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Originally posted by: princeegoyal
hey good one..cn i say i one think if u don't mind...pls put sm space...shw conversation...there ws no comma, or words space..pta hi nhi chal rha tha kab kaun kya baat kr rha hain..dubara padhna paad rha tha...pls bura maat manana...its a beautiful new story..& as a friend i told u...
good going..let c hw asad take cr of her..pari
thanks ...
yaa i make sure that space between conversation woh edite karte samye sayd kuch gadbad ho gyi hogi next update mai mai dhyana dungi...ohk ohk i make clear...are nhi its ohk...
thanks for ur lovely comment
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