UPDATED! TS: The Adamant Couple (Last Part Page 4)

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

This TS was amazing

I could see a Harry Potter fan like me in you

AsYa rocked to the core

It was so amazing

A perfect piece of work

Thx for the pm

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mamta swaika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

*sigh* Can I just say that was beautiful? Although, I am pretty much sure you already know that. Anyways, I LOVE the humourous-fights-infused-with-intelligent-sarcasm romance you present. IT was fantabulous. You really should write more often. !
I LOVE IT !

P.S There was one place where when Zoya finds out Asad is Fatima's date, you wrote Khushi instead of Zoya.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

@..Shweta..

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: nikki.171
*sigh* Can I just say that was beautiful? Although, I am pretty much sure you already know that. Anyways, I LOVE the humourous-fights-infused-with-intelligent-sarcasm romance you present. IT was fantabulous. You really should write more often. !
I LOVE IT !

P.S There was one place where when Zoya finds out Asad is Fatima's date, you wrote Khushi instead of Zoya.

I'm glad you liked it! And thanks! I shall go discreetly fix it, lol.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I liked the fact that it was short and sweet !!

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

this was amazing...i loved how zoya and asad were constantly mocking and pulling each other's leg...so ayaan finally got his wish fulfilled zoya kissed asad😳

loved it