WAS XAAACTLYYY XAAACTLY... WT HAPPENED WID ME...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I don knw kya likha tha tune wo KAKA ya pta ni jo b tha..😕🤣🤣

I read it 10 TIMES ... tryng figuring it out k wo actually hai kya!!! 😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Irisville

it was awesome finally zoya talked loveed it waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

yes he is important member😆

exactly...see i m so proud of u..aani..SAW tu dono ko😛 meri taraf se😆

shukriya..my personal touch in prayer

yes nuzat loved her sister

sabar rrakh beta...gaffur or rose ki khichdi sulaj jayegi...

chotu tha../*(faints*

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

it confirms ke m crazy🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

ye reply kaha se aa gaya?😕😆

oh ye to last updt k hai I gues..😃😆

yeah I gt 2 knw his importance...😡😆

xactly 4 wt?😕😆

ohh proud of me..😳😆 thaankooo 😳😆

dono ko chida ri hai...?🤣🤣

tuje faint hone ka bohot SHUAQ HAI... ni??😆